pugnacious hawk vs (x) CeEd
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-01-04 at 04:11 AM

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Old battle close - win

(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 05:12 AM.

pugnacious hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 05:13 AM.

watta name pugnasious hawk(LOL) man .................................................. ...............watta FREAKSHOW

My punches will TEAR you up, 'cuz they hurt and STING//
The kid calls himself a BIRD, but i've CLIPPED his WINGS//
The Bird's the worst i've Faced, its hard to Relate//
"QUICK THE BIRDS OUT! SOMEONE PUT HIM BACK IN HIS CAGE"//
They say if BIRDS shit on you, its always GOOD LUCK//
But this time "THE TABLES ARE TURNED" you,ll get Merked ,and thats the RESULT//
Now look at his RECORD 0-0 he's a very arrogant NEWB//
The"R.V." Stayer's stay is now well OVERDEW//

You see, you cant start nothin' dont know the meanin' of "PUGNACIOUS"//
"TWEETY" thinks he can fight But the KAT just ate him//
His style is like "BIRD POO" AND HAS nothin' RELATED//(HE AND bIRDS HAVE NOTHIN RELATED)

yo hurry the f*** u pkat( imean TWeety

yo peeps when i say newb its pronounced as (ne-ub)

yo xceed ima make ur eyes weep and ur neck bleed,
then youll see the underxceedage twitch in ur vain speed, blood freeze,
think twice before you verse me, curse me
all tht does is thirst me,
for tht bare skin flesh meat,
tear up ur ligaments, one by one, numerically,
generically, modify ur blood cells, to work in posteriority
ill teach more rhymes than uve learnt in nursery,
ill enter this Rap Verse cartographically,
ur experience counts for nothing as ur cleary worse than me,
your verses are ruder than a homophobic, pornographic scene,

Rite.. Uppin 4 Votesssssssssssss
Peepsssssssssssssssssss

yo xceed ima make ur eyes weep and ur neck bleed,
then youll see the underxceedage twitch in ur vain speed, blood freeze,
think twice before you verse me, curse me
all tht does is thirst me,
for tht bare skin flesh meat,
tear up ur ligaments, one by one, numerically,
generically, modify ur blood cells, to work in posteriority
ill teach more rhymes than uve learnt in nursery,
ill enter this Rap Verse cartographically,
ur experience counts for nothing as ur cleary worse than me,
your verses are ruder than a homophobic, pornographic scene,

yo peeeps shut this shit dwn ,, wit sum votessssssssssssss

This was feedback posted for (x) CeEd
 

both verse were iight....need tio work on elevation pretty much all categories were even except for personals...and i think thats what seperated this battle between use 2.....bby the way i read both verses 2 times and this is the best vote i can give....peace n wun

cmon guys lets get come votes in :laugh: FOR ME!!! :laugh2:

This was feedback posted for pugnacious hawk
 

nice^^.......checking polls, good first battle here hwak

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol man hawk ur a crack up didnt u read the message frm sole i ate u in personals...................lol hahahahahahahahhahahaha

uppin for you two!

yo peeps uppin 4 votezzzzzzzzzzz

cmon peeepsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssss

uppin for some votes peeeepess!!

kill you both in battles!

uppin for some votes!

Aww God Plz Just Kloze This Shit Dwn Wit Votes Ppl Plz Cmon Honest Votes Will B Returned Kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Thnx

peeeps cmon uppin this shit peepz kloze it wif sum votez cmon thnx

fuk cmon u bitches kloze this shit dwn plzplzplzpzllzpz

Voted For: (x) CeEd

i voted on this cuz im bored

punches- Exceed just more and harder hittin
personals- Exceed i guess for havin em
multis- Exceed for havin em
metas- Exceed for havin em (anyone seein a pattern?)
wordplay- Neither
humor- hawk, lol
structure- Exceed, though not great
flow- Exceed for better overall

Exceed dawg lose the // thats for herbs. um overall try better personals and try wordplay. and just elevate

Hawk u gotta work on structure, punches, personals, .... u see the pattern. u mostly self glorified, and your punches were weak. keep elevatin.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/ (x) CeEd (man i hate spellin that name)

pz

haha hey do i get money for bein the first to actually vote?

geez this is a really slept on battle. gl to gettin this closed. pz

yo ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ upppin 4 votez keep em cummmin cmon get this shit klozed dwn.................................... cum on

lol at personify.... ill give ya some cash buudy... uppin for this battle... you want me to close it?