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10 minute Collab Key-Style / By @ and I. Mind
Doesn't Make Sence! Cuz its a freestyle :) 10 Minute FreeStyle :) By: @ and I. Mind [@'s Verse] racial mixture's have diffrent facial fixture's so why discrase your picture's?.. ..if leasure create's pleasure then why measure your fate's letter.. I live by a rule to never regret a thing i do or persue.. techinacallity is my speciality so wait for my audio's ..cause i need a vet to battle me.. im here to learn.. not here to burn so if you been hating then here's your turn.. cause a lesson in a confession can bring out a bit of discresion.. but did i mention the poor stoped gettin there pension to create less tention.. but if people start dying then people stop trying and leader's keep lying.. so it's time to put the key in the door. and start freeing a whore.. because she's craving to love.. but when it's frozen theres no saving a dove.. [I. Mind's Verse] Wut seems to be impossible is possible wen i saw somethin catastrophical... I saw somethin un-logical, I'n a hospital I saw a baby the size of a popsicle... these ppl are crazy I'm pretty certain, i hate them, die, i want to burn them.. Shyt, i played wit a knife n i think i killed a person..so i left so made a diversion.. later made a conversion! cops followed me, so i took out my little black pistol.. Aim'd at em not knowin its artificial, its freaken fake, all it does is loudly whissle... But i don't care, cuz me they underestimated, cuz in my mind i slowly animated.. An escape plan so i know i'll make it,wth? Damn im out of gas..now my life i really hate it... Wait! Why am i complain'n, imma get 3 meals a day, and have a bet to sleep in... But why am i still day dreamin? Oh shyt.realized im already in jail!Damn i do to much weed in da weekend... |
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nice freestyle collab.keep em comin'.
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well since it dont make too much sense lol im feeling the rhyme scheme from both peoples ....some of the lines did actually make some sense..nice job up
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The type greedy but like a treaty, unite cats, crew fight
With gatts, a foul toy made of alloy so my rhymes tight Like mix metals when my fix settles so yall turn on the light Whack cats don’t trust them I’ve become accustom to hate Don’t lend money always end funny with me in the hole for cake Fakes don’t pay back they stay whack and stingy not great |
^^^^ woders why thats there but nice yall
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thanx uppin
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Blah It Doesn't Make Sense But Its An Good Freestyle Though Nice Rhyming
Good Vocab Like Tha Rhyme Scheme Tight Homie Keep Dem Callb'z Coming..............................word |
thnx for the feed.
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decent collab, lol @ ya it dont make sense all the time, slant ryhmin was koo though..
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thnx for the feed. upping for more
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up up and away !!!!!!
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POtentially Phatt!!! good phrazing I thought it coulda used a stronger core but i liked the old skool vibe it had to it 8/10 :shoot: keep droppin!!!!!
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POtentially Phatt!!! good phrazing I thought it coulda used a stronger core but i liked the old skool vibe it had to it 8/10 :shoot: keep droppin!!!!!
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thnx for the feed.
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ok, lmao,,@: your verse was great, nice flow and good vocabulary, was feeling it...
I.M.:lol, girl, what? you know we cool, but yo, like you said,this didnt make much sense, but i know what you were trying to do, the only thing that bugged me was your verses didnt match up...but good job both...keep it up..1 |
thnx for the feed.
we sorte4d and worte this in 10 minute's so that explain's why they are not on the same topic.The whole thing doesnt really have a topic. We just got talking bout keystyle's then thought we might aswell drop a quick collab. but thnx for all feed. upping for more^^^ pz |
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decent drop..didn't make sense in most parts lol, but nice drop none the less.
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Nice collab, dope for the time frame, structure was kinna off, prolly coulda done with not bein so large, woulda been easier t read, but was pretty dope, some good words spoken from you both.
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thnx for the feed.
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