Marcus Burnett vs SabbatiCus
 

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6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-30-04 at 02:11 PM

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Marcus Burnett has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 01:41 PM.

SabbatiCus has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 01:43 PM.

Snag the win in this, they call me the dope slayer
The gap of our skill is like those of hockey players!!
He's wacker then wack yo, we oughta be taxin him
He couldnt drop shit if he put rhymes on laxatives!!*
You'll never win a battle, i smash herbs, ur my example
This kid so stupid he brags bout stealing free samples!!



* Laxative's make you poop

The only time this kid was Diagnosed Ill was when he contracted AID'S
Still Grabbing Dick's, Dig's Men's anus'es Similar ta Spade's*
Verbally Abuse and Manipulate This Geek have him feeding Outta Tube
Marcus Burnett Sound's like a Faggot Who Play's With Anal Lube
The only Time He 'Drop's' Hot Is when it Protrude's Out His Ass**
Rap ain't for ya Kid,u coul'dnt even Flow if you were ridin On a Raft.
Fuckin Weak as Hell.*Spade's You should get this.lol.
**You should get this line=reffering to his shit=hot n' steamy.lol

Good verse But I'm sure that verse is Bitten..I swear i've heard it before...Hmmm..
Anyway Upping for My wack Verse.

Voted For: SabbatiCus

easy win for sabbaticus

Snag the win in this, they call me the dope slayer
The gap of our skill is like those of hockey players!!
wtf weak as punchlines and weak opener
He's wacker then wack yo, we oughta be taxin him
He couldnt drop shit if he put rhymes on laxatives!!*
okay.. i guess.. but alittle played
You'll never win a battle, i smash herbs, ur my example
This kid so stupid he brags bout stealing free samples!!
wack! closer

nuff said about marcus you lost this battle elevate

Sab
The only time this kid was Diagnosed Ill was when he contracted AID'S
Still Grabbing Dick's, Dig's Men's anus'es Similar ta Spade's*
decent opener ... okay punchline
Verbally Abuse and Manipulate This Geek have him feeding Outta Tube
Marcus Burnett Sound's like a Faggot Who Play's With Anal Lube
not feelin this
The only Time He 'Drop's' Hot Is when it Protrude's Out His Ass**
Rap ain't for ya Kid,u coul'dnt even Flow if you were ridin On a Raft.
decent punchline

overalll weak battle ... but Sabbaticus took this shyt easily

pz.

This was feedback posted for Marcus Burnett
 

word to yo mamma. You clowned this nigga, nigga. word to their mommas

Upping For This Battle ,

Voted For: Marcus Burnett

Sabbaticus-I wasn't really feelin ur verse, I've heard alot of punchlines like those before so it wasn't too much creativity.. don't know what else to say besides elevate

MB-It barely beat his but your punchlines were not too creative either.. But you put humor in there and that always helps but you need to elevate too

Voted For: Marcus Burnett

HAS MY VOTE .WUZ A BIT HARD BUT U GOT MY VOTE CUZ A THE LAXATIVE LINE AND U HAD GOOD VOCAB...........U HAD FLO AND AWESOME STUCTURE AND SUM VERY GUD PUNCHES. HIT ME UP WIT AN HONEST VOTE 4 THE BATTLES BELOW... PREFERABLY VS PUGNACIOUS HAWK..................THANX

Voted For: SabbatiCus

sabb ripped him

both of you should work on the multis.....i didnt really see any from either one of you

punchlines: sabb took this one....most of his verse had some pretty decent punches in it.....marcus had a good line=the laxative one

flow: marcus prolly had a lil better flow......everything came together pretty well.....sabb yours was pretty good too.....one or two lines may have been a bit streched....not bad from either one though

structure: both was decent

i voted for sabb cuz i thought he came a lot harder as far as dissing marcus.....marcus had one or two good lines but sabb was more consistant with his.....it is a battle and i have to go with the one with the hardest punches and disses....no hate at all return the favor w/ my battles vs. destiny, king dipset, and heroic verse....honest votes only

Voted For: Marcus Burnett

damn, this nigka had pretty nice. verse I think Marcus got it. shit, I'll be back wit explanation, my parents callin' me. pc

Voted For: SabbatiCus

vocab=sab
wordplay=sab
flow=sab
structure=marcus
multis=sab
punches=sab
personals=sab
rhyme scheme=sab

sabs verse 7/10

marcus' verse 3/10

easily won...nuff said...

return the favor battle in my sig

peace~1

Upping For This Battle...i wan't It Closed.

Voted For: SabbatiCus

Votin for the people....

The only Time He 'Drop's' Hot Is when it Protrude's Out His Ass**
Rap ain't for ya Kid,u coul'dnt even Flow if you were ridin On a Raft.
^^Best closer. Lines were good. Vocab was excellant (protrude, spade, contracted) punches were okay, they landed pretty good. Overall not bad. 6/10

He's wacker then wack yo, we oughta be taxin him
He couldnt drop shit if he put rhymes on laxatives!!*
^^Best line. A lota played shit. Hockey line was good, but the rest was filler or played, like i said. Vocab was mediocre. 4/10

Good, short battle

One

Uppinnnnnnnnnn u hoe's...................

Voted For: Marcus Burnett

This battle was pure wackness. Both of you kids came with simple punches, no wordplay, and minimal vocab. The only thing you did well in was structure, but both of you need some serious elevating. Requiem, your lines didn't even rhyme. So my vote goes to Marcus, for punches being a little better than the other guys', and for his lines actually rhyming.

Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...

tight shit, niggas!! vote!!! word to yo daddies!!! :shoot:

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Voted For: SabbatiCus

I think that ReQuiem got this battle because i feel that ReQuiem came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt ReQuiem got it they were used effectifely and were on point M. Burn u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to ReQuiem good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to ReQuiem and flow and structure i'll give to ReQuiem.

V/ReQuiem There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly