dirtboy69 vs Pestilence
 

50 points on the line
first to five votes win
or a 3-0 shutout for a k.o
ten line max and verses due tomorrow

here's mine :



This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/
Swinging daggers at you to watch you bleed to death with open wrists/
Like a blind man on a target range your punches are a sure miss/
Killing this kid’s verse with a ruler so you know your straight losin/
Like drunk monkeys in straight jackets your punches aren’t abusing/
With every punch I throw this battle approaches conclusion/
Following the trail of losses just find out where you’ve been/
I’d use your name in this verse but that’s been done/
Then again that’s like me winning this battle cause I’ve already won/

and people vote on my other battle it's been going for like almost a week
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=15268

ANTE UP !!!!! 1:45 ET TIME real quick freestyle
 

I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//
you should of stayed at home cause you Bitch-made//
but now ima spit in yo face like a 12 gauge at yo ribcage//
you cant use my name cause yo shit is all Pre-MADE//
I Cremate you when I spit off this mind of mine//
so ima hit Dirtboy wit my SIX-NINES//
so Dirtboy I must be "Drunk" and blind~ cause I aint really fuckin feelin yo rhymes//1

not long enough battle.
Verses in Vote.1
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Here is a little warning,don't bring attention to your words like that,they were size fucking 15,that isn't needed,don't make your words any bigger than size 1.

Thank You and have a nice day:D

uppin this for votes now

dirt came real ill but you could tell how pest came raw from the DOME!! " Too much Orginization equals wack RAPresentation" vote = pest

uppin this that vote doesn't make much sense but i ain't gonna whine about it so it's 1-0 for the other guy

don't sleep vote on this battle

more votes !!

Re: dirtboy69 vs Pestilence
 

I loved this begginin, that shit was hott. the flow was nice i was feelin both flows, i think pest got the win though, his punches were harder, i don't even know if you countin this vote cuz i am a newbie but if you do i gotta barely give it to pest
vote=pestilence

2-0 for him uppin for the come back

a dirt boy some times people see shit different. and i see it YOUR WAY.

dirt
"This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/"
that took it!!! need I say more


couldn't feel this line:

"I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//"

vote= dirt

2-1 for pest now let's finish this

Vote= DirtBoy
 

Feeding off a verse is bitch.. an plus if your gunna feed at least make it ill as fuck..

the "slapping with open fist" part was an ill line.. But i dont feel like quoteing

Dirt came with a better punchs,metas,and rhyme scheme
But barley.. If pest wouldnt have fed i imght have liked his verse a lil more... But yah... Dirt came better

one

stupid ass
 

yo Pestilence had tha better verse?
I thought if you go second you spose to feed off your
emcees a little cause you want your verse to be better than theres? am I right?

good one so this is how pestlence started


ok more: aight then pest came back



like what bigg40 said yo Rappresentation and pest got it
his punches came harder than Dirtboy and it was all freestyle

DirtBoy69

- This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
- I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/
- Swinging daggers at you to watch you bleed to death with open wrists/
- Like a blind man on a target range your punches are a sure miss/

Tight opening. Really feeling that.

Pestilence~

- you cant use my name cause yo shit is all Pre-MADE//

Best line of yours.

- so Dirtboy I must be "Drunk" and blind~ cause I aint really fuckin feelin yo rhymes//

Nice word play here.

My vote goes to DirtBoy69. I was feeling his flow and he came real raw with his opening 4 lines. And cause this battle is so short (10 lines), that's half the verse. Decent punches all around.

aight
 

3-4 you right now. some bullshit votes but uppin

i will have to go with dirtyboy69 cuz pest took from him and didn't even feed off of his line right and it seems like the whole time he was feeding off of dirtyboy69

i win i win i win