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Verbal Phenom vs enygma
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No hate votes Explained votes only Good luck. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-27-04 at 10:04 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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enygma has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:54 AM.
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Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:55 AM.
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This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill
But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four |
Ok, heres my 10...
U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown Explained votes only. |
Voted For: enygma
i give this too enyhma enygma: you still got it..this was a decent verse from you..you got that Godly like structure in your lines..this shit was nice..best line This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal that was dope...lol nyce shit your punches hit em hard..personals ..there was none..your structure was decent..flow was good...wordplay was DOPE....vocab...ok....consistancy...good verbal: this shit was Dope too...thing is your punches didnt hit as hard as Engyma's ....your personals..there was none...your shti was ok too Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters best line ^ and that was..blah...ok wordplay..not good..structure..good..flow good....vocab...ok...overall this was a decent verse.........but enygma gets my vote |
^aight...thanks for the vote. up-uppin.
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Voted For: enygma
Im doing break down.... Verbal U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming No… not good of an opening wasn’t feeling it… I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater This is more of a slef glori.. so no.. You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew This was iight I gues.. didn’t like the concept Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters No… hell no… not good… Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown Not good closer Your verse was very weak.. shit.. what happened yo… this is gotta be the worst ive seen from you.. I mean.. the verse you had at writersblock was better.. man…. Not good… Nygma This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still Nice opening.. thought a lil rewording could be done This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal Not good flow on this… not good concept I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection No… not good.. I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see This was iight… the concept was I lil played It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four Ok closer … Noty feeling any of your verses… not good punches at all.. infact…there was barely any direct punches… Vote: nygma for a betteer verse…. |
Thanks for the votes.......just upping this some more.
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Im doing break down....
Verbal U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming this was hot I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater just flowing You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew nice personal Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters ha nice diss, feeling the flip Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown this ending was weak thou but nice verse, 8.0 Nygma This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still good opener This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal nah this was weak aint flow good either I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection this shit was the weakest bar i have ever seen * straight trash * I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see concept was decent but the line need it to be re-worded to flow smother so still it wasnt a good bar It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four Ok closer … ok ending but u need it alot more fire and more punches 6.0 vote: verbal P.S i dont know what the fuck ya been reading in the other guys verse but i think ya dick ryder seriously this should be a easy win for verbal and dont hate fuckers cuz im expressin my rights of freedome of speach its the truth RE-READ THE VERSE AND TELL ME WHO REALLY WON dont worry verbal i know there is mad haters out here i can tell but keep droping ya fire dogs |
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Phenom
just checkin verses and stats and uppin this to help get it closed out... werd... good spits y'all... coupla funny lines from both
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Voted For: enygma
Both verses were good... heres my breakdown.... U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming kinda weak bar, flow is o.k kinda stretched but the punch is weak. I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater decent flow again, but the punch no good. You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew best bar so far, decent punch- Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters lol this was pretty funny... your punches all in all aren't stellar but this was funny to me. Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown this was ????... the punch is really out-there kikko, This might have been nice if it was worded different. This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still funny little punch, decent opener. This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal again decent punch with the wordplay there... flow is better than opponents so far... I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection lol... took a second of thought, or i must be tired... decent bar again. I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see this was o.k... not as good as the previous bars but still decent. It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four closer was kinda eh... i dunno the history between you two but not as impressive as i'd expect.... all in all I think Enygma was a little more consistent with his drop, but decent job from both... keep droppin kids... return with some honesty.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1741858 |
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Phenom
checkin the polls y'all................................
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Phenom
ooo nice battle here
cant vote tho... checkin pollz |
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Voted For: enygma
U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming 2/10 I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater 1/10 You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew 3/10 Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters 1/10 Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown 1/10 Ya punches were weak ya structure was off ya metas werent there yo similies were ok you had no real personals this battle was jus like a freestyle real weak drop here kid This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still 3/10 This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal 4/10 I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection 6/10 I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see 5/10 It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four 6/10 punches were ok structure was good metas were aight similies were ok ya personals werent really there ive seen better from u but it was enough 2 get a win i guess Returned votes are alwayz welcome |
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Voted For: enygma
ok the verb opener wasnt hitting at all second bar aint hit the crew personal was ok ender was wack no good punches or disses here at all good structure and vocab flow was kinda hard to pick up here also basically no good disses or punches gave you a weak verse a 4/10 enygma good ass flow here good vocab also and structure was easy to follow ok opener second bar is a ok punch also the small text personal shouldve been worded better ender was ok personal too 5/10 basically a weak ass battle enygma had better punches and disses the verb basically had 0 and that hurt the verb vocab doesnt win battles punches and personals do my vote=enygma |
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