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BkBrawla vs Paradox
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6- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting all house rulez........................word :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-28-04 at 05:16 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
yo where is that kid.....................
he stalling time....................... i aint gonna accept until he accepts................... .......................word |
Paradox has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 05:01 PM.
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BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 05:02 PM.
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like an fake stampede u aint stomping me,like ya rhymes da only thing u stomping is in turd (ya rhymes are shit)
ya punches arnet tha hardest nor da greatest u should save dem wack rhymes for blurps..............................(1) my rhymes are da flowest and tha windest exposing them panties under ya pink skirt (da wind lefting up his skirt) my punches got da nigga feelings hurt but somtimes u gots to take drastic-measurez exert (him) (taking advantage of disability peep'z)..............(2) iam gonna leave dis last-line with holes da size of pimples,break ya face than car dentures, punching ya head out of ya brains,leavin ya thoughless,da battle is ova leave him with holes of dimples (3) |
you winnin? you didnt refuse but you dont have an excuse...
better chance in court filing a suit against me for verbal abuse.. your sitten there stunned, like my boy Chris Reeves... thinking you can stand up, seems no one believes... you had a dream, thinking to yourself that "you can beat'em"... well certainly Martin Luthor King didnt "give you that freedom"... |
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Voted For: Paradox
First of all i would like to say BK brawla cheated he spat about 10 lines . . . Break down you winnin? you didnt refuse but you dont have an excuse... better chance in court filing a suit against me for verbal abuse.. your sitten there stunned, like my boy Chris Reeves... thinking you can stand up, seems no one believes... you had a dream, thinking to yourself that "you can beat'em"... well certainly Martin Luthor King didnt "give you that freedom"... Verbal abuse not hard hitting punch it was decent. Chris Reeves.. aha that punch was better. And the matin lutho king lien was str8 illl.. Vs like an fake stampede u aint stomping me,like ya rhymes da only thing u stomping is in turd (ya rhymes are shit) ya punches arnet tha hardest nor da greatest u should save dem wack rhymes for blurps..............................(1) my rhymes are da flowest and tha windest exposing them panties under ya pink skirt (da wind lefting up his skirt) my punches got da nigga feelings hurt but somtimes u gots to take drastic-measurez exert (him) (taking advantage of disability peep'z)..............(2) iam gonna leave dis last-line with holes da size of pimples,break ya face than car dentures, These lines were stretched lacked flow.. 0 punchlines and he mis spelt alot of his words and u explained ya verse like the wack herb u are. u said stomping a TURD? what is a TURD makes no sense.. WACK rhyme for blurps sorry that was str8 wack and did not even hit. Paradox had better flow, vocab & he made sense.. also his punchlines conntected will better V/ Paradox. |
Voted For: BkBrawla
a weak battle overall. BK i thought u coulda came harder than this man..and u too paradox. really weak Punches:tie(both didnt have any hard hitting punches) Personals:Tie(basically none) Structure:Paradox Flow:Paradox Vocab:BkBrawla even though paradox had more things going for him ima vote for BK because paradox u were too simple and basic. nothing that was creative or original.....kinda a weak battle guys vote-BkBrawla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: BkBrawla
iam gonna leave dis last-line with holes da size of pimples,break ya face than car dentures, punching ya head out of ya brains,leavin ya thoughless,da battle is ova leave him with holes of dimples ^^Best bar. Not bad overall a little too mcuh expalinin n shit but not bad. Punches were decent and flow was ok. Vocab was pretty good. 6/10 you winnin? you didnt refuse but you dont have an excuse... better chance in court filing a suit against me for verbal abuse.. ^6BEst line no real punches. Simple at best. Vocab was mediocre and was altogether not good. 4/10 Return the Favor (in ma sig) One |
Voted For: Paradox
werd...you win...you had some nice punches there...opener is pretty good...closer is decent... other cat...flow was FUCKED...you explained yourself way too much...and I didnt understand part of your verse at all...you need to elevate... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
THANK YOU!!!!...jeez look at some of these voters....1-0 and 1-1 voted for him because they dont know how to vote...!!!!
you schema on the other hand, know what your talking about... |
werd...return the favor... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157373
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i`m 0-0
but i would beat both of you....... lets be serious now |
Voted For: BkBrawla
you burger king you won this cause you was raw as hell on his as lololol. but for real: you had flow style punches personal Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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return the favor |
This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
*ahem* just checking da votes see how everythings going on
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uppin 4 votes............
extrending to 50................ |
Voted For: BkBrawla
well done, i applaud BkBrawla. You had to say something about that Chris Reeves line. Paradox.. good but not nearly as much depth. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Paradox
punches: paradox.....opener was cocky...i lyke that flow: paradox....BK's verse was stretched...you coulda added multis to keep it from being stretched open: paradox..."turd and blurps" dont rhyme...paradox hit em short simple an sweet. close: paradox...they were both lacking, but BK's closing statements made no fucking sense...you remedial? _________ both verses coulda been A LOT better....Bk, if you hada put more effort in it(werdplay, better constructed punches, creativety) you woulda prolly got this one....ya'll both need to up ya skillz and keep battlin |
aiight thnks for the vote...and sorry that you didnt post in time in our battle...um..anyways uppin....
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This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
checkin polls for this battle is all im doing
peace~! |
uppin 4 vet votes...................................
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Voted For: Paradox
im gonna have to go with paradox on this one......... structure: neither one was too great....but bk's was the worst out of the two... punchlines: paradox prolly took this just because half of bk's punches made absolutely no sense at all....some were ok....this prolly could have went either way vocab: bk took this....paradox u have to work on your vocab....it could lose u a lot of votes in the future.... multis: neither one of you had one multi at all....you both have to work on that...it could cost u a lot of battles....if one of you would have had a few multis in there...that prolly woulda been the one i voted for because it was so close.... sorry bk...no hate at all......but i had to go with paradox because i thought his punches were a bit better.....this was not the greatest battle ive ever seen no hate to either one of you return the favor...post an honest vote on me vs. king dipset and me vs. destiny |
finally all of the DR votes are taken off.....uppin
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Voted For: Paradox
it sounds silly but paradox u aint elevated but ya 1st 4 lines murked him purely because of better wordplay...u closed tha coffin on this one coz ya opponents verse didnt make sense at all n u had punches n he didnt..well he did but there hard to read they dont flow so this goes ta paradox..peace man |
uppin 4 votes....................................cmon somebody finish it
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Voted For: Paradox
lol aight nice battle feelin both but paradox won this one i gotta say... Openin verse- Paradox structure- Tied Multis-B.B.k punchlines-both good punches but paradox took it metas-B.b.k overallverse-paradox close battle but u both did your thing no hate on this vote |
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