Symm3trik vs J.R. Freeze
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
due 35 mins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-31-04 at 11:10 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

check in now kid............................so will I.......

Symm3trik has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 10:42 PM.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-04 10:43 PM.

your verse all fucked up...believe me this matters
He'll go far......and the sooner he start the better
um don't worry kid I know you honest like farmers
U continue to show promises............................
........keeping unbroken record of broken promises
kid's screwed.......especially with a verse so wack
I don't need to call you a quitter.......................
.........he's screwed up every verse that he's had!
kid's froze up on his own name........what a shame
his freezing............even gave failure a bad name!
fuck this......even ice cube's will fucking froze you
in the rain......you're as useful as a box of tissues!

aight now, I've dropped, so drop your verse now!.....

In comparion, *THIS BATTLE* is kinda like a fuckin’ *REAR VIEW ~MIRROR~*//
Cause *YOUR SKILLS are *MILES BEHIND MINE*, and your *DEFEAT* is *“CLOSER THAN IT ~APPEARS~”*//
You *ALL TALK, NO SKILL* You should *WEAR A SKIRT* cause you just *A ~CHEERLEADER~*//
This *FAGGOT tries to be a *PIMP* but *HANDLES more *BALLS than *~INFIELDERS~*//
Your wack ass couldn’t posses a *DEEP FLOW* if you sailed face first off the *~NIAGRA~*//
Cause *sym STEEPIN TO J R* is *MORE POINTLESS* than a *CASTRATED MAN* taking *~VIAGRA~*// (DAYUM!)
Your verse doesn’t even pack *SWITCH_BLADES*, my shit spits *VERBAL GUN~HOTS*//
You *WOULDN’T BE “TIGHT” if you *DIE-D* and came back in ya *NEXT LIFE* as a *NUN’S~TWAT*//
I blaze form the *NORTH POLE* to *SOUTH PARK*, this verse done *KILLED YOU* *MORE TIMES* than *~KENNY~*//
Cause you *THREADS* wouldn’t even make *CENTS*(sense) if you robbed *JC ~PENNY’s~*//
Your shit’s turned to *FLAT-LINE* flatter than your *CORPSE* rolled~over by a *RANGE~OVER*//
I’ll put ya in ya *COFFIN you’ll still never be an *“UNDERGROUND” LEGEND* like *LIL’ FLIP*….*GAME~OVER//

aight now, uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

Ok...I really hate to do this, but im voting for JR...but JR please take those stupid fuckin //'s out of your drops

Symmetrick you forced your structure to be even....shitty punches, shitty personals...shitty everything

J r...you dont have to make your punches personals n shit obvious, dont be a fuckin newb...just write it and post it..dont use the //'s and dont use the *'s

forgot to add...return the favor on one of my battles

This was feedback posted for Symm3trik
 

checking the polls..................................

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

v/ jr freeze
freeze had some nice punches in this and a good flow
symm3trik you need to get some better punches, some of your stuff didnt really make too much sense to be, but good effort
freeze takes this one...

Voted For: Symm3trik

Symm3trik wins im not even read the guys be4 this 1 it was fucked up man Symm3trik had some punch stuture slow rhymes it had mst good but man that other uys was FUCKED

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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

gotta go with JR..he had better punches...but ur flow wasnt there...and you need to work on your multi's n wordplay

"I blaze form the *NORTH POLE* to *SOUTH PARK*, this verse done *KILLED YOU* *MORE TIMES* than *~KENNY~*//
Cause you *THREADS* wouldn’t even make *CENTS*(sense) if you robbed *JC ~PENNY’s~*//
Your shit’s turned to *FLAT-LINE* flatter than your *CORPSE* rolled~over by a *RANGE~OVER*//
I’ll put ya in ya *COFFIN you’ll still never be an *“UNDERGROUND” LEGEND* like *LIL’ FLIP*….*GAME~OVER//"-those lines are lil bit played...ive seen so many shit similar to that

rest is good tho....

Symmetrik....ur punches was weak as fuck....need to work on that

v/J.R. Freeze

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lol at this battle................................

uppiinn....................... i'll return tha favor........

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This was feedback posted for J.R. Freeze
 

checkig polls ....

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uppppinnnnnn............willl returnnn faaavvoooorrr......

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

my votes for jr freeze u jus outryhmed this cat and ur flow was hotter alot better vocab his shit was short an all think u both coulda came harder with better metas but u came out on top in this kid keep uppin n keep em comin

check out my battle with weedex

uppppppppppppinnnnnnn......Will RTF..................

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

j.r. took this hands down...

In comparion, *THIS BATTLE* is kinda like a fuckin’ *REAR VIEW ~MIRROR~*//
Cause *YOUR SKILLS are *MILES BEHIND MINE*, and your *DEFEAT* is *“CLOSER THAN IT ~APPEARS~”*//

^this punch was hella creative...and it actually flowed and kept the structure...

all of j.r. verse flowed...his wordplay was flawless...and his structure made it impossible to get lost in readin da verse...
the punches all came hard...and made this otha dude look hella dumb...

ne way...symm...fix yo structure a little...bring dem punches a little harder...and keep yo barz tha same length in syllables and shit...when ya do dat you'll have it...

v/ j.r. freeze

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