C-Bo vs UnBeAtAblE kInG
 

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6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-01-04 at 04:32 PM

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UnBeAtAblE kInG has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 04:05 PM.

C-Bo has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 04:05 PM.

c-bo u define the word of gay-bo
ur a wanker with a mask going hoe-bo

u'll soon have a hole in ya head from mwere my knife been
blood runnin down ya face like u grim reaper n turn out green

im unbeatable ur gay-bo time to kick ur ass 4 sho
ur a homo and ur sexual n incest is ur best subject in bed HOE

u say u a bad dude but wanna run when im after u..
unbeatable?...u wont be that long after this battle fool..
i write and spit..niggas like u just bite-n-shit..
this faggot's gettin 'out of hand'...unlike his dick..
oh no dawg...you just a textcee...go out n place bets..
only when King rocks a mike..he's talkin bout gay sex..

Voted For: C-Bo

it had better disses and that unlike his dick line got me.

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Voted For: C-Bo

no doubt...c-bo got it...punches...multies...flow...structure...wordpl ay...damn u had it all...

C-bo: betta everythang


Unbea.......king: lacked structure...and wordplay...couldve been better...but u got potential...

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i'm up 2-0...uppin

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please

Voted For: C-Bo

aight kinda wack battle but both handle their shit
I think C-Bo won this one....
Openin verse-Tied
structure- C-bo
punchlines-both had some but C-bo had a good one so it goes to him
word-play- Tied
overall verse-C-bo

i'm up 1-0...uppin

uppin............................................. ...again

Voted For: C-Bo

i like c-bo verse better it was more direct with harder hits and the flow was good : i write and spit..niggas like u just bite-n-shit..
this faggot's gettin 'out of hand'...unlike his dick..
that made me laugh and a good bar

the other guy verse was ok i mean he wasnt hitting hard with punches or noting plus he aint have no quoteables just a ok flow but u need more then that to win

thanx...20 i'm up....uppin

This was feedback posted for C-Bo
 

this battle was W...A...C...K...

no punches
no wordplay
no personals (that hit hard)
no creativity...
NOTHIN BY EITHER OF YOU!!!!

how can any of you win this? i suggest ya both forfit and go home... wack!!!!!!!!!!!

dont take this the wrong way... both of yall need to elevate big time... if those verses went up against vets youd get KOd no problem... so elevate and ya could have potential (C-bo has the most potential)..

any way... this is just feedback. so..whateva

Voted For: C-Bo

Unbeatable King...you had just like 1 punch in your verse...C-Bo had good punches and good flow...I think C-Bo took this...he had better Punches and he had some good creativity

i'm up 3-0...uppin

Voted For: C-Bo

King
sorry but that verse was straight up wack.. sorry but you need to elevate in every category known to text.. but anyway.. through experience you should get better.

c-bo
did not have to come hard at all to win this, even with the played 'sex/dick' punches.. I still felt you came more complex and witty to take the battle... obvious winner here.

Please return the favor in my sig.. only needs one more vote.

Voted For: C-Bo

Didnt think neither of these were strong......
Vote goes to CBO better use of words and punches....

Wasnt feeling it king.....need to up the vocab words like ho sho ur gay-bo kinda lame