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J.T. KNUCKLES 07-02-02 02:12 PM

biggdz40cal/VS/PESTILENCE
 
rulz
10-20 barz
no crew votes
D/R hate Votes
verses due by tomarow.1

J.T. KNUCKLES 07-02-02 04:37 PM

ima bout to hit you wit more Barz than tha lenth of your name//
and the'll be more deadly than you sniffin anthrax grains//
my skills are fully trained your just a disgrase~ a waste//
you just dead weight so please leave tha human race//
you can't face or phaze this nigga called pestilence//
the only place you can find me is where your girl's been//
cause iam in the deepset spots where you could'nt fit in//
cause I got tha Biggest Dick in this so called battle event//
This is Rap Batlin of course I don't care if I offend//
while you sit there Crying hoping for this battle to end//
like they say leave your feelings at tha front door//
and you must of dawg cause I aint Feelin you at all//
you just a lost cause cause tha only thing you can hit is yo blo doll//
we can go back and forth in this battle like a see-saw//
but if we do then pest C-4 gonna go up and blow up nothin but yo fuckin toes off//
so then I can truly saw tha I DEfeeted bigg 40 Cal//

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 06:07 PM

BIGG DOGG about ta speak


pest, drops shit like pigeons small and WEAK...
with that WHITE SHIT on tha side of his mouth when he SPEAKS...
as matter fact you shouldnt even SPEAK AT ALL...
like tha BITCHES I Be keepin when THE EVENING FALLS.
YOU NEED SOME BALLS.. so whe YOU NEED JUST CALL...
and I'll be there with my TESTOSTERONE SEEDS and ALL...
and when my seimen FAllS, your bitch will LICC IT UP..
every single last drop til SHE'S HICCIN'UP now LISTEN UP you can't but if you could you'd SEE... how my TEXT is in your ass cuz I know you CAN'T READ...
if you could you wouldn't even fucc with a BIGG DOGG..
your STEPPin' with PUPPY FEET I'm WALKIN' WITH BIGG PAWS.
I'll CUT YOU like a JIGSAW, SMALL LITTLE PIECES...
I GOT THE PEST PUZZLED HOPIN' HE DONT FALL THRU THE CREASES!!!

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 06:09 PM

UPPIN THIS SHIT PIMPS! VOTE PLAYAS

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 07:10 PM

upin this shit!
come on someone vote!

M-Body 07-02-02 07:16 PM

1st things 1st...Not tha most exciting battle I've seen. As a matter of fact I wasn't feelin either of ya's. But since I gotta vote IM-a go wit Bigg on this. His flow was alot more smoothe an easy ta follow. He had some better punchs too I guess. No Beef...~1~

LILMAFIA_GaNgStA 07-02-02 07:18 PM

yo biggs ill flow im votin for biggs, i felt him in dis one. Yo dawg dont forget we got our battle, i got it setup i'll post a lil later dont forget.

Peace

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 07:20 PM

good lookin pimps. thnx for tha critisism, M body..


and I'll see u real soon LIL G

2-0 for me keep it comin'

DirtBoy69 07-02-02 07:49 PM

close battle here i liked both verses but there was somethings that stood out in the mechanics and that's how i'm able to make my vote

flow= pestilence

volcab=pestilence

punches= pestilence

things like multi's and word play could of been use more on both sides but as far as i'm concered my vote is for

pestilence

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 08:01 PM

thnx for the vote. 2 -1 BIGGDZ
lets settle this



uppin for votes lets get this done

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 09:09 PM

we need more votes please
 
uppin this 1`

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 10:33 PM

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still uppin

biggdz40cal 07-02-02 11:18 PM

uppin

rollindubbs 07-03-02 01:37 AM

biggdz40cal
 
MY VOTE IS FOR BIGGDZ40CAL HE HAD BETTER PUNCHES AND EASIER FLOWS TO UNDERSTAND.NO COMPETITION.SORRY PESTILENCE,,,BUT I CALL IT LIKE I SEE IT........PEACE

~SHELZZ~ 07-03-02 07:50 AM

aight
 
Quote:
ima bout to hit you wit more Barz than tha lenth of your name//
and the'll be more deadly than you sniffin anthrax grains//
my skills are fully trained your just a disgrase~ a waste//
you just dead weight so please leave tha human race//
you can't face or phaze this nigga called pestilence//


that was ILL Pest had betta punches throughout most of tha battle. both verses were kinda weak though.

vote=pest

biggdz40cal 07-03-02 11:47 AM

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uppin 1

L O C FUNK 07-03-02 02:32 PM

VOTE= BIGG DZ

PEST UR VERSE JUST LOST ME. IT SEEMED AS IF U WERE JUST PUTTING WORDS 2GETHER WITHOUT EVEN THINKING. UR PUNCHES DIDN'T EVER REALLY CONNECT FOR THE HARD HIT. ALTHOUGH I FELT BOTH VERSES COULD'VE BEEN BETTER WITH A LITTLE MORE EFFORT I FELT BIGG JUST HAD MORE PUNCHES THAT CONNECTED AND RHYME SCHEME WAS BETTER.

FAV BIGG LINES:"if you could you wouldn't even fucc with a BIGG DOGG..
your STEPPin' with PUPPY FEET I'm WALKIN' WITH BIGG PAWS.

biggdz40cal 07-03-02 03:33 PM

4-2 uppin

biggdz40cal 07-03-02 04:38 PM

uppin for votes!!
almost done

biggdz40cal 07-03-02 08:05 PM

4 - 2 uppin votes already

try'n to get this one over PLEEEEASSSSE!

biggdz40cal 07-04-02 01:38 PM

uppin...

G. Buttersworth 07-04-02 02:05 PM

Yo i'm editing this vote cause i didn't effectivly ACTUALLY read
the eniterty of the battle
so let's get started:

Pest's Verse

ima bout to hit you wit more Barz than tha lenth of your name//
and the'll be more deadly than you sniffin anthrax grains//

{this was an ight intro}

my skills are fully trained your just a disgrase~ a waste//
you just dead weight so please leave tha human race//

{This was a decent personal}

like they say leave your feelings at tha front door//
and you must of dawg cause I aint Feelin you at all

hahah nice lil personal right here}

you just a lost cause cause tha only thing you can hit is yo blo doll//
we can go back and forth in this battle like a see-saw//
{nice lil word play here+ decent personal}


but if we do then pest C-4 gonna go up and blow up nothin but yo fuckin toes off//
so then I can truly saw tha I DEfeeted bigg 40 Cal//
{Didn't like this finisher but is was a ight verse all together}

40Cal's Verse

pest, drops shit like pigeons small and WEAK...
with that WHITE SHIT on tha side of his mouth when he SPEAKS
{nice intro here very effective word-play and punch}

as matter fact you shouldnt even SPEAK AT ALL...
like tha BITCHES I Be keepin when THE EVENING FALLS
{ nice personal here}

YOU NEED SOME BALLS.. so whe YOU NEED JUST CALL...
and I'll be there with my TESTOSTERONE SEEDS and ALL
{nice personal here felt that 1}

could you'd SEE... how my TEXT is in your ass cuz I know you CAN'T READ
{nice punch here mixed wit a lil personal}

if you could you wouldn't even fucc with a BIGG DOGG..
your STEPPin' with PUPPY FEET I'm WALKIN' WITH BIGG PAWS{nice word play here}

I'll CUT YOU like a JIGSAW, SMALL LITTLE PIECES...
I GOT THE PEST PUZZLED HOPIN' HE DONT FALL THRU THE CREASES
{very nice finisher very effective}

I Voted Earlier 4 Pest but that's cuz i didn't read the verse
entirly
but my vote now goes to 40Cal
simple fact it flowed smoothly and the personals came out more effective
and the punches hit harder

Psy verse smoothed nicely you has your couple of highlights
here and there but 40 came out more effectove

Vote=40Cal

biggdz40cal 07-04-02 02:35 PM

what's a good lyric if you can't picture it being heard in audio!

thats where RAP STARTED! AUDIO! STREET CORNERS! PEOPLE FREESTYLIN ( ON BEAT ). NOT LYK HALF THESE LAME ASS so called Lyricists.

thx for the vote anyway PIMPER!

good lookin out! 4-3

uppin..

G. Buttersworth 07-04-02 03:37 PM

doga what i meant b4 was that this text shit is diff from audio
and i hear what u sayin we these lame so called lyricists
i said that cuz alot of these so called vets criticize me
for sounding "too Audio"
don't know what if fukin means either
but num sayin it's diff
blah my 2 in change
Oh and
40cal
change the votes you won
5-2 i think

biggdz40cal 07-04-02 03:46 PM

thnx $1000 for being honest.

BUT DONT LET THESE HATIN SECRATARIES down your skillz.
I know I wont.
RAP IS WHAT IT IS RAP! IF YOU CAN'T RHYME ON TIME YOU'RE JUST A FUCKIN POET! nuthin against poetry. BUT THESE ARE RAP BATTLES. so battle it out.

and as for PESTILENCE sorry pimper 5-2

I WIN.

GONE...

biggdz40cal 07-04-02 05:04 PM

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BIGGDOGG 40 CAL THA VICTOR!!!


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