RED BEAM vs LyricalDon
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

100 to vote

verse due in hr...i might haf'to bounce

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-25-04 at 08:53 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 08:24 PM.

LyricalDon has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 08:25 PM.

Exposin mothafuckas callin him fake, make him curse and shout,
and once the word is out, ima pull an Inc and take the Murda out,
When the 4-4 pop out it blows out ya brains, ya cant keep ya cool,
cuz the shells come from taco bell, they been trained to leave ya full,
Wit text you a maggot at best when lyrically fightin,
I'ma break this Disney emcee, You wont "Remember The Titan,"
you rusty son, like single ugly chicks your rhymes are out of date,
and they aint spittin anythin relevant, they all just LOUD and FAKE,
Got the feds lookin for me cuz i been doin all of these horrendous things,
leavin this MC lookin like one of them things outta lord of da rings,
Put my blade to ya throat, raise it up, now im makin ya wig split,
You dickrydin the cops to death, now you really playin with PIGSKIN,
My lead'll draw on ya face, flip it around, erasin your hair and neck,
you'd think i was from boston with the way that i VARITEK'S (vary techs),


wha ya want some more hol on


i cant believe this dike spoke//
his moms told me his whole life, for a nick to put in her pipe and smoke//
she said his dad aint accept'em, when she told'em she was pregnant he LAUGHED thats how i know ya LIFES A JOKE//
thru school his self esteem stayed down//
and you'd think ASHTON was in his CLASS the way he got PUNKED ON THE PLAY GROUND// haha!

aight..check it

look kid ur wack, ur not a man, ur a bitch
u dont wear boxers, cause u aint got the balls to make em fit
dont be ridiculous, ur nuthin but a un-welcomed guest
even if u sneezed in church, u still wouldnt be blessed
im too hardcore for this, lyrical don? thats a fib
since u cant spit, u drool and get it all over yo bib
call ur-self jungle, but ur nuthin but a garden to me
i flash quick like cameras, im who u tryin to be
RED light means stop, its dangerous if u keep goin
even if u was a steam i dont think you'll still be flowin
i'll make u throw up when i hit u in yo big ass gullet (stomach)
i'll name u JOE, put u in the DIRT, then disconnect yo MULLET
(head)
disagree with me, im devoted to spitting these bars
collect u like a bug, ur another win in my jar

uppin need some votes come on

uppppn this battleeeeeeeeee

Voted For: RED BEAM

red beam came harder with alot more meatas and better wordplay it remined me of that nas song u wanna be me not sayin u bite but thats shit was tight good shit

uppin need some votes

good lookn on that vote homie...i'll return a HONEST vote in one of ur battles...uppn on this, whoever post in here, imma return a HONEST vote on one of yall battles, ya feels

upping this battle again....

uppin need votes lets go

uppn bitches.....ya heard...get in here and vote on these raps

uppin need some votes holla at ya boy lets go

uppppppnnnnnnnn thissssssss shitttttttttttttt

Voted For: RED BEAM

RB took it...

Multies: Lyricaldon
structure:RB
wordplay:RB
flow:RB
punches:RB

Lyricaldon tried too hard...
RB...came hella hard...betta punches...funny shit...good battle verse...

Voted For: LyricalDon

vote lyrical don
your lines seemed stretched but alot of punches i saw.
nice wordplay man. i like that.
red you had a good verse but not good enuff wordplay. improve.
peace and return an honest vote on my battles.
vote=LyricalDon.

uppn for more votes my people...too many battles gettn slept on. this one been up for like 3 weeks, and just yesterday we got our second vote. not even gravy...lets get more votes on this

This was feedback posted for RED BEAM
 

just checking your shit out, looking for some new talent

C'mon With These Votes....lets Get Some More In Here....

need more votes bitches....LETS GOOO

Voted For: RED BEAM

This in my opinion goes to red beam. This battle made me think a lot and i like both verses, both came wit very different styles. I like Red Beam's kause his opening and his closer was good, he had nice punches. Lyrical Don on tha otha hand, had an ok opener and his closer was stretched but it was funny though, *props on that* had a number of punches, but some were predictable, othas were basic and the rest hit red beam, but not hard enough.

I hope both of u exceed wit ur rhymes, both r good, juss keep it up Lyrical
no beef, juss my *opinion*

good lookn on that vote...lets get somemore votes in here bitches

tryna see my fuckn name, at the top of these charts/niggas better vote on this, 'fore i "choke em" like "bart"/(simpsons)....lets get some votes in here. 4 real

man...im getn tired of seeing the same thing...uppn this battle people

uppn...this been up for years///well weeks, but still. i return all honest votes

don? u wunna close this or wut? its been up for a while...uppn this

uppn..this is by far the longest i ever had a battle up...almost a month now...lets go people

uppin thsi once again...if this is still up by next week, imma get this closed, im gettn tired of this, i need to go battle some other peoople

Voted For: RED BEAM

red beam had a betta flow and structure,both had evenly good punches.but i felt that the mom jokes that don was saying was corny and played.and he used weak personals.red beam came pretty neutral thru the whole verse,like he wasnt bad nor good in it,it was average yet it had a sense of wittyness to it that stood out more than dons verse.close battle but my vote goes to..............

imma up this, and i want this put away...

uppn this ish again...its going on a month that this has been up, and only 4 votes..c'mon people...yall on here all day, wake up

Voted For: RED BEAM

i'll make u throw up when i hit u in yo big ass gullet (stomach)
i'll name u JOE, put u in the DIRT, then disconnect yo MULLET
^nice.. rofl, creative...

look kid ur wack, ur not a man, ur a bitch
u dont wear boxers, cause u aint got the balls to make em fit
dont be ridiculous, ur nuthin but a un-welcomed guest
even if u sneezed in church, u still wouldnt be blessed
^ur first bars owned him off bat... this was an aight battle, but u came harder, this should be a TKO.. good luck u too, but Red Beam took this with personals, punches, but u need sum better metas and wordplay..
get at me
pz..