SPuL vs L.I.
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 800

Check in by: 10-30-04 at 11:35 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 11:09 PM.

SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 11:17 PM.

We'd go head to head wit fury.. instead we let the beef settle...
& I'd come as wack as I could.. but still wouldnt match ur level...
Rep to the fullest son.. egos up there too, need tuh be saddled...
& SPuL will get into the RV Awards.. only cuz i came dope in this battle...(battle of the month)
Hideous mutha fucka.. look in the mirror, whats it mean?...
Only shot at Glamour he had.. was in his mom's magazines...
You have a chance?.. dont bug me, i dont wanna hear it...
This kid has some heart and determination.. but I'll spirit...

If you dont get anything...dont vote...or PM me for an explanation before voting...peace...g'luck SPuL

uppin'.. g'luck hoe cup cake. nah layins? weerd...................................

u..........p....p....p......p.........i......n.... .......

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

Blah.....this one was tough to vote on. I wasn't really feeling SPuL's verse too much, but he kept it more personal and I liked his closer. L.I had more of a RB style, but it wasn't working in a few of his lines. His wit was much more apparent though. Hmmmm.......I guess I'll just leave this as feedback then :thumbup:

Vote on my battle bitches :thumbup:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157553

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

checkin the polls...........

gud battle y'all

pz

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

I got you for next.. ...for a battle... maybe.....

damn, stop wit the feed and vote biatches!!!!!..........................

Voted For: SPuL

L.I:
first tiem ive voted on one of your battles meh i think yer stucture was good but bad flow weak...yer punches were pretty weak but they were still punches but they were jsut weak closer to the bottom of yer verse they got better...

Spul:
damn that was pretty good...good punches n all wordplay good...your stucture was pretty bad but you flowed damn good...you get this you had better punches n all around you were better accept for stucture thats it...

return the favour here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157938

wow....all im gonna say.... .

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

l.i won this time in my oppinion

im still not gonna poll vote though :thumbup:

LMAO! exclusive

herbest vote ive seen in efl in a long time

Voted For: SPuL

alright spul took this cuz of harder punches and betta structure and flow...L.I. each battle you slowly fall off more and more..what happened..did the lyricz in your rhyme book run out LOL....anywayz

spul: your shit was decent u had much betta flow and structure and i culd vibe to it more....i liked ur shit alot..u neva fell off thank god

L.I wat the hell u fell off alot ur srtucture was ugly as heyll ur flow wasnt that good neitha..ur vocab..was ok....but mayn wat the hell i wasnt feellin this at all

vote: SPUL

up up up up up up u suck suck suck suck sukc suck.....

i shoulda known u wouldve voted kontro...for spul that is...i didnt lose nething...well i lost the herb punches and actually throw real ones...fuck it...people are idiots

quit bitching hoe.......... upp............................................... ...............

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

woot woottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

Voted For: L.I.

I gotta give L.I..my vote because i think his verse was All together better...BreakDown:

L.I...I think ur wordplay was kinda dull not as u would probably come but i see in ur verse u sayed u was not coming hard...ur verse was kinda complex....i liked some of the disses u used againinst him..i think 1 of the reason u won this battle was because spul came probably the weakest i have seen him come..i think spul just wrote somethin and did not look at it...most of the words..u used SPUL...was not good at all...but overall i think L.I..had better Punchlines.Wordplay...Complex more....and everything together

Alright battle.tho...Spul come harder next time

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

just checkin on my homie....werd..
..free up... like a cell phone commercial

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

im just posting feedback so i can see who's winning and also spul's a hoecake :thumbup:

Voted For: L.I.

Like yo hold on Feebles dick... I thought me and you was tight?
I guess I'm wrong, "MacBeth." Had to kill the "King", right?
.. Ehh Decent
We already battled 3 times, I really won 3-in-row
3-in-row!?!? DAMN, you lose, tic-tac-toe!!!
Good person, POOR punch . .
You're uglier than "Pete Rose", you losin' this, I will "bet"
Newbie "critters" on yo dick, no wonder you're called a "vet"
Wow very poor
Jus like my 3 initials, to you... that's what we do
S.P.L................. forget about "U"!!!!

I think this is one of the weakest verse I've seen you drop . .


We'd go head to head wit fury.. instead we let the beef settle...
& I'd come as wack as I could.. but still wouldnt match ur level...
Ha a bit played but it still was a good punch
Rep to the fullest son.. egos up there too, need tuh be saddled...
& SPuL will get into the RV Awards.. only cuz i came dope in this battle...(battle of the month)
Eh a bit poor not hard hitting but it was decent
Hideous mutha fucka.. look in the mirror, whats it mean?...
Only shot at Glamour he had.. was in his mom's magazines...
could have been more creative
You have a chance?.. dont bug me, i dont wanna hear it...
This kid has some heart and determination.. but I'll spirit...
Poor closer . . Could have been MUCH better possibly if re worded

I think this battle wasn't fantastic . . & both off the verse's were not quailty infact they made me :( because i've seen better lines from the both of you . . but L.I took this baised on his RV award and his opener . .

BTW non of you pm ME and bitch about this vote. . Infact i only vote on classic members . .

uppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn........keep the experienced votes comin

uppp.............................................. ........

Voted For: SPuL

Simply put i just think that LI got outclassed i was feeling spuls verse the whole way..... LI you had come good punches but some of your lines was played and streteched.... both yall flows was good..... your personals was also good so im going to have to give this to SPUL though becuase i felt his verse more

Like yo hold on Feebles dick... I thought me and you was tight?
I guess I'm wrong, "MacBeth." Had to kill the "King", right?
Good personal and okay punch 7/10
We already battled 3 times, I really won 3-in-row
3-in-row!?!? DAMN, you lose, tic-tac-toe!!!
good personal not great punch 5/10
You're uglier than "Pete Rose", you losin' this, I will "bet"
Newbie "critters" on yo dick, no wonder you're called a "vet"
Okay but not great 5/10
Jus like my 3 initials, to you... that's what we do
S.P.L................. forget about "U"!!!!
had me crackin up 8.5/10

25.5/40

SPul- i have seen you come better... your pucnhes was okay in this battle and your personals was good... only adivice i could give you is set up a couple punches better and your shit should be allset



We'd go head to head wit fury.. instead we let the beef settle...
& I'd come as wack as I could.. but still wouldnt match ur level...
Played... but still okay 6/10
Rep to the fullest son.. egos up there too, need tuh be saddled...
& SPuL will get into the RV Awards.. only cuz i came dope in this battle...(battle of the month)
Not good 4/10
Hideous mutha fucka.. look in the mirror, whats it mean?...
Only shot at Glamour he had.. was in his mom's magazines...
could have been set up better 5/10
You have a chance?.. dont bug me, i dont wanna hear it...
This kid has some heart and determination.. but I'll spirit...
you could have worded this better 6/10

21/40

LI.... your verse wasnt at all what i thought you was going to come with... i really expected you to come alot better considering how you usually come... yoru flow was okay but you just fell apart with the personals


v/SPul... sorry about this but it sent my rough draft of my vote

wow slept on like whoa!!! uuppin'......................................

Voted For: SPuL

Okay you both can come harder than this, tic tac toe line was decent, good closer spul. L.I. you only had one decent line that was the one about rv awards. dissapointing battle but spul takes this.

^ummm.... aiight. uppin' this.............................................. ........

uppppp............................................ .............................

Voted For: SPuL

aight, L.I. has sum nice wordplay in his verse.. punches were eh... the part that was kinda off was the second bar, the last line..

Rep to the fullest son.. egos up there too, need tuh be saddled...
& SPuL will get into the RV Awards.. only cuz i came dope in this battle...(battle of the month)
^but the rest wasn't too bad.. u ended with a nice closer.. but point period you shoulda came harder..

SPuL- i haven't seen you battle in like 2 months.. but here's your critique, your closer wasn't the best of the two you, however, the macbeth metas were nice especially the opener.. lol you were original with the tic tac toe thing, but neither of you came hard.. the Pete Rose part was nice, hee hee good luck with this next time i expect both of you to come a lil' harder..

my vote./SPuL