intensify effect vs J.R. Freeze
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
due 35 min

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-30-04 at 10:00 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 09:41 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 09:54 PM.

I Diminish this GAL~COMPLETELY, Become a *Violent Pedirtrist* if PLAN~TO~“DE-FEET”~ME, Cause I’m straight *Impaling* this *Dick*like PRINCE~ALBERT~PIERCINGS!!!/
*Flip the world Upside side* you Still can’t “RAISE HELL”~ON~THE~MIC, And *working for “SONY”* can’t even give you a *Positive* “STEREO”~“TYPE”, cause this *faggot* takes more *POUNDS* to the *ASS* than bitches with ~CELULITE~!!! (LMAO!!)
I’m RAPIN’~HIS~VERSE, I’m *eating you for Lunch*, no need to WAIT~FOR~DESERT…Cause it’s like you facing the *EAGLE’S DEFENCE…There’s no ESCAPING~THIS~“KEARSE”!!!/ (Curse)
You GETS~NO~RESPECT! This “newbie” could “operate on Animals”, we still BET~HE’S~NO~“VET”/
I remove yo HEAD~FROM~YO~NECK, You couldn't "GAIN INTEREST" on RV if you were "CREDIT~CARD~DEBT"//
(yyyeeeeaaaa)

aight here go's victom #2 of rape.....

this wack emcee trys to..."Gain The Strength.... like "Steroid-Injections"....
not knowing im "Hard To See" like the "Last Image" in da "mirra Reflecting"...
im guess'in u thought this was a joke..... not knowning i shatter geeks...
ya "Neck The Truth" and i need to get a "Grip On Reality"..
why battle-me son! I "Roast Suckers"... Bustin Hard like Broke-Rubbers...
Smoke and Toast Duckers... I'm like "Ray Stanz" the way I " Ghost - Busters"... *ha get it*
I Attack J.R and Strip strips like a "weak beattle juice costume"...
would shot at ya head.... but ya flow already got a Flip-Flop-Tune....
this is u'r stop wait...*ZOOOM*.... u'r skill's is about as close as the nigga in the next coast...
so its "Obviously u'll lose"... but maybe not... why dont u ask George "W" how to cheat out Votes.... BITCH!!

BANG-BANG-EARLY....

upppinnnnnnn......................................

upppiiinnnnnn..................................... ...

come on now dont sleep fellas hot battle going on........

upp'in for more votes people dont sleep on this battle........

WTF this is a tight ass battle........
lets get some votes fellas........

Voted For: intensify effect

Nice..
Intensity effect had some nice word play.
Good vocab, and nice punches.Felt that intens punches were harder

"this is u'r stop wait...*ZOOOM*.... u'r skill's is about as close as the nigga in the next coast..."

Voted For: intensify effect

I think that intensify effect got this battle because i feel that intensify effect came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt intensify effect got it they were used effectifely and were on point J.R u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to intensify effect good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to intensify effect and flow and structure i'll give to intensify effect.

V/intensify effect There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly (vs JPoll as other cat ain't posted)

thanks for the feed back....
upp'in this battle fellas....

i would of voted but u'r battle got closed already.....

Voted For: intensify effect

HaHa...VT Bitches

this is still up..............
lets get some more votes to end this...........

Voted For: intensify effect

To be honest, I really couldn't understand J.R.'s verse. He needs to work on structure and form, because what he posted was confusing and hard to read. If the way he'd written it had been better, perhaps I would've been able to consider his verse, but who wants to waste time look at something like that?

IE structure was poor too, but not as bad as J.R.'s. Work on your stretched lines, guys.

However, I did manage to scavage some multis from J.R.'s verse that I thought were good:

You GETS~NO~RESPECT! This “newbie” could “operate on Animals”, we still BET~HE’S~NO~“VET”/
I remove yo HEAD~FROM~YO~NECK, You couldn't "GAIN INTEREST" on RV if you were "CREDIT~CARD~DEBT"//

But what the fuck is celulite and why spell curse kearse? It just don't make no sense.

My vote goes to IE because he was more original. This got me:

why battle-me son! I "Roast Suckers"... Bustin Hard like Broke-Rubbers...
Smoke and Toast Duckers... I'm like "Ray Stanz" the way I " Ghost - Busters"...

this is u'r stop wait...*ZOOOM*.... u'r skill's is about as close as the nigga in the next coast...
so its "Obviously u'll lose"... but maybe not... why dont u ask George "W" how to cheat out Votes.... BITCH!!

pC.

upp'in to end this already its been going on for a while......

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

Damn This Battle Was Hott As Fuck.. Serious Flames..

BREAKDOWN:


IE

this wack emcee trys to..."Gain The Strength.... like "Steroid-Injections"....
not knowing im "Hard To See" like the "Last Image" in da "mirra Reflecting"...
Damn, Nice Opener.. Hits Hard
im guess'in u thought this was a joke..... not knowning i shatter geeks...
ya "Neck The Truth" and i need to get a "Grip On Reality"..
I Smell Personal
why battle-me son! I "Roast Suckers"... Bustin Hard like Broke-Rubbers...
Smoke and Toast Duckers... I'm like "Ray Stanz" the way I " Ghost - Busters"... *ha get it*
Damn, That Was Flames
I Attack J.R and Strip strips like a "weak beattle juice costume"...
would shot at ya head.... but ya flow already got a Flip-Flop-Tune....
Actually Wasnt Feeling This Man, Not Your Best
this is u'r stop wait...*ZOOOM*.... u'r skill's is about as close as the nigga in the next coast...
so its "Obviously u'll lose"... but maybe not... why dont u ask George "W" how to cheat out Votes.... BITCH!!
OMFG, That Was ..... Damn Best Line Of The Battle

Highlights:
Good Punches, Your Multies Were There..

DimLights:
Only Saw One Personal.

Overall:
This Verse Was On Point But Keep Me Lingering On A Few Lines.


JR

I Diminish this GAL~COMPLETELY, Become a *Violent Pedirtrist* if PLAN~TO~“DE-FEET”~ME, Cause I’m straight *Impaling* this *Dick*like PRINCE~ALBERT~PIERCINGS!!!/
LOL Good Multies And Punch, But Flow is Terrible
*Flip the world Upside side* you Still can’t “RAISE HELL”~ON~THE~MIC, And *working for “SONY”* can’t even give you a *Positive* “STEREO”~“TYPE”, cause this *faggot*
takes more *POUNDS* to the *ASS* than bitches with ~CELULITE~!!! (LMAO!!)
DAMN, Good Multies Good Flow And Good PUnches Back To Back To Back
I’m RAPIN’~HIS~VERSE, I’m *eating you for Lunch*, no need to WAIT~FOR~DESERT…Cause it’s like you facing the *EAGLE’S DEFENCE…There’s no ESCAPING~THIS~“KEARSE”!!!/ (Curse)
Damn Nice Dun, Good Multies
You GETS~NO~RESPECT! This “newbie” could “operate on Animals”, we still BET~HE’S~NO~“VET”/
I remove yo HEAD~FROM~YO~NECK, You couldn't "GAIN INTEREST" on RV if you were "CREDIT~CARD~DEBT"//
(yyyeeeeaaaa)
Damn Hott Closer Nice.


Highlights:
Good Punches, Multies, And Flow

DimLights:
No Personals.....

Overall:
Verse Was On Point, But Could Of Been Alot Hotter With Some More Personals..


Comparison:
Opener : TIE
Closer : IE
Consistencey : JR, Cause IE left Me Hanging ON A Few Bars..


IE, If You Wouldnt Of Left Me Hanging Without A Punch Or Hard Personal Multi At The End Of Those Two Lines.. You Would Have Won This Battle, But JR Squeezed It Out..
JR The Only Thing I Suggest Is Put Your ~Multies Inside The~
So Your Verse Doesnt Look So Sloppy.. And Get Rid Of The " And Use Bold, Cause IT Just Makes It Look Sloppy And Hard To Read, Wich Ruins The Flow Most Of The Time.. GJ


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Its Only Six Lines, So Its Not A Complex Thing..
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upp'in for more...

Voted For: intensify effect

Dope battle by both but I was feeling Inten verse more
then J.R...

Inten best bar,,...
why battle-me son! I "Roast Suckers"... Bustin Hard like Broke-Rubbers...
Smoke and Toast Duckers... I'm like "Ray Stanz" the way I " Ghost - Busters"...
^Dope bar man Nice wordplay vocab and flow, I was
really feeling this one.

J.R.
I remove yo HEAD~FROM~YO~NECK, You couldn't "GAIN INTEREST" on RV if you were "CREDIT~CARD~DEBT
^Nice bar again decent wordplay ok vocab nice flow.

I thought that Inten won this becase his verse was more
complex the J.R's. Inten had an all round better verse but
it was pretty close.

Vote @ Inten

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