.Indeph. vs Miss. Lyricist
 

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6-10 lines..quick battle..got shit to do..
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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.Indeph. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 06:14 PM.

Miss. Lyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 06:39 PM.

It’s not my spelling skills, his stupidity’s unsurpassed
His rhymes are shitty caus he uses them to wipe his ass

He certainly reps the dirty, the nigga infested wit lice
He’s more awkward than the silence before strangers break the ice

I think his thread is balding, I’ve never seen one so frayed
If he had hit me any harder, he would’ve needed a toupee

His rhymes are like clogged pores, Noxzema* couldn’t handle the grime
If battling was like fighting pimples, he couldn’t bust a good rhyme

He can’t be caliente*, he colder than the ashes in an ash tray
He couldn’t amount to spicy if I doused him w/pepper spray

*It’s a facial cream for women. You can ask Indepth more about it.
* Caliente means hot in Spanish

GL to you too brah....

And Lyricist is spelled correctly, look it up in the dictionary.

Uhh...I dont see anywhere to vote...anyways, my vote goes to Miss Lyricist

Indeph-You coulda came a lot harder with punches n personals...no noticeable wordplay....pretty basic, nice try though

Miss Lyricist-Your drop was full of punches and wordplay...nice vocab and nice flow...i give this one to you for more and better punches...

return the favor against Khaos i think its in my sig

There should be a box underneath each of our verses. Type some shit in for the person you voted for (which would be me) and click on Post Vote.

Uppin... don't let this bitch go dead.

boo, huh huh hu..................................... :shoot:

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Voted For: .Indeph.

miss lyricist :

It’s not my spelling skills, his stupidity’s unsurpassed
His rhymes are shitty caus he uses them to wipe his ass
^^basic and wack 3/10
He certainly reps the dirty, the nigga infested wit lice
He’s more awkward than the silence before strangers break the ice
^^good meta but wack punch 5/10
I think his thread is balding, I’ve never seen one so frayed
If he had hit me any harder, he would’ve needed a toupee
^^decent punch 6/10
His rhymes are like clogged pores, Noxzema* couldn’t handle the grime
If battling was like fighting pimples, he couldn’t bust a good rhyme
^^wack 3/10
He can’t be caliente*, he colder than the ashes in an ash tray
He couldn’t amount to spicy if I doused him w/pepper spray
^^wack 2/10

Overall : 19/50 (38%)

indeph:

.. its sad..but seems now FL's elevated..is herb infested..
..you couldn't be a lyrisist miss.. if you can't spell it!!..*
^^kinda wack 3/10
..private messeged me..take your regretions for lessons...
..because you never get OOOOO's like they discontinued..
^^uhh yea 5/10
.. commericals for herbal essence..an Identiy invador..
..How hard could it be..to crush a ..Brandy Impersonater..
^^decent 5/10
..yea I can admit..you got some beauty..and better bells..
..but its messed up..your looks and lyrics not parelell..
^^lol best bar of the battle 8/10

overall : 21/40 (53%)

vote: indeph

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Voted For: Miss. Lyricist

Deph Was Going For The Hard Hits But Just Wasnt Gettin Them Off Right...
And M.L. Wasnt All That Great Herself...
The Punches n Shit Were Pretty Played And Unoriginal...
But It Still Toped Deph's Ish...
And Dephs Flow Kinda Fell Of At Parts While M.L. Stayed Consistant With That...
.One.

Voted For: Miss. Lyricist

DID indeph wack himself so she cud win, cos he came weak

Opener: miss
endign: miss
wordplay:miss
originality:miss
punches: miss
personals: miss
multis: miss
lyrics:miss

miss- 8.5/10
indph - 7/10

Voted For: .Indeph.

ha ha.. this battle was pretty nice, on both parts......
Miss. Lyricist:
It’s not my spelling skills, his stupidity’s unsurpassed
His rhymes are shitty caus he uses them to wipe his ass
^not bad first line, but the second was played terribly..
He certainly reps the dirty, the nigga infested wit lice
He’s more awkward than the silence before strangers break the ice
^fake personal, his location's chicago.. bar stretched..
I think his thread is balding, I’ve never seen one so frayed
If he had hit me any harder, he would’ve needed a toupee
^nice combo with the thread..... lol.. kinda funny
His rhymes are like clogged pores, Noxzema* couldn’t handle the grime
If battling was like fighting pimples, he couldn’t bust a good rhyme
not bad.. kinda funny too.. ha ha
He can’t be caliente*, he colder than the ashes in an ash tray
He couldn’t amount to spicy if I doused him w/pepper spray
aight these r more filler lines no real punch here-not too good for a closer :(
Miss. L. had sum aight bars, a lot of filler bars, not direct punches in my opinion..... 6.2/10 cuz the flow was still on point sumwhat, and the structure was str8..


Indeph:
.. its sad..but seems now FL's elevated..is herb infested..
..you couldn't be a lyrisist miss.. if you can't spell it!!..*
first line, nice intro-kinda funny.. lol, second portion terrible cuz lyricist is spelled right in her name..
..private messeged me..take your regretions for lessons...
..because you never get OOOOO's like they discontinued..
didn't rhyme, not feeling at all...
.. commericals for herbal essence..an Identiy invador..
..How hard could it be..to crush a ..Brandy Impersonater..
nice personal linkin her picture, kinda funny too...
..yea I can admit..you got some beauty..and better bells..
..but its messed up..your looks and lyrics not parelell..
closer was nice, lol...... shit was hilarious..
ur verse wasn't bad either, the name part with her spelling her name wrong was not hot.... but the closer i feel gave u the upper hand.. u had on personal with her pic in connection.. 6.9/10
I felt both y'all coulda came harder in this one, but as it stands....
Indeph took it....
my vote/ Indeph :thumbup: good luck you two...

Voted For: Miss. Lyricist

i expected a way better battle but i have to go with miss lyricist...breakdown

indeph:i have seen a lot of better things from you but unfortunately this wasnt one of those...best line was
"commericals for herbal essence..an Identiy invador..
..How hard could it be..to crush a ..Brandy Impersonater."
the punches werent that good and the opener needed some work...the closer also needed work;should've ended with the impersonator line...the vocab also needed work...overall that was not a good verse....5/10

miss lyricist:opener was okay, but the punch was played...good wordplay....best line was
"He certainly reps the dirty, the nigga infested wit lice
He’s more awkward than the silence before strangers break the ice"
ounches were played...okay vocab...the last line was good but the LINE above it about the ash tray wasnt that good...you basically won in everycategory, but not by a lot in some...your verse i felt could'vr also been better....
i give it a 7.5/10

v/miss lyricist

Uppin.... .

Voted For: .Indeph.

It’s not my spelling skills, his stupidity’s unsurpassed
His rhymes are shitty caus he uses them to wipe his ass
decent
He certainly reps the dirty, the nigga infested wit lice
He’s more awkward than the silence before strangers break the ice
…
I think his thread is balding, I’ve never seen one so frayed
If he had hit me any harder, he would’ve needed a toupee
decent
His rhymes are like clogged pores, Noxzema* couldn’t handle the grime
If battling was like fighting pimples, he couldn’t bust a good rhyme
decent
He can’t be caliente*, he colder than the ashes in an ash tray
He couldn’t amount to spicy if I doused him w/pepper spray
…

.. its sad..but seems now FL's elevated..is herb infested..
..you couldn't be a lyrisist miss.. if you can't spell it!!..*
nice
..private messeged me..take your regretions for lessons...
..because you never get OOOOO's like they discontinued..
decent multi’s
.. commericals for herbal essence..an Identiy invador..
..How hard could it be..to crush a ..Brandy Impersonater..
decent
..yea I can admit..you got some beauty..and better bells..
..but its messed up..your looks and lyrics not parelell..
decent closer

Overall my vote goes to Indeph cause
He had came harder in the punches just a lil bit tho

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Voted For: Miss. Lyricist

Indeph:
.. its sad..but seems now FL's elevated..is herb infested..
..you couldn't be a lyrisist miss.. if you can't spell it!!..*
Weak opener, woudl've connected if she actually did spell "lyricist" wrong.
..private messeged me..take your regretions for lessons...
..because you never get OOOOO's like they discontinued..
Lol 2nd line sounded funny, but didn't make sense. Bar didn't rhyme actually.
.. commericals for herbal essence..an Identiy invador..
..How hard could it be..to crush a ..Brandy Impersonater..
Decent, ok personal here
..yea I can admit..you got some beauty..and better bells..
..but its messed up..your looks and lyrics not parelell.
Decent closer, could've been worded better though

Miss Lyricist:
It’s not my spelling skills, his stupidity’s unsurpassed
His rhymes are shitty caus he uses them to wipe his ass
Weak opener, got the concept but it didn't hit hard.
He certainly reps the dirty, the nigga infested wit lice
He’s more awkward than the silence before strangers break the ice
Better, good wordplay in 1st line
I think his thread is balding, I’ve never seen one so frayed
If he had hit me any harder, he would’ve needed a toupee
Setup was good, but punch didn't connect
His rhymes are like clogged pores, Noxzema* couldn’t handle the grime
If battling was like fighting pimples, he couldn’t bust a good rhyme
Decent meta here, overall good bar
He can’t be caliente*, he colder than the ashes in an ash tray
He couldn’t amount to spicy if I doused him w/pepper spray
Weak closer.

Winner: Miss Lyricist, with an overall better verse. Although neither of you really cam that hard in this one. No hate though, keep doin' ya thang.

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