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*Troop* vs Dopeman
Battle Rules:
8Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0=Ko U wanted 2 battle me Your wish is granted Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 11-03-04 at 02:31 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. Win by KO |
Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 05:29 AM.
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aight, heres somthin u might not know about this kid........
hes gay i got the proof, he wanted me in his ''backseat''... lets see if this so called ''vet'' gets a win without bein a cheat the rumour is, you duck n whine to get wins... so this where the real personals begin..... hes pickin on femcee newbs, so add the bully tag to his name.. fuck rhymin, i'll make u suicidle by jackin your ''e-chain''... dumb lame, lady fiya is the closest thing u ever had to a girlfriend... its aight tho, this kid got mad e-jewllery an much rv cash to spend..!!! Explanations: the backseat thing was cause thats what he had as his location ''In Your Backseat'' he was pickin on some newbie femcee called la mafia or somthin.. an the closer is cause this guy thinks he some kind of baller an he claims lady fiya is his ''baby girl'' |
o aight, explanations...
the backseat thing was cause thats what he had as his location ''In Your Backseat'' he was pickin on some newbie femcee called la mafia or somthin.. an the closer is cause this guy thinks he some kind of baller an he claims lady fiya is his ''baby girl'' |
*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 01:36 PM.
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*Throws AI chain at u and grips Mic* Whuts My Name" Answer? Please state "Yea Yea" get the Term Rights 46Victories 29 Misses D get Devoured Often like PegLegs Around Termites You got confident in Dominance when your Win stats hit around Thirty Providing Ya "Fecee Aroma'd Verses" the only way u Drop "Dirty Dirty' Inacqurate testimonies of Angel Tendencies u dont have no Destruction Hault your functions like Writing after a Thumb and Index Finger Deduction "Whuts your Name? Beats me ask twice more and i reply wit a NopeMan Digest these "Cocaine Laced Laxetivs" and still not Drop DopeMan *Throws mic at u* *Walks off stage* 1st bar-look at his user title 2nd bar-Hes from dirty dirty hes in angels of destruction |
This was feedback posted for *Troop*
^ha ha nice verse, g'luck, fam.. :), this ya girl fiya..
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upppin.............
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Voted For: *Troop*
LMFAO Troop nigga you are dopeness yours sounded like a true battle I like that.. My fav line was the closer..was feeling the vocab also.the flow was good if you say there verse twice which did..much respect to you..very underated.. Dopeman:yo I wasn't feeling our verse dawg..rhyme scheme was basc structure was like me..when I ha 300 post and shit It had me going OHHHH instead of OOOOO feel me? Troop Wins. done |
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Further explained vote: the reason I didn't Like dopeman: his rhyme scheme ha yet to get better.. all his punches seem to be familiar to me wich means there not very original and Like I said before Troop is dopeness..almost as good as me ;) |
uppin' this for my nigga Troop- partner in crime, g'luck.. pz...
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indepth, did troop ask you to vote for him?
cause you posted a better explanation, which kinda indicates troop wasnt happy with your original feed, so he wanted you to add more so it dont get dq'ed lady fiya, get from up troops ass.................. this is OUR battle, lay off his nuts sweetness troop, decent verse.. uppin for votes folks |
^that was lame but not as lame as ur verse... it can be YOUR battle, cuz i wouldn't want ya verse.. but anywayz.. i'm out, g'luck both...
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Voted For: *Troop*
iight troop came harder wit the punches n personals. he had a good flow n vocab was iight. "Whuts your Name? Beats me ask twice more and i reply wit a NopeMan Digest these "Cocaine Laced Laxetivs" and still not Drop DopeMan n he just hit hard wit the lyrics.....so my vote=troop |
addin more to my vote but troop just hit it harder he explained how it was all goin down n had harder hits. his personals were killa to he was just throwin everything he had at dope. dope ya verse wasnt to great sry man. i mean i just wasnt feelin n of ya punches or nething so like i said it goes to troop
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uppin this shit
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Voted For: *Troop*
troop: i think the punches were just....DECENT the best thing you had overall in my opinion was vocab flow was okay.......... 1st bar was a aight personal slightly effective but somewhat played in my eyes. 2nd bar nice personal effective and pretty good. 3rd bar was okay...luckily you put this in EFL if you put it in front lines no one would know it lmfao.......................... 4th and final bar was PLAYED!!!didn't do well for the drop make it more creative because drugs isn't a good thing to use wordplay with nah mean! overall: 7/10 dopeman: basic drop nothing special and i'll explain why below 1st bar was not good at all....yeah it was a personal but not a very good one because GAY LINES=PLAYED obviously...... 2nd bar was a filler straight up honestly..........you didn't really diss him much. 3rd bar is your best bar because i get it and he throws on his "AI Chain" in replies sometimes............ 4th bar was wizack! honestly........personal concept=played and don't mention his "E-Jewelry"twice in a row....overall: 5.5/10 vote: troop |
Voted For: *Troop*
*Troop*’s Verse Whuts My Name" Answer? Please state "Yea Yea" get the Term Rights 46Victories 29 Misses D get Devoured Often like PegLegs AroundTermites ^Decent openr here… You got confident in Dominance when your Win stats hit around Thirty Providing Ya "Fecee Aroma'd Verses" the only way u Drop "Dirty Dirty' ^haha…nice punch Inaccurate testimonies of Angel Tendencies u don’t have no Destruction Hault your functions like Writing after a Thumb and Index Finger Deduction ^eh…pretty decent hea… "Whuts your Name? Beats me ask twice more and i reply wit a NopeMan Digest these "Cocaine Laced Laxetivs" and still not Drop DopeMan ^pretty nice closer Dopeman’s Verse hes gay i got the proof, he wanted me in his ''backseat''... lets see if this so called ''vet'' gets a win without bein a cheat ^eh…decent openr the rumour is, you duck n whine to get wins... so this where the real personals begin..... ^……….okay hes pickin on femcee newbs, so add the bully tag to his name.. fuck rhymin, i'll make u suicidle by jackin your ''e-chain''... ^nice punch hea… dumb lame, lady fiya is the closest thing u ever had to a girlfriend... its aight tho, this kid got mad e-jewllery an much rv cash to spend..!!! ^erm…decent closer Overall haha…*Troop* took this one wit ease had harder punches…a nice flow…and a decent structure here… |
..*RTF* under my sig *Troop*
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vote: troop hands down won better flow better punches better verse plus i enjoyed it more the other guy thought he came dope but man that was an average verse not really up to par and i can see from now that i can take hi out as-well no-problem but yea back to this battle man u got ya ass hand it to u
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