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New joint from Q..."Niggaz Go Comatose"...hot
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/qakaprox.htm
^^^^^Click on "Niggaz Go Comatose" Beat: I forgot...from S/C though Lyrics: Q Soundeffects...Q and www.findsounds.com Production: Q Jus tryna new ish...holla Replied to: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1701002 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158009 |
Flow 8/10
Delivery 3/10 Vocab 8/10 Voice 3/10 Quality 10/10 Beat 6/10 Emotion 5/10 Lyrics 7/10 My Opinion. You'd be better on paper. No offense. This isn't hate. You have good line's. But you have No Presence. Doesn't catch me. Or drag me in one bit. I was focusing more on the beat the whole time. **I do think you produce very well though. -1 |
^^^^ That doesn't mean I can't improve on presence...which I am currently...
so BLAH @ u suggesting I stop rapping because I don't appeal to Carson... ne way...thanx fot the feed 1 |
and the song..is jokez....lol......u pretty dope....how old iz u again? .......u need a lil bit more emotion...NEVER MIND GOT DAYUM IT GETS BETTA WHOOOOOOATT ur multi's is crazy...nyce shyt...what LOL..multi's got me shook
Dayum the lyricz is fuckin crazy as soon as iget betters the fuckin Multi's and lyricz go crazy] and the beginin is dope..I am THA Q........that shit is syck.....and dayum this is a dope track u shuld do audio battles..dayym u got me like dayum with this one hahaha |
^^^ Word...after listenin to this track 10000 times, the lyrics are good, but I almost went comatose listenin...MORE EMOTION NEEDED
lol...agreed...sometimes I worry so much about one thing I forget to add emotion |
O Shit I Think We Got Anotha Multi Master
Omb Step Down Anotha Multi' King Has Been Crowned ....................word |
If I was suggesting you quit rappin....
I'd say quit rapping. Instead I told you what you lack. So you can improve. Take critisizm like a man. |
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That's not how u spell criticism...you're the worst damn speller on this site...ne way I did take it like a man...I said, "just because I'm not great at something now doesn't mean I can't get better at it"...I recognize that fool... neway...u said "U'd be better on paper"...why u mad cuz Im elevating? gimme some time and u'll really have a reason to dislike me. Nuff said Oh..and take THAT like a man. :gfy: |
I dislike you?
I guess cause your gay right? Anything to put a circle around your name. Listen. it sounds like u readin off a page. So, In my opinion you'd be better on paper. And... Don't get so touchy....I said u need to work on things so u attack my one misspelled word. Man....grow up. |
Actually...lol...over the past few months, I've counted numerous misspellings...
And as far as your comments are concerned, oh well...at least people can actually understand what I'm saying, even if it does put them to sleep for lack of emotion...that's something i can work on...so do you kid 1 |
i listened..
multis were cool.. your delivery really dampers it and emotion dampers it.. the lyrics were there.. but you gotta be clear and have somethin uniwue to it.. either the effects u put on it or something.. but the track was lacking that warmth and that oomph to make it urs, feel me ? cause lyrics arent enuff.. for audio u need at least decent on everything in order for people to feel it... if u just up your emotion alot, and ya delivery and make ya style yours.. u'll be solid.. -1 |
Hmm...
Yea, ya flow is pretty decent.. Ya multi's are pretty hott tho, it makes ya flow alot better to me.. Get a lil more emotion in ya presence.. Nice voice...Lyric's are pretty cool also... The beat is staright...Not my style... But this i'll all around give A 7.. Multi's pretty much made this track.. Good shit, keep doing you! Mad potential.. |
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Flow is onpoint- sometimes I think a little more emphasis on your diction would help alot... Quality isn't bad, I think maybe a little amplification might help though, Your flow is smoother than most though so respect there... peep my shit leave some feeds if u got time.
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Not bad not bad at all better than most kids u got beef with always room for improvement tho. keep it up waitin to hear ya next one
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^^Def. room for improvement
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AHHHH
Tite tite tite... work on your delivery but that was HOTTTT!!! |
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yea dawg feelin this.. the multi's killin it.. and it sound like ya flow got some potential.. keep it up fam
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'preciate the feedback...I'm workin on a new track and incorporating all the good advice about emotion and delivery
stay tuned 1 |
I liked this track i agree wit Carson in the aspect u got producin skillz but blah to the whole quittin thing keep doin ya thing...this beat was top notch the vocals were good too jus keep doin ya thang and like ya said fuck tha hatas!
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