LIL'DREW vs Kwell
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-01-04 at 10:08 PM

Must drop verse in 140 minutes after check in.

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 09:39 PM.

LIL'DREW has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-01-04 09:44 PM.

i drop cold flows on foes like i was freezin cold showers/
and i bring chills to bones like icecream cones on weak cowards/
i dont take shit from no1, and i never give shit up/
and even if i was a hoe, you couldn't pay me to give a fuck/
ima need some medication cause i got a ill ass jean/
rackin up da doctor bill cause im da sickest you've ever seen/
call me word processing, cause im a lyrics machine/
and document that thats a fact thats gonna bring me da green/
I dont blow lyrical holes, dawg, i blow lyrical cratas/
and i been sent her by satin to bring a plague to deese hatas/

Ayo,
You honestly cant beat me son, and i could swear on that bet
13? you've got the balls to face me, but too bad there's no hair on 'em yet
i still see cowardice in you tho, cuz i've got powerful vision
but it's obvious that your lack of brain sells've got u outta commission
sour descriptions of this kid...i'm jus leavin him a breathless victim
it's hidden, but i can already tell he's got a worse rec than System^
Dap? nah i'll give you the reverse of that, you emotional bitch
jus a newb gittin hit wit the learnin curve when i'm throwin a pitch
Drew, a reason why you overlooked is cuz you always fall short
n thaz why ya keys git stepped on, like the ones on basketball courts
ya punches aint creative either, dont even deny that
i could hit ya chapped lips wit a witty punch
............................n you still couldn't spit a wise crack
this a hijack--fuck ya title, you'll be dropped in the wack pit
cuz despite ya weight, you're easily carried away by this rap shit
you wont ever git a rap career goin, c'mon dawg admit it
so lemme jus introduce you n ya boys to Bucket, so yall can kick it

meh......Voters: dont be dumb, look out for wordplay...

Voted For: LIL'DREW

ok ok...lil drew took this in my eyes...no hate kwell...i just liked his verse better...it flowed better and had way better structure...he used decent word play, didnt overplay any lines, they all made sense...even tho there was alot of self glorifacation he made it work...kwell...urz was choppy...all over again...get structure...and u b on ure way thugthizzle...u had decent wordplay as well but i wasnt really feelin it...i was forced to read the verse it felt like...it wasnt intersting to me...so my vote goes to drew...good battle yalll...~1~

Voted For: Kwell

wow we've got ourselves a battle god dAMN ima hav to giv dis to kwell cuz he led in Wordplay vocab structure n punches but htis was hell of a battle v/kwell

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Voted For: LIL'DREW

Lil'DREW won this one cuz his punches were good and the words were carefully picked almost like a tongue twister. None of the lines were stretches. The lines even had a pattern.

Kwell's was good too, but his punchlines and chosen words werent as good, but he did have a better vocab.

Both cats, keep it up.

......................wow.........................

This was feedback posted for LIL'DREW
 

yo...this was a nice battle...I cant vote so imma just leave some feed...drew dawg ya verse was tight, but it really was not a battle verse...that was open mic type shit...Kwell, ya shit was nice...wordplay and punches were there...both verses flowed fine...no problem there...drew, just work on ya personals and punches aight dawg? 1

^thank you, finally someone wit some sense...

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Voted For: Kwell

Kwell more i like it.

KWELL hit em hard with punchlines..

LIL'DREW wtf you doing? you need diss him, you were rapping about yourself and not sayin much about your opponent.

KWELL 4 STARS
LIL"DREW 2 STARS

v/ KWELL

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Voted For: Kwell

yo u killed him........

Drew u do too much self glorification man...attack ur opponent...u had some played out punches and u aint attempt no personals or nothing..u really need to elevate man...overall3/10

Kwell u murdered him..ya wordplay was good..ur punches and personals were good..overall7/10

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Voted For: Kwell

drew
too simplistic rhymes and half the verse was played... work on almost everything man, you just need to battle more and get more experience.

Kwell
Won this easy with a more complex verse... wordplay, setup punches etc. So yeah, theres really not much to say, it is obvious who the winner is.. kwell had more lines as well.

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Voted For: Kwell

Kwell
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty dope.. most of ur punches connected.. the concepts were pretty good as well.. u had no personals..

LIL'DREW
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but it came out wack.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had an alright structure.. as well as an alright flow.. neither had good personals.. Kwell had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Kwell gets my vote..

VOTE - KWELL

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Voted For: Kwell

kwell good word play and u'z a funny muthafuka too.
out of both of these my favorite line was
"and even if i was a hoe, you couldn't pay me to give a fuck/"
Lil Drew u had a little sumn' goin' there too but u just didn't
put no real effort into this.so i gotta vote for Kwell.