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WICKEDCLOWN7666 vs String9487
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate 30mins to check in and 30 mins after check in to drop... good luck hommie :thumbup: (this is a repost, messed up the first one) Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-31-04 at 01:10 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
WICKEDCLOWN7666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 12:50 AM.
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Imma STRING this faggot up by his raisen sized balls Chop dat neck, bloods runnin quicka then niaggra falls this bitch is best to belive hes facin "tha wicked revisited" ya know this clown dont play and thats just bein real wit-ya-kid fuck this cunt and his "rhymes" so stringy ya played fool, ya actin like some wack wanna be chingy murderin niggaz like you is what i do, bringin da wicked shit neva fuck wit a juggalo, nigga bout to see my ax, get ya throat slit verbal murda, lyrical death... String ya on ya last breath bitch bout to OD on verbal Meath... Tha lyrical rap killin phsyco klown is here so lock ya doors soon ya on ya knees, lookin up, prayin on tha floor for ya life to be spared, ya cant face ya own demise i cant wait to see the look on your face as you die aint nothin waitin for you in the afterlife so kiss EVERYTHING goodbye you know no one will miss you here so dont even lie aint no one gonna cry, when i sey yo ass on fire drop ya in the body pile and light the funerel pyre string your ass is gonna be strung out when your dead your torsoe on up in ropes and a spike uprooted tward ya head and imma parade that shit around... bring it all over town all the people say "here come that bomb ass nigga killin WICKEDCLOWN!! :laugh2: |
String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 01:00 AM.
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STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
eh yo...eh yo dog, i'll rip every part of u daily why they got me battlin this nigga from Barnum n Bailey? he's sure to lose his heart, when them tools pump dog quit rappin,... n stick to blowin balloons up face it ass, i hate to ask but u not even in the equation, u still in basic math? any verse i attack u on it stop u from runnin ya mouth like u got tracks shoes on it dont think i wont get ya bitch n carress her im a brick of cocaine, n u just a Nic in tha dresser these golden gloved punches, have ya u throwin up lunches ya rhymes is lookin crippled like they holdin up crutches my flow, will rip ya thru tempel hopefully u'll lose ya words like u on instrumental wit punches i connect blows,...reject foes and give this bozo, wicked, a red nose u messed up homie, cuz defeat is a trap n u couldnt "rise" to the occasion if u put yeast in ya raps HAAAAAAAAAAAA |
uppin for votes this gon b a hot one
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ayo tight battle son, uppin this shit for some votes.. should be a close one hommie.
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666
hmmm.....battle was pretty good....heres my explanation Punchez- Wicked [made more sense 2 me then stringz] Flow- Wicked [barz were closer in length then stringz] Structure- Wicked [Stringz structure wuz fucked up no beef string] Vocab- Wicked [had more then string did] hmm.....string ur structure an flow wuz off jus fix that an u would be soooo much better jus make ur linez an equal length or around tha same but yeah much propz ta both MCz no beef meant just an honest vote vote= Wicked |
ay thanks for the honest vote hommie, apriciate that... UPPIN for more votes!
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uppin for votes. i did my bars like that on purpose, i wish u people would get that thru ur heads
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uppin for votes. i did my bars like that on purpose, i wish u people would get that thru ur heads
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666
Wicked.....your flow was cool but centering your verse didn't cover up how stretched your lines were an centering is wack in battles it works best in topicals in battles its wack....your punches were fair some were played but some hit good...personals were not reallyy visible u tried but nah....metas were decent nothing special...need wordplay but it was somewhat creative oif a verse String...your verse was weak...flow was bad, strucutre was bad, all your concepts were played and u ddin't word them properly to at least get some props for having a played punch u just had aplayed line cuz they weren't punchhes no personals....and your vocab was real basic....metas didn't exist, u need to elevate Punches: Wick Persoanals: tie Flow: wick Struc: Wick Metas: wick Worplay: Tie(none from neither) Creativity: tie(none from neither) Vote: Wick |
wtf?? yall r some hatin mofos but its w/e
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ay im uppin this shit..... good battle hommie.................
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uppin this shit yall...lets see some votes..............
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wtf?? yall r some hatin mofos but its w/
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666
Wicked Explanation: Wick Came Harder Dude Was On A Roll He Was Hitting Good Structure Some Personals I Saw Maybe SOme Multi's Flow Was Looking Good Not Really Forced Words Cam Clean String: Good Shit Came Pretty Hard Structure Uhhhhh Flow Was Good Some Good Lines Vocab VOTE=Wicked |
Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666
both were good but clowns topped out a little better...keep it up |
my bad i forgot to say y i voted...........it was close but clown took it cuz his punchlines were better and it also had better vocab
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uppin this shit for some votes..................................
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uppin this shit for some votes..................................
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This was feedback posted for WICKEDCLOWN7666
lmao... String dont underestimate a newbie cuz you got owned haha... just posting feedback... nice verse by the way newbie...
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN7666
v/ wickedclown a very close battle... im giving this to wicked cause i thought that string you lacked a little on the punches, you had some nice ones but wicked had some better ones both very good flow throughout the battle, but i think it really comes down to the punchlines in this and wicked takes it there... |
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