intensify effect vs Sicka.Cell
 

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8 Fuckin Line's
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Sicka.Cell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 10:46 AM.

Yo Yo....

This Pussy "Vet" Think's He Dope when he's losin to Jokah*
My Flow's will Disembody ya Ryhme's & gradually Fold-Ya

Ya come Weak as a Midget Old age Pensioner in a Wheelchair
Even If Ya possesed Mod Power's It still would'nt Be Fair

Slit Ya Wrist while i Take a Piss & Stamp Out His Fire**
I Preach Gangsta Verb's ta this Herb Like i'm the Messiah

So Lemme Increase The Tension On My Elusive "Effect"
Coz This Pussy Lip's is Fluent in all Half-Assed Herb Defect's
Done.
*Jokah he's currently losing ta Jokah666
**In his Avy it say's Violent Type On Fire
Done.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 10:57 AM.

this was done quickly after i made lunch....

yo sicka.cell better off leaving befor this captine expire ya mission.....
Cuz I.E gonna "Burn ya Bless'in" like my "Heat was Fryin Christan".....
u got skill's bitch listen, R.V "Lable Ya Ass" a drug dealer the way u "Sell U'r Crack".... *ass*
u'r flow just lack, N we aint people when I "rip ya spine out" N let u know-- "I Got Ya Back".......
shit i'll keep throwin repetitive "punches-atchu" like a "sick-nigga" watchin We-Run-Sequals....
u a killah? i see no evil..... the only pound u got is giving dap to peoples....
so sicka.cell think he's sick but like flu vacinations ill take it outta-ya....
and leave u with a "problems on your hands" like u was "cheating in algebra"...

Aight Gd Verse Upping For Vote's Fucka's

Uppin Ppl Dont Fuckin sleep On this Battle

upp'in this battle for some honest votes i will retunr THE FAVOR OF AN HONEST VOTE...

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upp'in............................................

Voted For: intensify effect

breakdown of verses:
intensify effect:

yo sicka.cell better off leaving befor this captine expire ya mission.....
Cuz I.E gonna "Burn ya Bless'in" like my "Heat was Fryin Christan".....
^good opener, nice punch and average wordplay.
u got skill's bitch listen, R.V "Lable Ya Ass" a drug dealer the way u "Sell U'r Crack".... *ass*
u'r flow just lack, N we aint people when I "rip ya spine out" N let u know-- "I Got Ya Back".......
^lol nice line i like the wordplay and the concept is nice.
shit i'll keep throwin repetitive "punches-atchu" like a "sick-nigga" watchin We-Run-Sequals....
u a killah? i see no evil..... the only pound u got is giving dap to peoples....
^This line was decent I guess, nothing special but decent anyways.
so sicka.cell think he's sick but like flu vacinations ill take it outta-ya....
and leave u with a "problems on your hands" like u was "cheating in algebra"...
^Good closer, wordplay was good and the punch hit hard.

Sicka cell:
This Pussy "Vet" Think's He Dope when he's losin to Jokah*
My Flow's will Disembody ya Ryhme's & gradually Fold-Ya
^Weak opener, what does being a vet have to do with losing to someone whose record is over a hundred wins?
Ya come Weak as a Midget Old age Pensioner in a Wheelchair
Even If Ya possesed Mod Power's It still would'nt Be Fai
^Crap line, weak concept, think of something witty and original.

Slit Ya Wrist while i Take a Piss & Stamp Out His Fire**
I Preach Gangsta Verb's ta this Herb Like i'm the Messiah
^this line was ok, nothing special, the punch was pretty soft.
So Lemme Increase The Tension On My Elusive "Effect"
Coz This Pussy Lip's is Fluent in all Half-Assed Herb Defect's
^bad closer, this line was maybe the weakest in your verse, no punc, horrible wordplay, and bad concept.

Overall intensify wins it for having superior wordplay and original concepts.
V.intensify.
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Voted For: intensify effect

this was a close one, but i personally was feelin I.E.'s flow pattern and his whole structure better. SC, i wasnt feeling yo structure, because every battle i read on RV, it sounds the same, and IE gave me somehting different to read. he also got u with harder punches and better personals. both yalls personals were there, but IE got u with that. he won hands down on mettas. didnt see none in SC's verse. this was a close one tho. yall couldve came harder with the punches, but on each others level...overall good battle

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Voted For: intensify effect

I.E.-You get my vote, punchlines were pretty good, lastline and the got ya back lines were nice, Some of it is hard to understand though.. Cuz of the structure you had it in..
Sicka Cell- Didn't come as hard as your opponent, you need to elavate and work on your punches

thanks for the vote...
now, upp'in this battle for more votes....

Voted For: intensify effect

iight, i had a problem with the "" and shit, people will know what your talking bout so get rid of them hoes, and i voted this guy because he had better punches, they werent all that hard but good for a neewb, work on ya structure and personals tho

Yep!

can we end this already................................

upp'in to end this shit already...................

Voted For: intensify effect

i hate to fuckin do this... goddamn i hate to...
wack battle, seen better from IE (shakes head)
aight this is my break down....

Sicka- horrible structure...elevate on that big time... flow was ok, played lines tho, def. work on that. punches and personals hit ok, overall a half way decent verse but could have been a lot better if you had been a little more creative with it and fixed the structure... overall id give it a 4/10

IE- like i said, ive seen better from you, ya structure was everywhere, wasnt feelin that at all... flow was good, punches hit a lot harder than his, had a personal or 2, nothing amazing on the personal aspect... creativity was ok. overall a better verse than sickas, 6/10

overall ive seen better but this was an ok battle... both of yall need to work on ya structure, no hate sicka... I HATE IE so you know this aint a hate vote against you, just gotta call em like i see em.... keep elevatin and stay up....

VOTE- IE.....................................