Banks vs Lethal Lunatic
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R
*Explained/honest votes only*

this bitch is gonna say i'm gay but then vote for me then want it removed, tired of these herbs wanting beef, time to silence this faggot

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-25-04 at 07:28 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

Lethal Lunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 04:33 PM.

Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 04:40 PM.

uppin for honest explained votes peeps

Voted For: Lethal Lunatic

my vote goes to LL due to his punches being harder... i notice that you rusty as fuck since you came back... you needa get your shit back man

Banks-your shit was okay but the links really killed you... links are out dated as fuck and aint noone use them in battles anymore man

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Voted For: Banks

Banks got my vote
Explanation:
Banks came harder with his flow and he had a good structure his punches was tight Meta's dam old boy always got some hot Meta's he hade a grip of personals in there which i thought was tight kids flow was good and came fresh and hard

so ya career is done like the future of illegal immigrants caught by feds
this kids ego is probably really overwhelming, knock him down a few notches
but lethal showing any skills is like arm amputee's wearing two watches

Sick Line Kid^^^

Lethal:
lines was good came pretty hard decent structure kid good flow good personals flow was tight but Banks came harder and had some good shit

No Hate Big Up's Both Yall

one

your a d/r i think cause you voted on almost all of the battles I checked of Banks but I dont got good proof so w/e uppin

i ain't got no d/r's, i hate when peeps get mad cause they get a vote against him, we uppin for this

we uppin for honest explained votes peeps

I aint piss if I was I would've tried to d/q that vote but I dont do that thats being a pussy

uppin for honest explained votes peeps

uppin for explained votes only

uppin for explained vote and no d/rs

uppin for some fucking honest explained votes peeps

Voted For: Banks

imma give this to eye:

lethal lunatic: ya structure was good. flow was umm ok. ya had some pretty weak attempts at punches. also when i started reading the G-G-G-G line, i thought u might of finished it off well. but again a weak attempt at a personal.
I think you need to work on ya wordplay n metas too. i dunno if you were tryna do sumfin with tha chokehold line. it could of bin wprded better to make a successful meta. no hate.

Eyedentikal: ok nice structure, almost perfect. nice punches. you had alot of metas here too. really nice ones:-
i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets
^nice metas...
links were usefull too. although i would try to cut them out in battles. 1 or 2 maybe but don't go over the top. Just a thought. but its your verse.

Ok imma giving this to eye for harder punches and better usage of metas.

Vote: eye

Return tha favour please.

Voted For: Banks

Sortin it out...

i don't know why were even battling i guess ya attempting to match wits
i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets
^^^ One of my favorite verses. a lot of wordplay and good vocab. Metas were good, i didn't see any multis. Punches landed and persoanls were good if you check the linkss. 8/10

Fuck Banks, I’m a young buck; just 12 years old
Like a choke hold, now you wit no throat all cold
^^It show taht your young. No good metas at all, the second line sounds a lot like a verse from d12. No multis that were good. That and that don't count as a multi. FLow was good.
5/10


Return the favor

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do you even get the whole line wit bucks and young buck

young buck= young thug/ and the member of g unit
Banks= him and the member of g-unit bitch

This was feedback posted for Banks
 

Speaking of forced wordplay to the max..

Lmao.. Wow.

Voted For: Banks

Lethal Lunatic’s Verse
This worthless punk ass bitch trying to flick me off
Pussy, trying to be hard so he tries to walk how G’s walk
^nice openor

G-G-G-G, why you stuttering are you scared
So if you’re a pussy put ya hands in the air
^lol…nice 1

Fuck Banks, I’m a young buck; just 12 years old
Like a choke hold, now you wit no throat all cold
^…ok…

Damn dawg wen will ya get it, ya fucking worthless
The heat I pack is powerful and you’re just hurt less
^haha….NO

So fuck it I’ll cast slap, this rookie and leave the past back
My wordplay who has that?, no one should ask that
^pretty decent

Will you die or ride, on the G side, or just hide
Cuz I know deep down inside, you’re a pussy in and outside
^…okay hea too…

Rookie of September thats bullshit cuz ya rhymes is wack
Cuz every time you take 1 step front, you take 3 steps back
^decent closer

Banks’ Verse
kid nobody feels ya like paralysis victims recieving lethal injections
u could be the child of a minister or jesus and still not see perfection
^nice opener

i thought i recognized ya, this kid is the band-aid off nelly's cheek
ll u wouldn't get noticed even if u had laryngitis and attempted to speak
^nice punch

u probably use to racking up wins by several battles with disqualifications
a funeral? he's gonna die cause my bars run him over like vice city hatians
^haha…anotha nice punch hea too

this kids gonna say i'm gay but vote for me and then want the vote taken
does anyone wanna see a pic of lethal go look at the sig made by forsaken
^decent

i don't know why were even battling i guess ya attempting to match wits
i'm about to tear ya verse cause it says---rip here like ketchup packets
^pretty nice hea too

ya career seems to be falling quicker then 80 yr old men running marathons
and u beating me is just like chemotherapy patients going to hair salons
^an ‘okay’ punch hea…

come on now stop it, this boys must be a fag cause he stalks my threads
so ya career is done like the future of illegal immigrants caught by feds
^pretty nice punch hea

this kids ego is probably really overwhelming, knock him down a few notches
but lethal showing any skills is like arm amputee's wearing two watches
^nice closer


Overall
Banks took this one…
Just had harder punches than
L.L. …had a better flow & all…
But mostly Banks gets my vote
Cuz he had harder punches than
L.L. …Pz

you a bitch you changed everything after I spit my verse where is ya sig where is ya title i dissed you on and you are wack you biatch

Voted For: Banks

i voted for this dude cuz his verse was set up superbly and he just had better lyrics