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OFF~CeNTeR vs. Dark Skyz
Alrighty....we got...
10 Lines First to 5 votes (4-0=K.O.) No crew votes, dick rider votes Verses due 24 hours after checking in... |
aight...Im checkin in...the verses are due 24 hours after you check in here aight DS?
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uppin for dark skizzays...
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Hold off on this to Monday...Im gon be Virginia Beach till Sunday night, and I wont have time to post.
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no doubt man...I'll post the verse up Monday...
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upping for tomorrow
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You not ‘seeing straight’ cause you being ‘ate’, and my ‘plate’ is ‘off-center’, think you a winner? You better ‘break-fast’ cause I eat’Champions’ for ‘dinner’//
Vision blurred, receiving punch rememdies in double doses, they don’t tear the fleash, just the ‘bones’, causing early stages of ‘ostio-perosis’// Whipped like slaves on never-ending days, strapping long-bars for you, you and B-Boys ‘don’t fit in’ like ‘5 obese asses in a car for two’// Sulfuric phospate sprayed in your pops face and nucleaic acid for you bastard , yeah, I got your ‘shit covered’ like ‘diapers’ when’ babies blast terds’// Thinking you’re a ‘bad boy’ for writing fuck you on old dudes, if you going crazy over this ‘spit’, ‘what will you do when I ‘cum’ for you?’//* Remember the song…Bad Boys, Bad Boys…Whatcha gonna do?…..Spit = cum…you get it….. |
Ive been houndin-you, now yah gettin pounded-dude,
worst rapper of the year, didnt take you long to 'mar 2002'//* put more holes in D than a dart board! battlin OFF's not wise, get buried in a glass coffin with tints, always see 'Dark Skyz'// I let your hopes build up...Fool I needed the shade, Put 'Jimmi' in a 'Dungeon' in the back corner of Hades//* Jesus, Im off the hook like.....the one that got away, I shouldnt even be allowed to drop...cuz votes we cant sway// Just mention yah crew...and they like, yeah OFF already won, Cuz I punch you so hard...Dar'll piss out of his lungs// for the simple minded... *-he registered in March 2002, mar/Mar....you get it right? *-JimmiDungeon is his Alias on other boards... LET THE VOTING COMMENCE *edited for grammar... |
THIS BATTLE WAS A CLOSE ONE AND HARD TA PICK A WINNER BUT AFTER READING AND RE READING THIS IMMA HAFTA GO WITH DARK SKYS. HIS PUNCHES HIT HARDER & I THOUGHT VOCAB WAS JUST A LITTLE BIT BETTER. I THINK THIS ONE DESERVES A REMATCH IT WAS SO CLOSE.
VOTE=DARK SKYZ |
yeah this one def needs a rematch, yo the wordplay was tight but i was feelin Dark skyz a bit more even though offcenter's shit was smoother, y'a'lls punches were kinda weak but i was feelin off center more
vote=off center |
NICE BATTLE NIGGAS,BUT GOTTA GO WIT DARK SKYZ....I FELT HE CAME HARDER IN THS BATTLE WITH HIS PUNCHES,VOCAB AND THE WORDPLAY WAS NICE TOO...LIKE THE OTHER NIGGAS THAT VOTED I AGREE WIT WHAT THEY SAID.....YALL SHOULD REMATCH...
VOTE=DARK SKYZ 1 |
Yeah, I think Off got the batttle, he came with better multie's and more original punches, I hate all CUM lines, shit is massivly used...
My vote=Off Center |
2-2
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tight battle...UPPING!
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upping....
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my vote goes ta off center, shit had more punches and betta punches, and his shit bout tha coffin seein daark skyz was hott , very clever
vote goes to off center, no beef tho dark skyz ayo vote on my shit wit lil dallas |
3-2...can we get three more votes?
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My vote is easily Dark Skyz
He had the better lines like
Dark Skyz Quote:
^^^^^nice line Quote:
^^^^^another one OFF~CeNTeR Quote:
^^^^Aight bar. Could've been better if it was reworded. Quote:
^^^^^The tinted coffin and seein' dark skies was pretty good. Quote:
^^^^^^The point was clear but the rhymin' didn't go too well. Wordplay=Dark Skyz Content=OFF~CeNTeR Flow=Dark Skyz[ Punches=Dark Skyz Overall=Dark Skyz My Vote=Dark Skyz |
im goin with dark skyz cus i wus feelin his flow more than off-center, tight battle.
DARK SKYZ Vision blurred, receiving punch rememdies in double doses, they don’t tear the fleash, just the ‘bones’, causing early stages of ‘ostio-perosis’// havent heard that line yet, good to see somethin new Sulfuric phospate sprayed in your pops face and nucleaic acid for you bastard , yeah, I got your ‘shit covered’ like ‘diapers’ when’ babies blast terds’// that baby line wus funny OFF-CENTER Put 'Jimmi' in a 'Dungeon' in the back corner of Hades//* must have done ur homework on dark skyz, big ups on that worst rapper of the year, didnt take you long to 'mar 2002'//* semi-personal shot, tight line VOTE:darkskyz happy now |
I do think apadt posted a thread atop this forum about those one line votes ryano...one sentence shit like that is basically a frrepost...if you wanna count that ds its
4-3 you... Upping. |
Nah, I wouldn't want that vote counted against me. So make it 3-3.
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3-3
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since ryano changed his vote...Its changed to 4-3 D.S.
UP. |
::Dark Skyz::
You not ‘seeing straight’ cause you being ‘ate’, and my ‘plate’ is ‘off-center’, think you a winner? You better ‘break-fast’ cause I eat’Champions’ for ‘dinner’// Good Start out.. Nice metaphors in there, no real punch tho Vision blurred, receiving punch rememdies in double doses, they don’t tear the fleash, just the ‘bones’, causing early stages of ‘ostio-perosis’// ok meta.. Whipped like slaves on never-ending days, strapping long-bars for you, you and B-Boys ‘don’t fit in’ like ‘5 obese asses in a car for two’// almost made me laugh.. Mediocre punch, but not bad.. Sulfuric phospate sprayed in your pops face and nucleaic acid for you bastard , yeah, I got your ‘shit covered’ like ‘diapers’ when’ babies blast terds’// its ok could be reworded tho.. Thinking you’re a ‘bad boy’ for writing fuck you on old dudes, if you going crazy over this ‘spit’, ‘what will you do when I ‘cum’ for you?’// play concept with the cum/spit part Over all your punchs lackd tremindiously... You really didnt have that many.. no real direct, over all id give your verse a 7.4 *tips* Work on you rrhyme scheme... your bar ares to long, and it throws the flow off.. try diss your opponents alot harder.. ::Off~Center:: Ive been houndin-you, now yah gettin pounded-dude, worst rapper of the year, didnt take you long to 'mar 2002'//* put more holes in D than a dart board! battlin OFF's not wise, get buried in a glass coffin with tints, always see 'Dark Skyz'// kind of a weak starter... Meta could have been re-worded alot better I let your hopes build up...Fool I needed the shade, Put 'Jimmi' in a 'Dungeon' in the back corner of Hades//* Jesus, Im off the hook like.....the one that got away, I shouldnt even be allowed to drop...cuz votes we cant sway// weak.. personal punchs was alright.. nothing special Just mention yah crew...and they like, yeah OFF already won, Cuz I punch you so hard...Dar'll piss out of his lungs// weak punch *tips* Your rhyme schemes the best thing going.. But you need help on your wordplay/metaphors still... There really lacking, and as for your punchs there far to weak to be really any good.. Up on your vocab some, an work on the other aspecs as well..Over all id rate your verse likea 4/5 vote=Dark Skyz one |
On the real, thanks for the tips....We all here to elevate...
5-3... |
Nice battle D.S.
We will meet again one day... |
Yo, you got a crew?
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