Two_Bit vs Zack T
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-28-04 at 06:36 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Two_Bit has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 06:37 PM.

Zack T has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 06:39 PM.

I'm getting freakin ticked off at the message length stuff here...15 character minimum, and 50 max or something is what it's trying to do right now? Or maybe I'm being stupid. Either way, good luck.

Here we go ya'll, and I'm out on the prowl
Who in the hell is wantin' a piece of me now?
How does it feel to get your jaw piece smacked up
Fuck around with me and your ass gets tore up
Scott's your real name, and this is what I'm thinkin
You waltz around your house in yo' underwear, stinkin
Peekin in on your little bro takin a shower,
Runnin around the neighborhood offerin your flower
To anyone who that'll step up and take you in
Gettin under more clothes than a fuckin manequin
Don't think I'm hatin on gays, because you know I'm not
Now come on little man and show me whatchu got

Ya know i luv ya zack, gl

well lets get this straight for you and me
here i am, battling this fool named zack t
just hearing his name makes me think of pee
should i use the ak? nah, i'll use the uzi
backin' up da truck *beep beep beep*
where would he be, the hair salon maybe
or maybe at a gay bar mackin a dude named "deedee"
damnit man, there you are, my gun to your face
you holdin ya hands up saying 'pleeeez pleeez"
BANG there ya go, you wanted to be a G

Voted For: Two_Bit

yo, 2bit's flow is betta then zack t's, and he's gay, dnt spit about little boyz, wtf is wrong wit u son?

uppin this shizniz

yo

bahaha @ little boys

Alot is wrong with me. As for flow, when I say it out loud, it works just fine. That's the problem with keystyling, don't know how the flow really sounds because you can't really express when you say stuff slow or fast or put emphasis on certain words or syllables.

But I respect your vote and opinion and all that, I personally agree, I suck. But I try ;)

Anyone else gonna vote? It'd be kinda nice of you.

Voted For: Zack T

Here to smear this shit...

well lets get this straight for you and me
here i am, battling this fool named zack t
^^Best line. No punches all bout gays n whack rhyming scheme. Pee? Uzi? DeeDee? Not a decent punch buried in that bullshit. 2/10

To anyone who that'll step up and take you in
Gettin under more clothes than a fuckin manequin
^6Best line. punches landed a little. Most were fucked. Flower? Get some new shit. better flow n vocab anyway
4/10

Ya'll got some potential, elevate.

Return da favor. in ma sig>

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Voted For: Zack T

wow...this was by-far probably the worst battle I have ever seen on this site...Both need SERIOUS elevation...but, Im gonna vote for zack t...what the hell kinda name is zack t for a rapper?? lol...ne wayz...he had hella weak punches, but the other muther fucker didnt have any...hey...atleast zacks shit flowed somewhat ok...so...U get my vote...But you both need to elevate...ALOT!!!...1

Voted For: Two_Bit

vote goes to Two_Bit
Zack T ...yo drop was kinda wack...both of you..
stretch ur lines out a little more..but anyway...
Zack T yo punches were pretty weak & you
need to elevate more...but this is ur 1st battle
tho so..okay...Two_Bit yo shit was no betta tho
punches came just like 1.5 points harder than..
Zack T..but ur flow & everything was aight tho..

elevate more...both of you..

Pz.

yeah, zack is actually my homy :P. this wasnt meant to be a serius battle guys, agreed by both of us on aim.. ya'll can give contrsructive critism anyday tho. thx 4 votes.

Voted For: Two_Bit

sadly this was a weak battle N ya both on the same level...

but i think two-bit came a little bit more RAW nither had punches, both flow the same creativeness i think two_bit just EDGE it.. RAWNESS two_bit...

no quoteable from each battler but i felt TWO-BIT came harder..

Voted For: Zack T

gotta give this ta zack t
personals were alot better and actually had punchlines in his flo. 2bit was more of tellin a story, which is coo, but isnt good for a battle. so dis goes ta zack, nice battle!
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Voted For: Zack T

aii now im not Tryin To B Funny But twobit'z verse seemed Sort of Basic Dint it? No Offense but When Compared to ZT's verse ya verse seemed basic o missin somethin I dunno the punches n stuff it all goes to ZackT no offence I know I sound rude but 2bit Never let Ya gaurd Down plz Bcuz Thats when you get hit the hardest
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A Mayne Can Yall Do Me A Favor And Vote In My Battles I only HAve two and I only need one vote to win In one of em i cant rember But Yall check Dat out i Mean I took The Time to vote N Ya Battle You should Do the same for Me plz
Thanx

This was feedback posted for Zack T
 

good lord, are you guys serious?
both of you were horrible, and zack man are you gay? if your gay then why are dissin on gays? wow...
ok and two_bit wtf were you thinkin when writin this battle?
"his name makes me think of pee" jesus christ are we back in elementary school??
both of you were bad, real bad, you both really really need to elevate...

This was feedback posted for Zack T
 

ok......im speechless wen i saw dis battle. the winner was me cause i dont think any of you guys pulled out any really gud lines. dis is gonna be a hard one to vote for a winner cuase it was more of a tie 0-0 (winner is me)

This was feedback posted for Two_Bit
 

checking polls ..

Voted For: Zack T

lmao lmfao...ya'll both suck ass...well i thought i'd tell ya...lets see here.....both of you need to get a life and get away from rapp...iight!!! lol this battle was funny as hell....but overall This Zack T wins this shit....lol he had better vocab....funny as shit tho