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Barburyin 10-26-04 03:12 PM

CeRtIfIeDtHuG vs VIvID
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-29-04 at 03:12 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 10-26-04 03:12 PM

CeRtIfIeDtHuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 03:12 PM.

System 10-27-04 01:07 PM

VIvID has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 01:07 PM.

Barburyin 10-27-04 04:52 PM

member u post first

Barburyin 10-27-04 09:46 PM

iight man her it goes its plain n simple/
i ma spit des lyrics so hard n fill ya head n pop it like a pimple/
im comin like a gat ta ya dome bout ta blast/
when i come threw ya block im defeatin u fast/

u aint worth my time u jus a newb/
u got betta luck seein sum boobs/
nvm sry man silly fagget dicks r for chicks/
so bak up off my nuts n if u wanna see a man naked go see ya dad n take sum pics/

so far ur record 0-0/
but o well sumtymes u just gotta let it go/
yall feelin my lyrics as i spit em/
il b like a kid at a street fight n just hit em/*

iight man like jada i just knocked u the fuck out/
now remba next time u challenge me u kno wat im all about/////

*at street fights kids screamin hit em

Barburyin 10-28-04 03:36 PM

u gon drop ya verse?????

VIvID 10-29-04 04:20 AM

Blah took me like 15 mins... jus posted so i wouldnt no show cuz i prolly wouldnt of gotten around to it durin the weekend!

.......
Lemme pop ya ego, watch it dispurse
Kid's stuck in
Kindergarden, too scared 2 go first
wuts worss, his verse ? or battles of the past
He's the only...
MC I know in a 1 man race that could finish last
a blood bath in another words a quick slaughter
since im son'n..
u so bad i suppose that makes me ur father?
water must be an inspiration for most ya raps
the last thing..
he flowed smoothly came with a turn of taps
wants ta go toe to toe wut ya thinkin rambo
i got my boots...
laced an your still rockin the flip flop sandles
half assin against u why should i try yo?
ya punches hit..
so much i thought u were practisin tie bo
hell even jus droppin the bar minamal
when it comes..to u seems to be over-kill

VIvID 10-29-04 04:23 AM

uppin for sum votes............................................. ......yesum

Barburyin 10-29-04 06:50 AM

iight comon yall uppin for sum votes.............

Barburyin 10-30-04 09:03 PM

iight uppin for votes in here!!!!

Parallel 10-31-04 01:24 PM

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

certifiedthug:
meh you got this alright attemts to punches good stucture i guess flwoed welll you no what i mean...



ViVed:
meh you came weak bad stucture but it flowed good...punches were weak nothing else to say realy

return favour here:
on my battle verse oreo you'll see it sry i ahve no link

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VIvID 11-01-04 10:20 PM

lol must be an alias ^^^ cuz yeeeah not even gonna say it
uppin

Barburyin 11-02-04 09:55 AM

iight uppin for dis battle.....

Barburyin 11-03-04 03:26 PM

comon tryin ta get sum votes uppppiiiiinnnnnnnn

VIvID 11-03-04 10:25 PM

Uppin

an to the kid who said sumthin about my structure u must be dumb because my lines are shorter or the same length as everyone else's its just u cant be that sharp to catch on if u want i can put the style that EVERYONE else on the net uses...

Lemme pop ya ego, watch it dispurse
Kid's stuck in
Kindergarden, too scared 2 go first

^^^ this is the same as that below

Lemme pop ya ego, watch it dispurse
Kid's stuck in Kindergarden, too scared 2 go first

Barburyin 11-04-04 04:00 PM

iight comon uppin for votes in this!!!!

New Meth0d 11-04-04 04:08 PM

Voted For: VIvID

no offence but this battle was weak................
vivid -half assin against u why should i try yo?
ya punches hit..
so much i thought u were practisin tie bo
you were complimentin him .................lmao

both of ya structure was horrible.........

but ima have to give this battle to vivid he had one solid
punch

water must be an inspiration for most ya raps
the last thing..
he flowed smoothly came with a turn of taps

that was it ^^^^also you had the soning you one which wsnt that good

certified thug-structure was bad it threw ya flow off.....not very creative or complex with ya verse.......you didnt have any reall good punches.....elevat keep battlin

v/vivid

New Meth0d 11-04-04 04:10 PM

hit my link up in my sig..........................

~Luciano~ 11-04-04 04:27 PM

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

Viv
ya structure was fucked ya punches werent hittin and ya personals were damn near existint and ya meta's werent there
ya verse was kinda blah
u gotta work on makein it more consistent and ya punches harder and use some similies

Certified
ya structure was hella fucked
ya meta's were ok
but ya personals werent hitting hard enough
u had the slighter harder verse here
overall u got the win due 2 a lil harder punches


Hands Down

Barburyin 11-06-04 10:31 AM

iight uppin for votes in here...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

I.D. 11-06-04 01:02 PM

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

ehh.....weak battle very weak but breakdown

punchez - CT (harder punchez)
flow - vivid (both flowz messed tho)
structure - CT (barz relative lenght)
vocab - CT (barely any vocab in this battle)
multiz - no1

ehhh....like i said weak battle but CT got this barely got this but yeah vote goes 2 CT

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Delicious_Muffin 11-06-04 01:24 PM

Voted For: VIvID

Few reasons why vivid getting my vote.

Ive heard Silly fagget chicks r for dicks like too much its a pointless line...Nice punchlines certified thug but not enuff to win this. Vivid nice punch line, nice first battle.

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Katastrofe 11-06-04 05:51 PM

Voted For: VIvID

Yeah I like your delivery, and punchlines. In my eye, you ripped em'. His structure and rhymes were garbage, and his sounds like a wack Dr. Suess
Nice win son.

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Barburyin 11-08-04 09:15 PM

iight yall uppin for votes in this

th-C 11-08-04 10:49 PM

Voted For: VIvID

certified
seemed like a freshly noob written verse.. you need to purely elevate through experience.. theres no doubt you lost this one, try to be more complex and think of better lines, even if it take you more time.

Vivid
basically your first bar took it.. everything was well consistent.. the structure is meh, but overall I felt your verse was more complete and hard hitting.. giving you the win.

Please return the favor and hit up any battle currently in sig.

Red Stroke 11-09-04 09:32 PM

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

Certified Thug:
Explanation:
His Punches Was Harder I See It He Came With A Good Flow But Vivid Got Tha FLow Cuzz It Was Better Structure Was Certified Relivated Vocabulary I Would Say Certified But There Wasnt That Much Good Vocab In Here AlTogether Word Up
Nobody Really Had Meta's Or Multi's Personals Naww

Vote Certified

Red Stroke 11-09-04 09:35 PM

P.S.
Return Tha Favor And Drop An Honest Vote On Me Vs Paradox

Barburyin 11-10-04 09:31 PM

iight thanx for the votes still uppin in this bitch!!!!!!1

Barburyin 11-13-04 12:10 PM

comin yall uppin for votes in here!!!!!1

VIvID 11-14-04 05:45 PM

uppin this battle been open forever......

get sum real votes break them down plz

any one who doesnt understand ne line dont vote or pm me or otha duke for the explination

Barburyin 11-14-04 08:52 PM

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

*GHOSTE* 11-15-04 05:37 PM

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

nice battle...c thug took it though...

wordplay: c thug
punches: c thug
structure: c thug
flow: c thug
multies: no1

c thug is definatley ont he right track...both were good...but c thug came harder...

Barburyin 11-15-04 06:54 PM

iight thanx for the votes still uppin ta get this battle closed HOLLA!!!!!!!

Implicit 11-15-04 07:17 PM

Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG

this was an ok battle

vivid - ur lyrics werent that great....ur structure was messed up...not really any hot punches but i was feelin some of it...jus need to work on creativity...overall 4/10

certified - kinda the same with you except u had a little more punches that i was feelin..ur strucutre was also messed up a little...i mean it flowed but it wasnt too great...overall 5/10

nothing really stood out but certified won because he had more punches in his verse.........


.....return the favor with an honest vote in my sig........

Main 11-16-04 10:56 AM

Voted For: VIvID

v/vivid..
why,
read the verse's kid killed him in every aspects.
punches were straight flow was on, had a couple concepts i liked and a couple old ones flipped nicely. overall he had a good verse.

lmfao..
dude what were you thinking about 'pop u like pimple' lmfao
man all your lines were gayyyyy you rhyme like your 10 or something.. your shits below basic.. elevate fast man if its possible..verse was horrid.

v/vivid.

Barburyin 11-16-04 09:32 PM

iight comon tryin ta get this battle closed upppppiiiiinnnnnn for the last vote!!!!

Barburyin 11-17-04 06:21 PM

iight comon yall battle bin open for a minute now tryin ta get this closed uppppiiiinnnnn for the las vote!!!!

Barburyin 11-18-04 08:09 PM

comon yall uppin for the last vote tryin ta close dis battle

Barburyin 11-19-04 03:09 PM

comon sum1 please close dis battle lol its bin open for a minute now jus uuppiinn for the final vote

Barburyin 11-21-04 01:11 PM

comon yall uppin for votes tryin ta get dis battle closed bin open for a long time now


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