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DrasticMeasureZ vs C h a o S
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10- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ALL HOUSE RULEZ Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-27-04 at 10:00 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
C h a o S has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:32 PM.
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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:33 PM.
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ur messing with the real arsonist,my punches leave more burn-spots than dalmation
punches attatch with spikes rippin ya inner tissue,like an bullet went throug givin u an fixation yo i do chemical changes with my punches spit str8 fire and freeze them so dey look like hollow points rejects (wild) "no one wants to battle da kid" Ok ur an kid trying go into big man shoes,i'll murder dis kid still won't be charge for child neglect dis kid try throwing punches but dey aint touching my cheek,trying to spit flow,ya rhymes couldnt be flower if u attatch to an windmill nigga thinking he bustin caps,when he only shootin bb'z,in real life i'll bust a cap in ya ass go to africa and sell ya head like an mill (inry) if ya extolled to god ya rhymes still wouldnt be blessed,da only reason ya punches aint coming harder cause u writing on tha pad leavin dis kid blood leaking like dem famouz phillyies cheeze-steak in an bag,u take long to throw a hard,punch send that (pack a punch) its e-z to repel ya punches like an dude try to rob at daylight, u dont have tha heart nor tha bravery to beat me ya being de-tooped if dis nigga went to da source award he wont be winning tha best freestyle battler of da yr,he'll get da wackest kid on tha planet TROUP (HIE) -------------------------------------------------------- millinery-means selling caps (hats) so i said head extolled-means praying de-troop- u know how tha real soliders be brave and shit he'z not fixation-meaning rippin tissues in an surgery windmill-somthing that spins w/wind phillies cheese-steak-when somtimes u carry tha food in tha bag da grease leaks somtimes |
I'll shatter your dreams, there's denying son!
& make wholes in ya chest... that sadam could hide in one! ^ Played ? nah . . But the fact is fact's Chaos can rap. . .. Only ya mum could BEAT-ME ............................^ & and i aint chatting about this match!!!! I'll reck ya face off bitch.. & who are you to match me? I'm the BEST.. but drastic.. is wait. WHO.. EXACTLY?!?!?! Fuck an hour . . you retarded bitch all i need is a minutes.. I'll take you out of YA RETIREMENT.. and beat ya ass back init!!! U need to elevate.. U suck kid. go cry to strobe..! ayo I SAw HIM looking at TUTORIAL's... IN INVSIBILE MODE!!!! (yeah you should be ashamed of yaself) |
I cant read a word of ya verse and those ARE SOME STRETCHED UP lines man . . make sure you work on that..........
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
checking this shit and i gotta admit CHAOS sucks more than i thought. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
sorry man that was supposed to be feed back. man i'm such a clutz.
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Yo That Vote Wasnt Explain Come Back And Explain It U Can U Know
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Aight Aight Uppin For Votes Holla Uppin For Votes
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Fucking hate vote U BITCH because i came to ur fucking THREAD AND SAID U SUCK DICK..
im having yo ass banned for cheating. |
U Cant Have Him Banned He Aint Done Nothing Wrong So.........sorry Mayne
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YES U TWO ARE DICKRIDERS AND U WILL BE BANNED
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...74&page=1&pp=15 here's the proof of u two sucking each others dick........... bullshit vote ur wackass verse should get 0 votes... |
That Dont Explain Shit Homie,,,,,,,,,,,,rofl Nigga Just Stay Quiet Before Strobe Expose U As An "u A Dumbest Nigga On Tha Site"
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it wasnt a vote man it was supposed to be feed back. calm down and battle me.
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
okay this battle goes to drastic okay breakdown chaos you had good flow, punches were aight coulda been better, personals were good still coulda been better, wordplay lacked, vocab was basic..and lines were basic too..and fix ya structure its horrible... drastic-aight u came harder, better punches, flow was good, structure was off, lines were stretched some, your font makes it harder to read...fix it...,personals were good, meta's were good, punches were hittin harder, wordplay was nice, and vocab was okay both need to elevate some tho...fix ya structures....no hate man peace~1 v/drastic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
What the fuck another unexplained vote ... DID U EVEN READ THE VERSES??? or do you need to go to specsavers
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what are you talking about i explained it all i read the verses thank you very much i told you how i felt each did with each catagory just cuz you dont take a verse and say wha u think of each bar dont mean you didnt explain it so quit complainin you just mad cuz u aint got a vote yet
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cuz i told what you needed to work on and your flaws and what each did good too so actually if you read the rules that is explained stupid herb dont know what he talking about
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=157651&page=2
You need to BREAK DOWN MY VERSE AND TELL ME WOT I DID WRONG THERE IS NO PROOF IN YO VOTE THAT U READ ANY OF THE VERESES HERBALS |
you dont need to break down the verse i told you what u did wrong in my vote in the fisrt place but just to please your herbish ass ill do it so you get off my nuts crying about how its not explained your a NEWB so you obviously dont know shit about the rules of voting cuz it dont say anywhere in it that you need to break down each verse bar by bar and comment on it so you know what im not and if you try to get my verse d/r'ed ill get it fixed and counted so dont even try it you lil herb
Peace~1 |
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just to show how much an herb u are you posted the link to the battle all this is being posted in like its all that hard to get your verse on the 1st page..what an idiot nuff said.. |
This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
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w/e lets get some votes in hurrrrrr lets go ~!...................
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Upin for my win
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son ur not getting an win..........................w/e uppin for votes holla...........word
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
Choas: k bad stucture weak punchlines weak vocabulary pretty much you got merked...i cant say to much elese but damn you need the mad elevation your best line: Fuck an hour . . you retarded bitch all i need is a minutes.. I'll take you out of YA RETIREMENT.. and beat ya ass back init!!! ^thats it... DrasticMeasurez: good verse kinda off on the stucture but good punches good vocabulary not realy to much multis but a few...your best line probably: ur messing with the real arsonist,my punches leave more burn-spots than dalmation punches attatch with spikes rippin ya inner tissue,like an bullet went throug givin u an fixation ^^thats your best line...your opener... vote: DrasticMeasures |
weeeeeeeeeerd uppin fo votes uppin damn it how long dis been slept uppin
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Shut the fuck up you stupid BITER XCLUSIVE...
stupid ass vote did he get on your dick tooo.. GET SOME votes on this .. some REAL votes i merked this herb. |
uppin for votes damn it uppin for votes word...........uppin
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mayne uppin for votes been open for an long time uppin for votes holla~! will return fav'z put links
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Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin For Votes
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Upin I Won This
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This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
Your Verse Was More Complex Had Better Punches.. And Was Good From Start To Finish.. Had Me Really Reading IT The Whole Way.. K9 Ya Verse Was To Simple, It Had Simple Punches And One Word Multies.. It Just Wasnt A Good Verse For You.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
jus checking.........................................
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Chea...................................damn One Of My Old Battles And My Last...........uppin~! Chea
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
whoa drastic definitely killed c h a o s drastic - im not likin the font..but that didnt take away from ur verse..u killed this cat..the vocab was good and u had some punches in there that i was feelin..all of ur rhymes attacked him and that was good..ur structure was good...overall - 7/10 c h a o s - holy crap ur structure is so messed up..ur opener was creative but it didnt really hit..i think lines about cats moms are played out so that really took away from ur verse..not any hard punches or good personals..pretty much a basic verse...overall - 5/10 vote - DrasticMeasurez |
This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
man what the fuck drastic!!! i can bearly read you shit... plus your lines are stretched......... and dont put xplanations for you punches ok.....
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
U still some shit butu was better than him u ugly peace of shit Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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