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Wickedclown 10-31-04 12:40 AM

WICKEDCLOWN7666 vs String9487
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate


30mins to check in and 30 mins after check in to drop... good luck hommie :thumbup:

(this is a repost, messed up the first one)

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-31-04 at 01:10 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 10-31-04 12:50 AM

WICKEDCLOWN7666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 12:50 AM.

Wickedclown 10-31-04 12:56 AM

Imma STRING this faggot up by his raisen sized balls
Chop dat neck, bloods runnin quicka then niaggra falls
this bitch is best to belive hes facin "tha wicked revisited"
ya know this clown dont play and thats just bein real wit-ya-kid
fuck this cunt and his "rhymes" so stringy
ya played fool, ya actin like some wack wanna be chingy
murderin niggaz like you is what i do, bringin da wicked shit
neva fuck wit a juggalo, nigga bout to see my ax, get ya throat slit
verbal murda, lyrical death... String ya on ya last breath
bitch bout to OD on verbal Meath...

Tha lyrical rap killin phsyco klown is here so lock ya doors
soon ya on ya knees, lookin up, prayin on tha floor
for ya life to be spared, ya cant face ya own demise
i cant wait to see the look on your face as you die
aint nothin waitin for you in the afterlife so kiss EVERYTHING goodbye
you know no one will miss you here so dont even lie
aint no one gonna cry, when i sey yo ass on fire
drop ya in the body pile and light the funerel pyre
string your ass is gonna be strung out when your dead
your torsoe on up in ropes and a spike uprooted tward ya head
and imma parade that shit around... bring it all over town
all the people say "here come that bomb ass nigga killin WICKEDCLOWN!!

:laugh2:

System 10-31-04 01:00 AM

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 01:00 AM.

Hitchcock 10-31-04 01:27 AM

STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


eh yo...eh yo
dog, i'll rip every part of u daily
why they got me battlin this nigga from Barnum n Bailey?
he's sure to lose his heart, when them tools pump
dog quit rappin,... n stick to blowin balloons up
face it ass, i hate to ask
but u not even in the equation, u still in basic math?
any verse i attack u on it
stop u from runnin ya mouth like u got tracks shoes on it
dont think i wont get ya bitch n carress her
im a brick of cocaine, n u just a Nic in tha dresser
these golden gloved punches, have ya u throwin up lunches
ya rhymes is lookin crippled like they holdin up crutches
my flow, will rip ya thru tempel
hopefully u'll lose ya words like u on instrumental
wit punches i connect blows,...reject foes
and give this bozo, wicked, a red nose
u messed up homie, cuz defeat is a trap
n u couldnt "rise" to the occasion if u put yeast in ya raps
HAAAAAAAAAAAA

Hitchcock 10-31-04 01:29 AM

uppin for votes this gon b a hot one

Wickedclown 10-31-04 01:34 AM

ayo tight battle son, uppin this shit for some votes.. should be a close one hommie.

Hoodz Prophet 10-31-04 03:17 AM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666

hmmm.....battle was pretty good....heres my explanation

Punchez- Wicked [made more sense 2 me then stringz]
Flow- Wicked [barz were closer in length then stringz]
Structure- Wicked [Stringz structure wuz fucked up no beef string]
Vocab- Wicked [had more then string did]

hmm.....string ur structure an flow wuz off jus fix that an u would be soooo much better jus make ur linez an equal length or around tha same but yeah much propz ta both MCz no beef meant just an honest vote
vote= Wicked

Wickedclown 10-31-04 10:42 AM

ay thanks for the honest vote hommie, apriciate that... UPPIN for more votes!

Hitchcock 10-31-04 04:48 PM

uppin for votes. i did my bars like that on purpose, i wish u people would get that thru ur heads

Hitchcock 10-31-04 07:51 PM

uppin for votes. i did my bars like that on purpose, i wish u people would get that thru ur heads
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Triple_N 10-31-04 08:34 PM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666

Wicked.....your flow was cool but centering your verse didn't cover up how stretched your lines were an centering is wack in battles it works best in topicals in battles its wack....your punches were fair some were played but some hit good...personals were not reallyy visible u tried but nah....metas were decent nothing special...need wordplay but it was somewhat creative oif a verse

String...your verse was weak...flow was bad, strucutre was bad, all your concepts were played and u ddin't word them properly to at least get some props for having a played punch u just had aplayed line cuz they weren't punchhes no personals....and your vocab was real basic....metas didn't exist, u need to elevate

Punches: Wick
Persoanals: tie
Flow: wick
Struc: Wick
Metas: wick
Worplay: Tie(none from neither)
Creativity: tie(none from neither)
Vote: Wick

Hitchcock 10-31-04 08:39 PM

wtf?? yall r some hatin mofos but its w/e

Wickedclown 10-31-04 09:25 PM

ay im uppin this shit..... good battle hommie.................

Wickedclown 11-01-04 07:47 AM

uppin this shit yall...lets see some votes..............

Hitchcock 11-01-04 11:39 AM

wtf?? yall r some hatin mofos but its w/

Heroic Verse 11-01-04 02:51 PM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666

Wicked
Explanation:
Wick Came Harder Dude Was On A Roll He Was Hitting Good Structure Some Personals I Saw Maybe SOme Multi's Flow Was Looking Good Not Really Forced Words Cam Clean

String:
Good Shit Came Pretty Hard
Structure Uhhhhh Flow Was Good
Some Good Lines Vocab

VOTE=Wicked

EastCoast 11-01-04 07:58 PM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666

both were good but clowns topped out a little better...keep it up

EastCoast 11-01-04 08:46 PM

my bad i forgot to say y i voted...........it was close but clown took it cuz his punchlines were better and it also had better vocab

Wickedclown 11-01-04 08:51 PM

uppin this shit for some votes..................................

Wickedclown 11-02-04 12:00 AM

uppin this shit for some votes..................................

-TweaKeD- 11-02-04 12:30 AM

This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN7666
 
lmao... String dont underestimate a newbie cuz you got owned haha... just posting feedback... nice verse by the way newbie...

Ltizzle 11-02-04 12:40 AM

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666

v/ wickedclown
a very close battle...
im giving this to wicked cause i thought that string you lacked a little on the punches, you had some nice ones but wicked had some better ones
both very good flow throughout the battle, but i think it really comes down to the punchlines in this and wicked takes it there...


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