ghetto cripple vs ThirdDegree
 

Battle Rules:

6 - no more than 20 lines thats no more than 10 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
explained votes only

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-28-04 at 01:09 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

ghetto cripple has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 01:09 PM.

read the "explanations" at the bottom if you dont understand anything in my verse.



im'a leave this kid with an intense effect of 3rd degree burns/
thinkin' he top dog cause he got a K.O. against intensity effect and the kid aint even take a turn/

fool dont bother to fight back struggle or yell/
im'a rip the pipes out ya throat, creatin' a lyrical hell/

im'a cannabalize your siblings,crucify your mom upside down and rape ya grandma/
culm in the mouth of you decapitated dad then your grandfathers dick is what im'a hand ya/

im'a tag you on the tip of yo chin/
rock you back, uppercut an tag you again/

this kid thinks this is a game comin at me blind folded like i was a pinyata/
i treat yo moms like a bitch, have her on all fours, and sayin "kunt swalla"/

i could waste a whole bar on this cat, come back and still win this battle/
watch i'll waste the next bar and still do better than his faggot ass will/

.................................................. .........../
.................................................. ........../

im'a stick this kid up, hear him scream, watch him glow/
im'a cook and charcle this nigga, just call me nero/

EXPLANATIONS:
the 1st bar: intesnsity effect is some one he battled and the rhyme explains itself, so i used intense effect and thirds own name agianst him, a personal diss.

3rd bar:cannabalism is where you eat people and decapitation is where your head is cut off.

5th bar: a pinyata is a figure of anything filled with candy and you hit it to open it up, a bitch is a female dog, and "swalla" is "swallow"

6th and 7th bar go together: pretty much wasted a bar like it says.

last bar: back in b.c. or a.d. there was a guy named nero who put stakes through peoples bodies and lite them on fire, so "im'a stick this kid up" is a trick line, im not talkin bout gats,get it.
and then "im'a cook and charcle this nigga" charcle=black nigga=black it is a lil racy which makes it much harder of a diss.

there aint no reason any of you should deny me of this win, shits mad creative, wastin' bars, that is so fuckin tight, aint noone even dare to try that, i flat just disrespected this cat.

CORRECTION: intensify effect, not *intensity* my bad.

ThirdDegree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 06:31 PM.

Ayo Just saw this battle, damn you put this up quick. But aiight

*Off the DOme*

..Dis Cripple got Parkinsons, whenever I post he shakes..
..Ya careers goin downhill, Like wheel chairs with no brakes..

..They call me DEGREE for a reason, I kick in in the clutch..
..CRipple Ya rhymes look more bitten than a half eaten lunch..
..Even with ya prewritten verse in hand, you still ain't in touch..
..I wouldn't mind and all, but could you please throw a punch..

..The Comittee has decided against your continued existence..
..You can ride electric wheelchairs and still not go the distance..

..My punches always hittin, like throwin hand grenades..
..Your verse wasn't half bad, way back before it was played..

..I hit permanently like Polio on netcees who call themselves ghetto..
..You'll never walk, once you trip, liek your talent, you'll always be low..

Ayo lets get votin

One

nice verse third, good luck with it. dual respect, ayo check out my other battles if you havent, i almost got em on lock with one more,check em' if you got time. thanks

Voted For: ThirdDegree

third degree got this......better punches and structure....ghetto cripple's flow was off at points and explanations are wack......basically third has more punches betta metas and betta flow

ghetto came weak flow was bad lines were stretched attempted punches nothin followed threw.....

v/third degree

Voted For: ghetto cripple

AiI That Was Jus Man Slaughter Damn G~cripple Tow Dat Ass up LOL Nalw Im Jus Playin He Went Down Swingin It Was a Nice Battle But The Punches The Vocabz The Style The Structure It All Goes To G~Cripple But i tell YA What He Tore Cripple Up In That First Line and The Lst But G~Cripple Hit Em Up All Through His Verse Wasted A Bar Came Bac And Dissed Him Again I Think The Reason I Voted For Ghetto Cripple Is bcuz HiS Verse Was ALOT!! More Personal And Stuff ETC. I Think Everyone Else Thinks The same So Yall Vote Im Goin To Laugh My Ass Off At This Battle
Peace.

Ayo^6 He didn't read the rules disreaguard that shit I'll get CProgress or strobe on it later. Uppin for votes tho

ayo third im not gettin what your sayin' who didnt read rules???????????????????????

ayo lets get these votes hoppin yall need to quit sleeepin and start ppppppppooppinnnn

Uppin for the votes.

And I wasn't talkin bout King~Dipset.

Upiin will return tha favor.................

This was feedback posted for ThirdDegree
 

ayo wastin bars is tight but I would vote for third degree...I just dont have 50 posts...

oh i see what your talkin bout, meths, its aight that one is fine, it was my fault any ways.

Ayo uppin for votes don't sleep on this.......................

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Voted For: ThirdDegree

It was a alright battle....

Ghetto: I feel your verse wasnt as good at Third's was...You had some good lines and all but it just wanst there...But overall it was ok but i wasnt really feeling it as i was reading through it, I didnt really like the cannibal line.

Third: You had a pretty good verse, I was feeling your punches and flow a lot more here...had some nice metas in there, I like the opening bar it was pretty good...Closer was a decent way to finish off the verse...overall it was good.

But im gonna have to go with Third, because I felt his verse had the better punches and flow to it.

Aiiight 2-1 to me.

Uppin for votes.

Votes r returned......

Uppin fah votes.

Don't sleep on dis....

Honest votes get returned

ok lets keep it goin halla with them votes, ok enoughs enough start halla r in

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This was feedback posted for ThirdDegree
 

i'll just check the polls but i think that 3 took this just on flow and style though that y i'm just checking polls

Ayo thanks for the feedback but lets gettin votin for real

LETS GET VOTIN

FOR REAL THSI IS GETTING OLD LETS FINISH IT

One

Voted For: ThirdDegree

Degree got this easy.
Degree-Had good punches Good complexity & Vocab and a Gd Structure.the Punches were harder than Cripples
Ghetto-Ok verse Vocab was'nt gret neither was ur punches.Your structure was ok but u need to work on Better Flow and Punches
No hate. Vote/ThirdDegree
Return the Favour0In my Sig Degree.

Ayo 3-1 uppin for votes.

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One

I want this battle over with can we please finsih it

DAMN

One

Voted For: ThirdDegree

ThirdDegree
u had a pretty nice flow here...tha punches were hard and connected too..nice vocab..bit oo & nice multi's too way 2 use them...but overall you had a good flow mayn...

ghetto cripple
overall...ur drop was pretty wack... don't skip lines and don't add tha /'s at the end...but all i got to say to use it to elevate more & maybe in the future u'll do good

Voted For: ThirdDegree

3rd got this one
ure metas were good punches hit hard flow was tight rhyming was good his verse had a nice flow and ight structre wordplay was good 2
best line-Dis Cripple got Parkinsons, whenever I post he shakes..
..Ya careers goin downhill, Like wheel chairs with no brakes..
ghetto ure verse was ight it had some punches they didnt hit as hard though but u had a nice flow rhymin was ight
flow and structre were kinda off tohug
best line-fool dont bother to fight back struggle or yell/
im'a rip the pipes out ya throat, creatin' a lyrical hell/
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