Spul vs EyeDentikal
 

Battle Rules:

16-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate
*Explained/honest votes only*

Major beef had started here, don't know where it's going now, we'll see, and peeps...don't vote on my verse based on links

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EyeDentikal has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 12:16 AM.

SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 12:16 AM.

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Voted For: SPuL

wordup
spul
you had nice punches man funny as hell also,the personals were nice,u had decent flow and a good structure,not bad man...your punches hit clean in this and u had some nice wordplay...

eyedentikal
man you didnt have no wordplay really from what i saw but that dont really matter,ur punches were ok,the ur gay lines are madd and i mean madd played...so come with new witty shit next time cuz that isnt cracken,also ur flow was nice,and your structure was exceleent....not bad

overall
spull had the better punches and wordplay in this so ima say he wins this,eyedentikal you need to work on not coming played in the lines naw mean,other than that u had coo flow,and a dope ass structure...but keep battlin man u have madd potential....word up

v/spul

Voted For: SPuL

wont vote either, spul was poor here. and eyedentikal was played, i was over his verse once i began. the i daughter hoz line was good, rest was woot. spul ya had nice punches, but honestly ya wordplay was drunk. i was shocked to see this kinda verse from you. usually ya rhymes kill but seeing this, im questioning your ability. drunk, sleepy, getting dome all the while you keyed or wat? let me know. this isnt a vote, just feedback, in favor of spul.

Removed.. PM'ed that it was supposed to be feedback

spul used the gay line too, what kind of shit is that, lol, i guess ya didn't see that

nah, but I actually had personals intertwined with them, nah layins? cuz I mean you look like Banks and blah, but yea, good battle props. pc

This was feedback posted for EyeDentikal
 

dannnnnnnggggggggggggggggggggggg

one sided battle in my eyes......
eye you straight merked spul

spul you may of had some good lines but the gay banks jokes are played and aint real so that punch misses...and if you didnt have ur structure the way it is..itd be more screwed than u got in this battle.....and another thing like geez okay(take no offence)i assume ur black but you dont need to act like an idiot and say nigka this nigka that come on now have more complexity and stop usin it to fill ya lines...you should be more creative than that man....that ruines your verse more and ya posted hic pic like 20 times the actual size??whats that about....umm and the link about the call out made was dumb .. i mean come on thats what bitchslapped is made for...learn something damn....you cant even get your font stye or colr right..come on now.u know damn well that shoulda been simpler than typin....your more experienced than me and i have more complexity and vocab and wordplay that u do.....and i only starting gettin serious when i joined this site.....
but w/e you had an okay drop i suppose coulda been a lot better to me is what all that was about

eye-your verse had more complexity is black and didnt feel any need to say nigka..lol...had better vocab worplay punces..ect...ect...i could go on and on cuz u straight merk'd this boy.....dont even know why he bothered disgracin himself battling you...splu was another merk'd MC for fun..lol....liked how u incorporated the personals thats kewl..you have really funny punches too....good job fam keep it up

unanimously voted for eyedentikal

why does va's vote count when it clearly states that she was posting feedback???...does that seem strange to anyone else??

ohh and i meant to say WOULDA** unanimously voted for eyedentikal

umm... ok, an Actually I didn't resize that pic, kid, it was like that. And lol @ you sayin' you better than me. When you beat some actual good people come back. Go holla at Feeble Minded, who had his 26 battle streak ended by me. Then talk, kid. This wasn't my best verse, and i've seen yo verses, and you ain't that good kid. so stop talkin' all this wack shit. lol and wtf @ the call out shit? damn, you obviously don't kno how to read a battle and understand shit. lol but good battle I, send that PM. weerd pc upp....... oh, and streetryda don't post back in ehre freeposting, you already did it 3 times in a row. if you do i'll send you to strobe. get a herb exterminated. weerd :)

uppin' this shit.............................................. ..........8

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 

*ahem* Ahem* Whoa Nice Battle.......but I Cant Vote........but I Can Say That Spul Edge It With Dem Personals And Punches Nice Eye-dentikal U Had Good Punches Wordplay,,,,,,,,,,,,,and Personals,,,,,,,but Spul Had Tha Image,,,,,,,,and Tha Punches,,,,,,,so He Might Get Da Win On This Battle

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 

road to the buddyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!

Voted For: SPuL

Ok, both of you came with some pretty good punches, but SPuL outshined Scenario there. Both of you pulled some good personals too, Spul had a good one in his closer, Scen had a nice play off "Spulaken". But when it comes down to structure, Spul took it hands down. Scen you still got some work to be doin' on your lines, right now they're quite stretched, so work on shortening them down. Other than that you both dropped good verses, it was actually kinda close, but Spul just performed better all around...

Return the favor to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...

Voted For: EyeDentikal

aight yall this was a fairly tight battle... i liked it, it was fun to check out... it was fairly close tho... Eye has my vote tho with all around better wordplay, punches and personals... aight heres my breakdown....

Wordplay-Eye
Punches/personals-Eye
Structure-spul
Creativity-Eye
All around verse-Eye

this line from Eyes verse is SOLID, i think it was one of his best...

kid made a thread about the RV chat last night, but left out details
about how he was in a room with 8 fucking dudes and only 1 female


i liked that one a lot, i also liked the closer a lot as well... over all Eye takes this one with an overall better verse, spul your shit was aight, ive seen better tho... no hate tho hommie, he got you on this one tho.... punches and personals win battles... Eye had em so he takes this one............

VOTE-EYEdentikal

oh yeah and i forgot to add the fact that spul using that GIANT ass pic of Eye was kinda a shitty thing to do, kinda drastic dont ya think? all it was gonna do is show he looks like banks.... so u can used more played banks lines.... any way just add this to my last explination... good battle yall but Eye merked ya spul... no hate tho

damn, I didn't make the pic big!!! god damn, that's how it was when I tried puttin' it. but whatever, uppin' this.............................................. ........................................

Voted For: EyeDentikal

Jus like a "waitor" turned "editor"... I'll "serve" you the "news"
About how you called out SPuL, and then got... verbal abuse

this was a good opener.....8/10

cuz nigga, I will not lose, refuse, to float yo boat
... Don't even start to gloat, cuz like yo sig, you "need a vote

not a very good personal/but it was a good punch....7/10

Homo version of Banks, dress like him, his name you takin'
Must hate the nigka too, for the gay porn that you be makin'

umm...what does making gay porn have to do with hating lloyd banks..........2/10

Nigka you always fakin'... merkin' MC's for fun?
... Hell nah, fag, you be jerkin' inside their bun

inside there bun? is this a joke? don't try a personal if you can't follow it up...4/10

Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me
You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!!

umm..yes...initials would be a.o.d....good job....6/10

Nigka, don't step and change, cuz you're slow, jus like yo flows
The chances of you winnin' is small... kinda like yo fuckin' nose

this was weak....cause the nose itself doesn't define whether or not a person is attractive or not...therfor...you were making a statement..and not making fun of him......

2/10

You holdin' shit in,bee... you kno we fuckin' kno it
Look at yo face, you kno it too, your mouth expression show it

this was funny...good personal...but it could have been worded better.....7/10

Ain't no poet, why you flow it, nigka you flex in vain
There's a gap in our skill levels, hoe, like yo neck and chain's

just because theres a gap...it doesn't imply who is better...so that wasn';t very complete.......6/10

overall score 42/80
average score per bar = 5.25/10

over all..you had a few good lines....but some were really incredibly weak...i know your talented..you just didn't do well in this battle..i think you were goin for somethin...but whatever it was..it wasn't effective..atleast not with me....no hate....i'm just callin it like i see it...

now i know that sexual lines are played but spul really must be gay
he's battling tha q, five source ceo with banks attempting a 3 way

good opener/personal 9/10

kid seems to get attached to hookers who like to search for net dick
cause without a job, welfare, or $ going to the bank would be hectic

umm...wasn't feelin too much....4/10

punches and bars r damaging ya perfect record, i'll leave spul aken
cause posing as banks in gay porn was how his virginity was taken

didn't like this....4/10

u even said it ya damn self "this fag gonna get it" then u cheered
why? cause u be forever getting spermed delivered in ya rear

this gay stuff is gettin old...2/10

don't know why u even accepted this battle cause i slaughter foes
so u stand aside and tell ya bitch bend over cause i daughter hoz

2nd line was played...2/10

kid made a thread about the RV chat last night, but left out details
about how he was in a room with 8 fucking dudes and only 1 female

good personal.....9/10

ain't no denying it, spul coversated with a boy named dicklicious
that really shows that spul like to grab on more men then sid vicious
good punch....8/10

kid went and said i d/r banks, u tried to d/r me, oh u a fan of mine
spul tries his best to match my every single move like a pantomime

decent....7/10


i just wish more peeps in this damn world would practice abstinece
do u see what happens when cher and prince mate, an accident

funny personal...but sort of lacking for some reason..7/10

why u get mad on AIM, kid got hyped up over ducking accusations
spul wins?, better chance of arm amputees conducting masterbation

hahahaha..good closer.....9/10

overall score 61/100
average score per bar = 6.1/10

overall this wasn't a good verse for you....you had some good lines....but the gay jokes in the middle were getting repetitive...and they were uncreative...that took away a lot from your verse...this battle could have been a whole lot better...much respect to both of you though....vote......Dentikal

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 

JUst checking the plls.............................................. ..................

NVM.. i wanna take back this feedback and vote... cos it looks good...............
SPuL or Eyedentikal PM strobe to do it... cos a vote will be in one of youir hands..
LOL.....

aiight, jus vote, and whoever you vote for can PM strobe to do it........................... :thumbup:

Voted For: SPuL

good battle...

both had a good flow but i think spal came much harder with punches N diss hes verse had me going more into it then u'rs he was more creative N just at u raw i thought but u drop decent....

vote: spal....

return the favor of a vote on this hot close battle that just went down....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158022

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This isnt a DR...... i think both of you are dope... so not a dr....
now i know that sexual lines are played but spul really must be gay
he's battling tha q, five source ceo with banks attempting a 3 way
No..... not a good one at all.....
kid seems to get attached to hookers who like to search for net dick
cause without a job, welfare, or $ going to the bank would be hectic
ok flow.....not good line....but decent
punches and bars r damaging ya perfect record, i'll leave spul aken
cause posing as banks in gay porn was how his virginity was taken
This was a very good line.. nice play on his name....and good flow
u even said it ya damn self "this fag gonna get it" then u cheered
why? cause u be forever getting spermed delivered in ya rear
wtf.. no this is not good... the last line in this bar shuda been better
i don't know why u even accepted this battle cause i slaughter foes
so u stand aside and tell ya bitch bend over cause i daughter hoz
This is a Self Glori... so no.. not good... "I Slughter Foes"=glorifying
kid made a thread about the RV chat last night, but left out details
about how he was in a room with 8 fucking dudes and only 1 female
LOL.... nice shit.... a very good lines nice personal
ain't no denying it, spul coversated with a boy named dicklicious
that really shows that spul like to grab on more men then sid vicious
fflow wasnt on target... and it wasnt that great
kid went and said i d/r banks, u tried to d/r me, oh u a fan of mine
spul tries his best to match my every single move like a pantomime
no.. this isnt a punch.... the first lines could've been better. but the other line killed it...
i just wish more peeps in this damn world would practice abstinece
do u see what happens when cher and prince mate, an accident
not direct......not a good bar
why u get mad on AIM, kid got hyped up over ducking accusations
spul wins?, better chance of arm amputees conducting masterbation
Ok Closer.. could've been worded a lil better

ummmm Scenario... tyhis wasnt your best verse.. i 've seen better from you... ovreall yours was pretty much good... excpet some of your bars start of with a lil self glorification... but it was good...also the fact that 1/4 of your verse was about banks... made it slightly less interestign and that gay banks crap is old.... i heard it from alot of other kids.... but the fact that you played it to a kid that loves G Uint made it slighty good and personal...... nice though....
Score: 7.5/10
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Jus like a "waitor" turned "editor"... I'll "serve" you the "news"
About how you called out SPuL, and then got... verbal abuse
i got what ya meant here... but i didint like how ya opener was started
cuz nigga, I will not lose, refuse, to float yo boat
... Don't even start to gloat, cuz like yo sig, you "need a vote"
weak as fuck... dumb line
Homo version of Banks, dress like him, his name you takin'
Must hate the nigka too, for the gay porn that you be makin'
lol..... kinda personal cos of his pic.. cos he does look like banks.. ok
Nigka you always fakin'... merkin' MC's for fun?
... Hell nah, fag, you be jerkin' inside their bun
damn... this was weak as hell...... gay shit too..
Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me
You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!!
wtf... this wasnt all that good....
Nigka, don't step and change, cuz you're slow, jus like yo flows
The chances of you winnin' is small... kinda like yo fuckin' nose
this had me laughing...nice persnoal...
You holdin' shit in,bee... you kno we fuckin' kno it
Look at yo face, you kno it too, your mouth expression show it
rhyme scheme was dumb... but also had me laughing
Ain't no poet, why you flow it, nigka you flex in vain
There's a gap in our skill levels, hoe, like yo neck and chain's
this was a ok closer....

your shit was fucking weak man......compared to what you had in that tourny or what you had agaisnt Feebs... but it was ok.. some of your lines were just straght fuckied up... i didnt liked how you rhymed so scnario get that... also ya flow was ok but not as good as scenarios...also you had some played concepts..... Scenario took it with the punches by a very lil bit... but SPuL took the personals stirght.....also thr LMAO factor was givin to SPUL.. it was very funny... but was good...
Score: 7.8

kinda close but i gave this to SPuL for strong personals.... and no self glorification.... which threw off some of Scenarios verses....

RTF:http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156249
Vote ther.. with a good breakdown and explination..

Voted For: SPuL

nice shit dawg

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Voted For: EyeDentikal

Checking Tha Polls Here Good Drop Both Yall Big Ups

Dam DQ That It Was Sapose To Be FeedBack My Fault Yo

Voted For: EyeDentikal

Spu you took this due to the better punches.... your structure was good and your flow was onpoint... the links you had was okay but i didnt realy like them

Eye-your shit wasnt the best and your fucking links just didnt do the job.... keep elevating though mjan.... your punches was okay but not anything good

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uppin............................................. ............................

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 

wanna see the polls...............................

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 

jus peepin' the polls nigga. Niggas told me this good nbattle. word to daddies

Voted For: SPuL

banks:

your verse was decent but it was too basic your first 2 or 3 bars were extremely wack and werent needed... they killed your verse you had a couple witty punches and personals and the cher and prince mating bar was dope as fuck probably the best bar in this battle.. but you came to basic.

spul:

dont get me wrong youre a hoecake, but your verse was more consistent you stayed on with good punches all the way through but please dont ever use a bar like this again

"Nigka, you better run, you gon' get get shunned, believe me
You like... Ass Or Dick...... shit, that's A.O.D!!!"

that was so basic it was pathetic, but otherwise your punches was good and a couple decent personals the opener was good grabbed my attention and throwin his pic in there made you win