Do you remember ur first Rhyme or bar?
 

If you don't remember ur first..jst remember the rhymes u remember from way back :)

mine:

Man, forget you...you nothin..your jst like jack in jill....
U suck man, just go back, back, just back to mil..

very wack^^ lol

back to mil means back to middle skewl lol

unfortunately i do remember this pathetic little bar of mine. :(

I got money like its on tap
I have more of it than on songs which i rap

:thumbup:
dead serious

my 1st line:

fuck this you're wack...
your mom's got.......

^^^^this was a freestyle battle at school, my very first battle, I choked after "got"..... :(

you dont wanna know how wack i was back then...

^^^it's better to tell us...when i have sumthing to say i see a councilor. :thumbup:

lol i dont remember exacly what i did back then but...heres a try of what i did...
the devils cry huants my gurl in her dream...
only on a seam she blanses on a one sided beam...
^^^that was better then i can do back then i was way worse then that

sounds like a topical match you were busting....?

no i was busting normal battles lol i was just stupid didnt understand shit haha

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm, lol????

i want to hear other people's first bar

my first bar..

Im in a fright, docs is handlin somethin.... he might chop it!!
WHAT! check this out.. my umbilical chord has a MIC on it?!


^Multis since conception :thumbup:

lol alright niggaz check my first rhyme

im stronger then a lion but faster then a cheetah
want to fight me, i'll beat ya

^dopeness defined.......call P.diddy we gotta hit on our hands

that was in grade 4...see i was blessed with the talent

TonySelf...ima put u on my surgical shelf,
Cut you up deal yoself and shuffle urself,

/\ 1st battle verse on RV

My first line.

Fuck you asshole, Ill rape and torment your soul
Slit your wrists for you, then impale you on a pole

ur fuckin ugly ^ fuck u satanic bitch ass...Aod LOL

my first ever battle was on rv
an the only time i ever rhyme is on rv
an i think my first line was sumthin like.........

''dogg all i wanna do is chill with the dead prezidents
u cant trace me cause this is murder with no evidence''

somthin like that on an open mic key i did

I gotta story to tell.

I cant remember my first but heres and old one:

Lil' Miss K, the only way a boy will like you is if he's gay,
You're to me like Eminem is to Dre,

First bar I ever kicked? It went somethin' like this...
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I'll bust a freestyle// But after this I'ma go to the drugstore and head straight for the weed isle//
.
Lol that shit was back when I was 12...

My first bar was one of my tightest..........

Its the return of this nigga wit rhymes, lines like broken glass, tear apart our limbs from your spiritual mind...

First song I ever made called "Light'n em Up"

Unfortunately i do not remember my first rhyme.
But my first time rhymin was in one of those AOL Freestyle chatrooms i dont know who on here goes to those but yea it was my first time and it was sposed to be all jokes ...so i battled some nigga in IM and he told me i beat him good and so i got this great Huge EGO started ..and started battling regularly in those rooms...


"I'll Put you on the back burner like ike did tina turna"
"any bitch wanna battle this chick lets get with this shit in this bitch"...

yea those were some of my first lines lmfao.. :/


but luckly i improved fuck the aol freestyle chats they are now blessed with people who were once like myself .. but u know..boards help you improve greatly.

mine was this
im a whyte boy that does rap not disco/
cuz im oreo dot mean i come from nabisco/

lol oreo since birth

uh oh, its zig zag, merkin' wanna be emcees like dey be a fag

i dont need any help doin shit to you, cuz every thing i say to you be true

lol

My first battle.. i had on this site... on july
I'll remove you with the delete key, he had to make up fake personals
His Played rhymes while my punches and disses come in military arsenals
Your lines are stretched up, lost points in your structure and your flow
He a flyweight, his rhymes still sucks and he signed up a long time ago
Say he a hurricane, he can't reach me cause im the highest mountaintop
Already this fake MC choking in the battle, get this nigga a cough drop
My words and lyrics has got your mouth so dry that you can’t even spit
I’m going to KO’ you like what Eminem did to Papa Doc and Lickety Split
I know that you be ghostwriting your verse, this kid trying to fool me.
Because if you can't look through your lines of rhymes, then M can't C.
This kid claim he a hustler, cause he smuggling to many porn pics.
Because it’s like I'm eating cereal, because this fruit is just trix
MC.CM keep saying he's dope, so I'm smoking him to get higher.
And that is why I'll be burning Cm, like throwing rulers in fire.

battleing Mc.CM

well the chorus 2 my 1st song (and i dont know how i remember) was summin like this:

"cause im fuckin crazy/
and im thinkin that just maybe/
come any closer/
ill proove whos the poser/
ill beat ur ass/
til theres nuthin left but a bloody carcass/
...."

i dont remember the rest :P

Against SPuL prolly.

I aint gonna look it up.

LOL

my first rhyme on my first site RB


NIGGA u suck.. and ya moma gave u rejection
This bitch is weights 100 pounds.. and thats after liposuction.

I be grabbing my gats and leaving you filled wit holes and all hollow/
after the first bar I knew you didnt spit so obviously you must swallow/

thats my first battle... lol, not to bad I guess.. could make it better

Ya I remember mine, and un like most it wasn't wack.....

To the asian kid in a battle: Silly little man from Japan, don't you know? i'm the champ... You can't beat me... I'm an allstar, your a rookie, so leave rap alone and go make another fortune cookie

Heres my first open mic... shit made me laugh when i looked it up

step up to the mic and tell your pussy ass to take a hike
im new in town, but im already the best around
i see a buncha shit goin down, the people need to hear my sound
i make lil babies cry and old people wanna die
some say im hot, some say im not
but they all wish they could flow like me, blow like me, get outta control like me
cuz u see ill bust a rhyme any time, hit you if you get outta line
the cops see me wit a blunt, yo girl sees me and i know just what she want
so dont try to front, and i won't try and stunt
if you do try shit ill get in your face, ill put you to disgrace, this isn't no footrace
so why you running, you ain't that cunning
i'll chase you down, til you run outta town
now im gonna let you go, ill just go flow some mo'
payce