Lil-Youngstah vs Cautious
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-02-04 at 09:39 PM

Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in.

Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 12:27 PM.

This ain't no Challenge...Every1's "Cautios" about yo Wack-Rap
This freestyle's gonna end up...5-0 like in yo last Match
Your a newbie...Ya been knocked-out 1 Time
Steppin 2 me on-da-mic...is like steppin on a Land-Mine
U "Blowing" up in a Quick-Heated "Explosion"(BooM!)
now since u a her i'll spit-my-Flow "Slow Motion"
Dawg da facts about your versez...there ain't no need 2 be "Cautios"
Ya punchez & Structure stink badder then a Prostitutes cunt...It's makin me "Nautios"

6th line. Slowmotion= since he a herb basically i just need to spit my verse slowly so he can understand it...

well dat's my verse

Cautious has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 06:08 AM.

im bout 2 merk emmmmm........................


This nigga catch my bullets like a widerecever
and if i was lil-youngstah i wouldent like cautious neitha
On his profile he breakdances nigga u guy
I think i just found the 5th member of B2K
And if u really wonna hear some shit that hurts
Ill put u back in yo mama fuck her so i can be the daddy of yo birth
Your a kid so u must be a soft bitch
If i stuck his head in a pile of doo doo he still wouldent know shit
This guy is like milk his rapps turn sour
Ill nock yo ass out quicka then osama did the twin towers
Since your a youngtah do some work 2 make yo muscles rise
And jacking off is not considered a motherfuckun excercise
And you a kid so start this roomer quick type 2 everybody on this site and let em know u sucked Cautious dick
My punchlines are real they leave yo body hit
Ill blow yo brains out and niggas will think that ima a fuckin blow out kit

Voted For: Cautious

Total KO!!
Lil Youngsta took the opening
but Cautious had quantity AND quality.
The punchlines were thick and fast unlike lil-youngstas that were good, but didnt do it for me at all.
Vocab probaly equal
Cautious killed him with originality also.

uppin for votes on da battle......................

aight wait wassup with these shit...how come cautios & weedex are voting
for their battles....it's like in this battle weedex voted for cautios
& in another battle cautios voted for weedex hmmm....

well votin for votes....
problably those two pm'ing eachother for votes just like weedex pm'd some other guys
for votes

damn i mean uppin for votes not votin for votes....lol

nigga dont get mad cause u lost cuzz i was bouit to tell yo ass good battle but i mean what up with the cryin and shit nigga save that dont nobody wonna hear u cry about a vote nigga i won face it

Voted For: Cautious

this battle was kinda weak, Both rappers had their share of good punchlines, yet a mojority of the lyrics were corny as hell.
cautious
good structure
decent punches7/10
good wordplay8/10

lil youngstah
dont use this--that fucks up ya structure
punches 8/10 cuz the good 1s that u had were hot
wordplay o.k 7/10

it's cool anyways uppin for votes still....
naw i ain't mad i'm loosin cautios just sayin ya know well may da best
man win...

This was feedback posted for Cautious
 

what a surprise...... all i gotta say haha last one u wrote sucked like shit

poor lil' youngsta
 

lol yo u gonna beat me after u've been duckin me dawg?...u a disgrace anyways uppin for votes

Voted For: Cautious

Cautious took this one: flow, vocab and wordplay was straight. Liked ya punches anf personals, didn't have too many self-glorifcation or played things in there so that's cool...Lil-Youngstah, you've got some mad played stuff in there, my favo lines were your last two...they were nice but the rest wasn't too spectacular actually...Flow was okay and stuff but didn't have anything in there that made me say: whoaaaa....

Voted For: Cautious

SON U BLEW HIM OUT THAT WAS NOT FUNNY I AINT EVEN READ HIS YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS ON POINT

Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

This ain't no Challenge...Every1's "Cautios" about yo Wack-Rap
This freestyle's gonna end up...5-0 like in yo last Match
Decent
Your a newbie...Ya been knocked-out 1 Time
Steppin 2 me on-da-mic...is like steppin on a Land-Mine
Decent
U "Blowing" up in a Quick-Heated "Explosion"(BooM!)
now since u a her i'll spit-my-Flow "Slow Motion"
…
Dawg da facts about your versez...there ain't no need 2 be "Cautios"
Ya punchez & Structure stink badder then a Prostitutes cunt...It's makin me "Nautios"
Decent Closer

This nigga catch my bullets like a widerecever
and if i was lil-youngstah i wouldent like cautious neitha
On his profile he breakdances nigga u guy
I think i just found the 5th member of B2K
And if u really wonna hear some shit that hurts
Ill put u back in yo mama fuck her so i can be the daddy of yo birth
Your a kid so u must be a soft bitch
If i stuck his head in a pile of doo doo he still wouldent know shit
This guy is like milk his rapps turn sour
Ill nock yo ass out quicka then osama did the twin towers
Since your a youngtah do some work 2 make yo muscles rise
And jacking off is not considered a motherfuckun excercise
And you a kid so start this roomer quick type 2 everybody on this site and let em know u sucked Cautious dick
My punchlines are real they leave yo body hit
Ill blow yo brains out and niggas will think that ima a fuckin blow out kit
im not even gonna do ur whole shit…just elevate more and work on ur punches
& flow

Overall Lil-Y took this one…came harder in punches,
Had a better structure & the flow was good on the piece

This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah
 

checking pollz .

Voted For: Cautious

DAMN..... you fucced em up kidd... precise personals won this for you I liked the personals...
lil youngstah's shit hardly made any sense.. it was so fuccin' lame... they way it's written I bet it's off beat lol... so the ersonals got this for me return the favor on my battle against Young Soulja

peace