RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Textual Releases (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=5)
-   -   ????????? (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157387)

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 09:32 AM

Been CRazy
 
you really thought a nicca like me would get laced
go ahead stand there lookin' red in the face
u didn't know.....i'm like thirty dirty three eights
lyrical murder victims i create never hesitate
i'm fukin' wit them heavy weights
i make mental states levitate
i got crooked niccas runnin straight
skeered and no debate no time to conversate
while this creative mind operates fools retaliate
crews i annihalate lyricly violate
ya whole demo tape,ya runny flows i desicate
u talk a lot and still ain't got shit ta' say
like frito lays,i can't never just eat one
make mc's feel da heat from this risin' sun
wit loaded guns my squads be da only ones
blessed wit golden tongues from young
oppositions duck taped at the ankles,
neck strangled body mangled beef is handled
fuk a scandle or how they scrap wit they pits an' bats
i'm swift wit gats how u gon' feel wit' live grenades in ya lap.


**since i was born i had screws loose,
while u looked at blues clues,
da streets was teachin me how to bruise crews
**i stayed wit' da duce-duce,
still stay wit da duce,duce,
(leavin' holes in dese niccas)
they followed dey nose to dese bullets like fruit loops

i got no love for most of these so called thugs
i bang for da cause but don' fuk wit crips n bloods
my heart is frigid,feel da frost when i dip,dodge n' pivit
lifes been hard, u couldn't get God to live it
can't tell who da friends is,nicca's see bars and be singin'
fear in dey hearts they don't wanna get scar'd up in prison
death to dese snitches tellin' for less time on dey sentence
den get home and boast 'bout how much dey been benchin'
i leave niccas limpin' like dey name was orange juice simpson
i was trained by experts in da way dat da tek works
put it to his chest,yet da back of neck worst
clap(brrrrrrrrrraaatttttttt)fuk tryin' to gain his respect first
fist fights i don't do,promised never to exert
though i'm good wit'da' hands and ive mastered da leg work
why tire myself out when i can just make ya head burst

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 12:05 PM

gimme sum feed back on this one.

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 12:27 PM

can i get some feedback people.

TuNiT 10-26-04 12:29 PM

nobody gone give chu feed cuz u r whacked! u da lil ho who diss me aint u???????? lets battle or sumthin biatch!!!

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 12:34 PM

u still alive.they let u out da protect a rapper program.fuk off wit' dese bullshit messages.if u gone dis me post ya shit and quit wit the small talk.u and this other guy wit da fukin messages.like i told ur girlfriend do u.

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 01:30 PM

kananiccagitsumfeedbak?????

Lil C 10-26-04 02:03 PM

dis is da bomg!! damn boi u got some mad ass talent..he sounds betta ova da phone..lol im 4 real tho he got da voice 4 dis shit...u should get at me bout da record deal shit im sure id interscope would b glad to sign u to their record label....GOOD piece all out tho..much luv...10/10..keep da hottness up

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 03:34 PM

good lookin' lilc. i appreciate the love.more feeds please.

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 05:23 PM

feedbak wanted.

Loveliss Grandz 10-27-04 03:12 PM

can i get some feedbak on this somebody?

OrEo da cookie 10-27-04 03:17 PM

decent drop yo, you a cool emcee,
get at mine

Loveliss Grandz 10-27-04 03:26 PM

thanx for da feedbak oreo.more feedbak ppl.

Loveliss Grandz 10-27-04 05:17 PM

cccccaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnn iiiiiiiii ggggggggeeeeeeeeettttt ssssssooooooooommeeeeeeeee ffffffffeeeeeeeeeeedddddddddd bbbbbaaaakkkkkkkkkk?

Loveliss Grandz 10-29-04 12:56 PM

Can I Get Sum Feedbak?

Loveliss Grandz 11-02-04 04:26 PM

uuuupppppppppppppnnnnnnnnnnnn......

Loveliss Grandz 11-03-04 05:41 PM

uppn dis shit.................

Inception 11-03-04 05:48 PM

u know when u are the only 1 postin in thiz thread u should go head an let thiz piece slip off to the last page nigga

not good at all in thiz 1

Kawn Flixx 11-03-04 06:04 PM

na this was pretty good though..
you seem like a reallygood rapper.props nigga


B.K.+Chicago=Best of Both Worlds

5MICMEDALLION 11-04-04 12:18 PM

Yo,,,yall got to stop sleeping on this flow,,,
Yall acting like it's aight or its ok,,fuck that shit,,its hot and yall know so show it.
Daum if i can call it like it is why cant yall instead of half way feeding a brother ?
fuck that shit give the whole fucking dinner to him,,,he earned it,,,,
daum i could see if he couldnt write, but he can so please drop some feed on this one,,, :thumbup:
Yo hommie they know you hot,,just keep writting,,but dont waist your flows until you get enough feed on this one,,,then post again
that way they can all get a chance to read what you got,,
but give feed to those who gave you,,
those who didnt, dont give them shit until they give,, :nono:
because if your flow is at the top they should give feed before they drop one,,
so why not give feed to the flow at the top one then you give them feed on theres in return,,,,People if yall can understand that then it wouldnt be any problems with feed back,,but instead all yall just want to post post and post,,but ask for feed an not giving it,,,,daum show some love on this shit please,,,,it want hurt to atleast try
I give it a 9-10 because your a hot writter an i can see that from here
and so can they so stop sleeping on this an give it a chance 1
God bless all :thumbup:

Loveliss Grandz 11-04-04 02:05 PM

nuff said..............
good look "5".........

intensify effect 11-04-04 09:11 PM

hot drop yet again...

good flow creativeness was good all around tight drop fam holla...

8.5 outta 10....

yea yea V.T ya herd...

BANG-BANG-EARLY...

Loveliss Grandz 11-05-04 09:04 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Inception
u know when u are the only 1 postin in thiz thread u should go head an let thiz piece slip off to the last page nigga

not good at all in thiz 1


"what does one reply to something like that^^^?"
"ohh...i know................. :thefinger !

Loveliss Grandz 11-05-04 09:11 AM

:shoot: Violent TYpe.................... :shoot:

I.E.,i see you droppin' feeds up there.good lookin' fam.

JJFLOWSUM_5 11-05-04 09:30 AM

ey yo dat was nice man dat was hott keep
goin man u had hella wordplay dat was nice

Loveliss Grandz 11-05-04 09:54 AM

thanx for da feedbak hommie.
appreciate it.
upppppppppnnnnnnnnnnn............

Artik Phrost 11-05-04 11:31 AM

i was feeling this...you got an audio to it?...if you was keepin it real in tha drop..you got mad props comming from me...this was hot...keep it cummin yo...

Loveliss Grandz 11-05-04 04:16 PM

REAL=I CAN'T DO NUTHIN' BUT SPEAK WHAT I LIVE THRU,DID AND GOT DUNN.THATS THE BEAUTY OF LIFE,BEIN' ABLE TO TELL ABOUT IN ANY WAY OR FORM.

thanx for the feed A.P. I was feelin ur drop too.
uupppppppppnnnnnnn it.


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:35 AM.