Theosophic~Truth vs VIvID
 

Battle Rules:

5 barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


VIvID spits first

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-26-04 at 02:52 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

VIvID has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 02:55 PM.

Theosophic~Truth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 03:00 PM.

1 bar = 2 lines
took me 10 minutes to write sumthin quick! it was supposed to be due today..........


sit back,ur wack infact in this battle what do i have 2 gain
when a kid steals part of his alias.. fr a Cosby sons name
refraine from strainin i do it 4 fun while ur tryin to gain wealth
eva since u got ur ribs ramoved u seem to be so full of urself
its bad for ya health to throw blows n make no connections
...since u get down on more poles then broke ass politcions
admittin it dog ppl couldnt feel ur text if it came packaged in brail
& if ya eva had a good train of thought.. it was obviously de railed
inhale tha aroma a burnt mc, wait a second u cant so y boast..
only thing that kid ever burnt was fries & the occasional slice of toast

~Blah~


blurred vision should be his name, this battle is obsurd
calling his self vivid......
........probably doesnt know the meaning of the word
another simple herb, HA! destined for an easy defeat
he's better off tryna geta suicide bomber 2 run and retreat
soon to be thought of as a reject from rapverse.com
but which is the truth, am I king or is he just a pawn
see the first ones right but the seconds not wrong
and I'd say you were better, but that would be a con
see he lacks a strong heart, and yes we all knew it
I'd ask for his help with my style but.........
..........mother said stay away from a bad influence

~1~

supposed to be due that day yet ya post 2 days later? ah well sall good

uppin for votes

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once again uppin this battle c'mon some real votes plz !

Voted For: VIvID

yo,
this was a gud battle
TT-i was feelin your verse, the stucture of it was gud, the punchlines were ok, but they lacked the creativity that vivid put in his. it was a gud verse though, no hate.

V-your verse was gud, the structure was gud, it flowed well, the punchlines slightly edged it over, TT's.there was one line that i thought didnt really rhyme that well though:
"its bad for ya health to throw blows n make no connections
...since u get down on more poles then broke ass politicions". it was a gud verse. did it really take u 10 mins 2 write that though?!
Vivid jus slightly takes this, because of his better use of creativity in punchlines. but it was close, both had a gud verse.

appreciate the vote, and yup it literally takes me about 10 minutes to key a battle i never prewrite unless maybe im in a league for a title and i have the time, i only battle when im bored in all honesty.....

1-0

Voted For: Theosophic~Truth

Vivid - yo shit was aight...
tha punches were pretty decent & landed...
tha flow & structure was nice...and the vocab
was okay too..but overall decent verse hea...

T~T - nice shit too...tha punches were hard &
landed...tha structure was aight...and the flow
was pretty decent in this battle..overall yo shit
came forth just a little tho...

This was feedback posted for VIvID
 

You keep sayin your dope and get title shots on other boards. battle someone dope so we can see what your about, then tryout for The Council

uppin once again c'mon been weeks vote n close the battle

honest break down votes are a must

Voted For: VIvID

all together vivid had a good flow and rhyme through the whole verse he composed and good punches...Theosphic truth talked too much and didnt focus on the punches or flow...he tried to teach a lesson but it wasnt there

Voted For: Theosophic~Truth

Ite man the structures were both tight, and there wasnt much between em. The only reason theosophic took this was because he had better punches, which always rocks da tides^^. neither of u r elevated yet but ya both coming strong. Keep it up ite. praise!!. p.s if ya want da breakdown den pm me