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AutoMATIK™ 10-27-04 04:53 PM

My First Recorded Freestyle!
 
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=1731395&q=Lo

i was really just testin shit,cuz i never used cool edit or soundclick before,so tell me how i can improve this shit ...

AutoMATIK™ 10-27-04 05:04 PM

oh and shoutouts to Blown Out Productions for the beat .. much love

e-dubz 10-27-04 05:05 PM

thats pretty tyte..good flow and lyrics, the quality could have been better but overall i liked it.. stay up nigga

AutoMATIK™ 10-27-04 05:08 PM

my mic sucks ... i found it ... so yeh imma get a new one soon ,hopefully ..

Artemis 10-27-04 05:29 PM

weerd, nice first audio. Quality wack like I said. ;) but you got nice flow and lyrics. Got potential nigka. SPuLMATIK sickness... weerd. :D

AutoMATIK™ 10-27-04 05:37 PM

no doubt hoe!

SpulMATIK™ bitches ...

fluidmoon 10-27-04 06:23 PM

wow, nice job on this man, damn,you got some style,,lol,and good flow, yea,the production isn't great,but yo, its the delivery and ability to ride a damn beat,and you got both...great job..pc

AutoMATIK™ 10-27-04 06:24 PM

thanks ma ... much love .. :)

K.ontroverz.Y 10-27-04 06:58 PM

LOL AT U FOUND UR MIC ROFL LMFAO...anywayz this was a decent peice..as i sed on aim..jus fix ur quality and u certified DOPeness

AutoMATIK™ 10-27-04 07:13 PM

yeh ... thanks ...

Key... 10-27-04 08:33 PM

Quality sucks....................lol i was exactly like that

get a betta mic also cuz i hear yo background a little

for a freestyle....shit was decent....the beat is crazy...lol i need to get on that beat...and also put yo vocals up...cuz the beat is lil louder than yo vocals..but fo the 1st shit it was pretty good. potential flow is aite......delivery.....more energy mic presence...was aite....it was str8 all around

AutoMATIK™ 10-30-04 11:05 AM

blah .. imma get a better mic soon ...

AutoMATIK™ 10-30-04 10:10 PM

uppin this ishh ...

Mike Lowery2 10-31-04 02:26 AM

gangsta shit nigka, keep doin' yo thang. word to yo daddies. :shoot:

AutoMATIK™ 10-31-04 08:35 AM

word ... thanks for the feed ..

Meziaa. 10-31-04 11:59 AM

Tru!

I like ya free - style...
Niggas always say it's a free and shit, but it be written...
So if this is free, pretty hot...
I like ya voice...
Flow is pretty good...
Only thing is ya was puffing on the mic and shit lmao..
But other then that, good shit...
Keep doing this rap shit!

Meziaa. 10-31-04 12:05 PM

Oh yea...
And with cool edit...
Fade out ya beat, after ya done spittin because,
It just makes ya track as long as the beat is...
After you spit, the beat rode on for like an extra minute and some change.

AutoMATIK™ 10-31-04 02:25 PM

yeh yeh ... im gettn a new mic ...

Mike Lowery2 10-31-04 02:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by AutoMATIK™
word ... thanks for the feed ..

damn str8t nigga. What's SPuLMATIK, nigga? :shoot:

AutoMATIK™ 11-01-04 09:24 PM

uppin this ... im also lookin to colab wit some1 ... holla at me

DaKnockZ 11-01-04 09:58 PM

damn son shit was hot fa real.

what was that beat? shit was off the chains and u rode it perfect wit ya flow son

word- good look keep it up- one

AutoMATIK™ 11-01-04 10:13 PM

Blown out records or somethin ... i stole it off there soundclick


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