(x) CeEd vs Kwell
 

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(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 11:21 PM.

yo kwell accept man plz
ur good i wanna battle u

Yo Accepttttttttt Man

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 12:11 AM.

I dont give a fuck what your name is, son u aint exceedin me
u think u the Don? well lez see how u sound after u add your Key
jackass--when it comes to dope lines, ya known ta' bring none
you're so dumb u'd,
...stack up couches n shit, jus to show peeps ya sofa kingdom
how u gon diss my lines kid, it's almost like u gotta rhyme glitch
look, i'ma deafen u, cuz thats the only way u gittin signed bitch
jus face it--u aint admired 'round here, so jus stop n quit
u like a bird, aint nobody wanna be around when u droppin shit
this herb made a trip down memory lane n got his ass lost
so i'ma drop this bum, n i aint talkin bout laughin my ass off
ya weak punches cant harm me, u'll be fucked up wit jabs
n u aint elevated--it's jus that ya abused pussy is up fo' grabs
fuckin fag, out the rap game is where i'm sendin you wheelin'
cuz marsupials are the only things hiphoppin in New Zealand
why the fuck haven't u fallen off yet--even tho u soft?
i guess i gotta pretend i'm as wack as u, jus to throw u off

KWELL, get this b**** dwell, rebelled,the (X) cast a spell while i VANISH you by the count of 10//
Im an M.C. Master of Ceremonies,Mic of Control//
Get the b**** to kill himself like MARYLIN MUNROE//
KWELL, YOU LACK THE FLOW,i'll POP your PROBE//

The Kids scared hes already a NERVOUS WRECK//
The kats record is crazed ill have t osnap his NECK//
I like a really bad dream get this kat afraid' like hes had LEPRESY//
The kid is scared cuz his rhymes have left him wit' a VISECTOMY//
The thing(him) is terrifed thinkn' hell b killed by another attack of Histimene//
The kids name not KWELL, hes a girl wit' a name like "MELANIE"//

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Voted For: (x) CeEd

(X) CeED
KWELL, get this b**** dwell, rebelled,the (X) cast a spell while i VANISH you by the count of 10//
Im an M.C. Master of Ceremonies,Mic of Control//
Get the b**** to kill himself like MARYLIN MUNROE//
KWELL, YOU LACK THE FLOW,i'll POP your PROBE//

^^^good shit had some multi's in there good vocab kid wordplay was that? (X)=10?? Marylin Munroe line was cool rated 7/10

The Kids scared hes already a NERVOUS WRECK//
The kats record is crazed ill have t osnap his NECK//
I like a really bad dream get this kat afraid' like hes had LEPRESY//
The kid is scared cuz his rhymes have left him wit' a VISECTOMY//
The thing(him) is terrifed thinkn' hell b killed by another attack of Histimene//
The kids name not KWELL, hes a girl wit' a name like "MELANIE"//

Flow came up good structure more Multi's so and so againe ya Vocabulary was there good shit but one thing drop tha "//" played kid other then that good flow 5/10


KWELL
I dont give a fuck what your name is, son u aint exceedin me
u think u the Don? well lez see how u sound after u add your Key
jackass--when it comes to dope lines, ya known ta' bring none
you're so dumb u'd,
...stack up couches n shit, jus to show peeps ya sofa kingdom
how u gon diss my lines kid, it's almost like u gotta rhyme glitch
look, i'ma deafen u, cuz thats the only way u gittin signed bitch
jus face it--u aint admired 'round here, so jus stop n quit
u like a bird, aint nobody wanna be around when u droppin shit
this herb made a trip down memory lane n got his ass lost
so i'ma drop this bum, n i aint talkin bout laughin my ass off
ya weak punches cant harm me, u'll be fucked up wit jabs
n u aint elevated--it's jus that ya abused pussy is up fo' grabs
fuckin fag, out the rap game is where i'm sendin you wheelin'
cuz marsupials are the only things hiphoppin in New Zealand
why the fuck haven't u fallen off yet--even tho u soft?
i guess i gotta pretend i'm as wack as u, jus to throw u off

^^^basic rhymes kid alot of bitch this bitch that come on now structure was cool but my vote was based on vocabulary you got a 6/10 on ya flow no hate

big ups both yall

Vote-(X) CeED

This was feedback posted for (x) CeEd
 

checking the polls.......................................

thanx peeps uppin 4 votezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

This was feedback posted for Kwell
 

weak battle....elevate......................

This was feedback posted for (x) CeEd
 

better verse here (x) elevation is going well!!

uppin this shit....n Kon, stfu n quit hatin on me

y o peeps plz kolze thsi shit dwn by votin' thanxxx

Voted For: Kwell

Kwell
I dont give a fuck what your name is, son u aint exceedin me
u think u the Don? well lez see how u sound after u add your Key
^NICE OPNER
jackass--when it comes to dope lines, ya known ta' bring none
you're so dumb u'd,
...stack up couches n shit, jus to show peeps ya sofa kingdom
^OKAY
how u gon diss my lines kid, it's almost like u gotta rhyme glitch
look, i'ma deafen u, cuz thats the only way u gittin signed bitch
^KINDA OF A ‘NO’ HEA…
jus face it--u aint admired 'round here, so jus stop n quit
u like a bird, aint nobody wanna be around when u droppin shit
^OKAY
this herb made a trip down memory lane n got his ass lost
so i'ma drop this bum, n i aint talkin bout laughin my ass off
^PRETTY DECENT HEA
ya weak punches cant harm me, u'll be fucked up wit jabs
n u aint elevated--it's jus that ya abused pussy is up fo' grabs
^lol…NICE HEA…
fuckin fag, out the rap game is where i'm sendin you wheelin'
cuz marsupials are the only things hiphoppin in New Zealand
^OKAY PUNCH
why the fuck haven't u fallen off yet--even tho u soft?
i guess i gotta pretend i'm as wack as u, jus to throw u off
^DECENT CLOSER

(x) CeEd
KWELL, get this b**** dwell, rebelled,the (X) cast a spell while i VANISH you by the count of 10//
Im an M.C. Master of Ceremonies,Mic of Control//
^UM…NO
Get the b**** to kill himself like MARYLIN MUNROE//
KWELL, YOU LACK THE FLOW,i'll POP your PROBE//
^(GET RID OF THA CAPS)…NO HEA ALSO
The Kids scared hes already a NERVOUS WRECK//
The kats record is crazed ill have t osnap his NECK//
^…OKAY
I like a really bad dream get this kat afraid' like hes had LEPRESY//
The kid is scared cuz his rhymes have left him wit' a VISECTOMY//
^KINDA OF AN OKAY HERE
The thing(him) is terrifed thinkn' hell b killed by another attack of Histimene//
The kids name not KWELL, hes a girl wit' a name like "MELANIE"//
^A ‘NO’ CLOSER…

Overall
my vote goes to Kwell
cuz I felt like this person had
harder punches…a nice flow…
and a pretty decent structure &
vocab to it.

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Voted For: Kwell

v/ Kwell

First offs, both of your ryhmes were nice...honestly though, not like you two usually do.

BREAK DOWN:

Kwell

STRUCTURE-WEAK
RYHMES-STRONG
VOCAB-WEAK
PUNCHLINE-STRONG
CREATIVITY-AVERAGE

Out of 5 stars recieved 3 and half

(x) CeEd

STRUCTURE-Average
RYHMES-Strong
VOCAB-TOO STRONG(SOME WORDS PPL DONT KNOW)
PUNCHLINE-WEAK, not one that stands out in my head
CREATIVITY-AVERAGE

v/Kwell

vote appreciated..........uppin for some more........

Voted For: Kwell

(x) Ced
bad structure = bad flow.. you had a lot of noob lines and played punches... didn't have much of a rhyme structure either and nothing was well worded or put together, overall you could of done a lot better.. or maybe not? keep it up.

Kwell
saw some ok/decent lines.. sum played, like the bird concept and some other one, but you did not have to come that hard to win... its obvious you did as good as what was needed.. making it clear you won.

Vote: Kwe;;

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