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Heroic Verse vs CFAstunna1
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3-7 Bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck Kid Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-31-04 at 12:36 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Heroic Verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 09:37 PM.
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Kids Little Minded He Dont Know What he Doing
I Connect So hard kid Starts Suing Cuz Punches Connect His Rectum And Leave uhm Full Of Heroics Venome Get Uhm Send Him Punches That'll Reck Uhm Kids Not Even Average Shouldn't accept this Challenge Like A Savage ill Cause Him So Much Damage Like I Was Tha Kid Who Did 9-11 Kids Young yet He Spit Like he's 7 About To Learn a Great Lesson Like A Confession Kid Best get Tha Lords blessin So Bring Protection My Suggestion Is A Strong Weapond Kid An "Ass" Cuzz His Rhymes Are "Shit" Slick,Thick Scarf Around His Throat Will Leave Him Hangin Like It Was A Rope |
CFAstunna1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 10:21 PM.
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ur bitch ass cant talkbout how ur whip can glide/ cuz bitch please, X to the Z couldnt even pimp ur ride/ u prpbly claim u hold heavy weight, byrds, and shit/ nigga co'mon, u neva even seen a dime or nick/ u run around talkin bout how many hoes u got/ nigga u gets no bitches or pussy, u dont even gotta say u not/ we all could look at ur face and tell u got hoe in eye/ ur aint hard, nigga u softer than a sweet potato pie/ u hold bb gunz cuz ur ass cant fight/ uz a bitch, u aint wanna stand on "my" block at nite/ u was scared cuz u no them dealerz will beat that ass/ slit ur throat, take ur fone, ur weight, and ur cash/ u wish u could fuk wit me in lyrics but God just aint give u tha gift/ askin santa for some skills to beat me will be ur Chrismas Day wish
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Lol Dam Kis You Need To Fix Ya Structure Mayn Those "/" Lines Aint Working Lol ELIVATION IS NEEDED!!!
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Voted For: Heroic Verse
goes to the hero, whit i was giong to say work in your structure until i saw his verse, but had a nice flow, better puches, multies, neither for real vote goes to hero guy |
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Voted For: Heroic Verse
heroic verse was better to me i felt hes punches connected i felt hes flow was easyer to follow and all and just all around better the other guy had a good verse i mean some of hes line was good and then some wasnt at all and i couldnt follow hes flow like that which hurted him but not a bad verse good battle |
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Voted For: Heroic Verse
You had Way better flow..... Good structure...... Beat CFA in that..... and some nice wordplay........ Your Punches hit hard to........ thye cam herder than CFA.... CFA you gotta work on your strucure mayn..... Peace~~~~~~~~~ ~ |
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Thanx~~ Peace \/ \/ \/ :thumbup: |
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Voted For: Heroic Verse
ur bitch ass cant talkbout how ur whip can glide/ cuz bitch please, X to the Z couldnt even pimp ur ride/ u prpbly claim u hold heavy weight, byrds, and shit/ nigga co'mon, u neva even seen a dime or nick/ u run around talkin bout how many hoes u got/ nigga u gets no bitches or pussy, u dont even gotta say u not/ we all could look at ur face and tell u got hoe in eye/ ur aint hard, nigga u softer than a sweet potato pie/ u hold bb gunz cuz ur ass cant fight/ uz a bitch, u aint wanna stand on "my" block at nite/ u was scared cuz u no them dealerz will beat that ass/ slit ur throat, take ur fone, ur weight, and ur cash/ u wish u could fuk wit me in lyrics but God just aint give u tha gift/ askin santa for some skills to beat me will be ur Chrismas Day wish ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH NO FLOW HARD TO READ NO AN GOOD VERSE MAYNE GET CHA STRUTURE ALL FIX UP DEN COME HARDER HEROIC VERSE- CLEARLY GOT DIS HANDS DOWN HE HAD FLOW & PUNCHES OVERALL= HEROIC VERSE GOT DIS HANDS DOWN WITH FLOW AND SOME 'OK" PUNCHES BUT OVERALL WON IT OVA FLOW |
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Voted For: Heroic Verse
CF your need to sort your verse out man that looks like a story or something,,... I think Heroic come nice, hard hitting punches and word play and it flowed nice. CF Didnt get the flow so the verse seemed sloppy to me man you come ok but keep elevating, You also used a lot of filler, Heroic's bars was full of heat. Heroic's best bar: Slick,Thick Scarf Around His Throat Will Leave Him Hangin Like It Was A Rope CF Best bar: The opener was alright but its hard to find the bars... Vote : Heroic |
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