best/worst day ever
 

ok yall today i found out something that made me so damn happy but then at the same time they told me the worst news ever just read..................

I never even knew you existed until you were gone/
lord this hurts so bad, change wat you did wrong/
knocks on my door by your mothers older brother/
he told me your here but never will see each other/
my seed was planted but never had a chance to grow/
i miss you already but maybe it would be better if i dont know/
this will be the only reconazation of you on earth/
the heavens took you before she even gave birth/
it wasnt gods decsions it was more like your mothers/
now i wont even know how we'd look at each other/
to all who know, this shed my first tear out my eye/
fuck if they say a thug caint cry, they never had part of them die/
missin the chance to hold you, be there hug you/
R.I.P to the other half of me, daddy loves you/

Damn bush and his abortion laws{ wipes tear from eye}

Punchlines

Even as a carpenter you couldn’t build flavor with your
Ill behavior your nails will fail and won’t prevail in hardcore
Wood so your foundation couldn’t clown a nation and will fall
Down all around like broken fence posts rhyme dense most time yall
Your lips closed while my scripts pose a threat in your brain
Blend correct like insects so I swarm in a storm of sore rain
Cats stem whack as dim maniacs I’m above the rim with fact
And impact, I blow a flute while cats flow pollute the site back
And forth like AYLIYAH, even with labels you not able
To true tag my dew rag my Duke grease will rebuke the beast and stable
The legal evil of a bad hair day

wat the fuck is that, this my open mic yo,

wtf maddrapper... anyways.... oreo, u had a good flow in this, u were lackin on the vocab, but this was nice and deep, but i liked it overall.... but vocab could use some work.... nice drop!

it dont need that it was just emotions yo, today i found out i had a soon but found out his mother got an abortion at the same time

uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

i'm feelin dis piece partly cause it was a cool emotional piece and cause i also can relate to what u feelin'.Im happy and sad for you.good piece.

i caint see why your happy but aight then

maddrapper been doing that all over the place.lol.

oreo this is some deep ass shit. you got soid rhyme's in this drop.
They are not highly tech . but the doesnt matter in anyway at all because the way you used them is dope.
Is this a true drop?

Fuck abortion ,children are a gift. That wak fuck think's he is god.
FUCK GEORGE.W.BUSH.sue me.
pz

^^^ thanks man yeah it true i only told the girl im with now and thats messing up our realationship but thanks @ you always drop some solid feed,
we need to collab on something

Fuck abortion ,children are a gift. That wak fuck think's he is god.
FUCK GEORGE.W.BUSH.sue me.
pz[/QUOTE]

hell yeah man that is tru as hell FUCK BUSH!!!

some feed yall?

Oreo Good shit hommie nice flow
yea told me last true story huh
it was a good flow stayed on point i rate it about a 8-10 good shit keep doing ya thing

thanks yo man this shit still hurts me

real emotional shit right here..got me goin....dayum.....and pause and think for a bit...im real sorry to hear that...u know.......how old are u anyway fam?

he's 16 years old lol its posted like almost every thread faggots talk about him

^^6 werd yo but yeah kontravesy man thanks for your feed and sympathy

sup oreo. my condolences man i cant imagine how u feel going through something like this. i felt ur emotion man this was real. im not even gonna try to break down ya verse bro i dont think its necessary all im gon say is stay strong.

yo madrapper that flow was sick...
multis was hot wordplay was good and all around tight drop....
8.3 outta 10....

now back tot he person who this tread belong to...
nice drop good emotion was layed out, i was feeling this cuz i got a 3 year old N if i aint have her N got that bush curse i wouldnt know how to act or feel mang shE is everything to me so yea my bad to hear that but each line was good not on how complex it was cuz every verse dont have to be so complex to be hot its just the way u layed it out plain N simple N got to the point with-out beating around the "bush" which u probley would if u can beat bush up.... haha anyways nice drop tight song...

8.0 outta 10

i wopop his ass yo, thanks for the feed yall

that was a great peice im sorry about ur baby u had tears rollin down my eyes

man to say abortion is bullshit ionno, yea its a shitty situation that ure in, but u cant b like oooo abortion is the devil....i mean cuz yea in ure situation it wasent strait if u wanted the kid, but theres alot of situations were abortions are ionno i dont wanna say good...but u kno what i mean, but anyways, good drop keep the shit up, hold yah head up peace

well i guess im sorry it makes me feel good this peice gets to people

nice open mic fam,it had flow ,it was real emotional i like that, it wasn;t a skip around an look at sum verse;s thing i read it....8.5/10 it was hot...

thanks man, all yall thanks