WeeDex vs colobus
 

Battle Rules:

4 - 8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-05-04 at 05:53 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

WeeDex has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 05:54 AM.

Vest not needed, chest not bleeding/
I’ll leave you like a five-dollar ho just pleading/
And begging/ regretting/ not forgetting the sweating/
Does it make you dumb, when you come from inbreeding?/
Im WeeDex, straight from the depths of hell!/
About colobus is a weird story to tell/
Of how his parents were bro & sis and how in love they fell/
And his name should be Columbus but he’s too dumb to spell!

Colobus has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-04 06:21 AM.

Sup Weedex, sound like a type of Windex, 0-1, not gonna let u win text.
Smellin the agent, get those effects, window cleanin only way you’ll impress.
Ok enuff about windows, forgot one factor, ima fuck u round like a chiropractor.
U got no flow, u got no skills, ur penis is growin slow cos u stunning it wid pills
Ok time to exit, ill see ya later, soon you’ll be sent to OZ, convicted child raper.
Thankyou.

Voted For: WeeDex

lol hellll na u WeeDex killed em i was feelin dat last part u get ma props
Colobus not to hate or nuttin but dat was weak yo punch lines were original

Cock-suckers! vote!

If you read it, rate it!

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Voted For: Colobus

Voted for this cat cause weedex pm'd for a vote. Thats gay - hope you lose kiddo

Voted For: Colobus

lol damn nice colobus funny verse dat's good
aight da vote goes to you colobus

openin verse- colobus
structure- weedex by a bit
punchline-colobus
metas- hmm...
overall-colobus

who came harder it was colobus
weedex u need get rid of da / it makes them look basic
though keep elevatin weedex good job colobus

lol i am votin fairly dawg...what makes u think i'm not?
i don't want no net beef i rather take this to da front lines
ofcourse if u down with dat...

meet me at the front line
 

lol i guess u did take my advice by gettin ride of da / slashes well aight
if u want me in a battle with you it'll be my pleasure u elevate
i'll tell u dat so let's do this then if u down...

Voted For: WeeDex

WeeDex - iight verse, you had some multi's in there and a good flow.

Best Line - Of how his parents were bro & sis and how in love they fell/
And his name should be Columbus but he’s too dumb to spell

Worst Line - Im WeeDex, straight from the depths of hell!/
About colobus is a weird story to tell/

Colobus - iight verse also, your flow was off.. but you had a good vocab.

Best Line - Sup Weedex, sound like a type of Windex, 0-1, not gonna let u win text.

Worst Line - Smellin the agent, get those effects, window cleanin only way you’ll impress

OVERALL - close battle here, but I gotta give this to WeeDex - his punches were just hitten harder and his flow was better. Colobus you need to work on your flow a bit, and work on them punches a bit.

Vote - WeeDex

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please lets vote and finbish this, shambles of a battle

uppin peeps. pls evry fair vote i see here, i promise i will return the favour on at least one of ur battles.

just take a little time

up this bitch
,........................................

Voted For: WeeDex

you both suck and you both need elevation. colobus your lines were streched and weedex you had weak ass punches. but you haad decnet wordplay.
colobus my vote goes to weedex. you need elevation colobus. you both do.
LOL
LEGEND.
return da favor.

Voted For: Colobus

Vest not needed, chest not bleeding/
I’ll leave you like a five-dollar ho just pleading/
And begging/ regretting/ not forgetting the sweating/
Does it make you dumb, when you come from inbreeding?/
^^^^^^^^^^^ MULIT'Z AND FLOW NO GOOD PUNCHES



Im WeeDex, straight from the depths of hell!/
About colobus is a weird story to tell/
Of how his parents were bro & sis and how in love they fell/
And his name should be Columbus but he’s too dumb to spell!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ NO GOOD PUNCHES FLOW TOOK THIS


WEEDEXX- NO GOOD PUNCHES BUT DA FLOW TOOK THIS PUT PUNCHES IN YA BATTLES AIIIIGHT FAM





Sup Weedex, sound like a type of Windex, 0-1, not gonna let u win text.
Smellin the agent, get those effects, window cleanin only way you’ll impress.
Ok enuff about windows, forgot one factor, ima fuck u round like a chiropractor.
U got no flow, u got no skills, ur penis is growin slow cos u stunning it wid pills
Ok time to exit, ill see ya later, soon you’ll be sent to OZ, convicted child
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA FLOW IS KINDA CHOPPED UP BUT U HAD PUNCHES U WAS DISSING HIM


OVERALL= DIS BATTLE GOES HANDS DOWN TO COLOBUS HE CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES DA FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP BUT HE HAD PUNCHES

WEEDEXX- U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES THE FLOW TOOK IT IN YA VERSE BUT PUT SOME PUNCEHS IN YA VERSES


PEACE

uppin this peeps

close this muvva fucka!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: WeeDex

THE ONLY REASON WHY IM VOTIN 4 U CAUSE U HAD MORE THAN 1 PUNCH LINE OTHERWISE IT WAS TIE

1 more vote

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want to close this

Voted For: WeeDex

Sup Weedex, sound like a type of Windex, 0-1, not gonna let u win text.
Smellin the agent, get those effects, window cleanin only way you’ll impress.
(MAYN WTF...PLAYED OUT, BUT FUNNY...7/10)

Ok enuff about windows, forgot one factor, ima fuck u round like a chiropractor.
U got no flow, u got no skills, ur penis is growin slow cos u stunning it wid pills
Ok time to exit, ill see ya later, soon you’ll be sent to OZ, convicted child raper.
(YO MAN I DONT KNO WHO SHOWED YOU TO BATTLE BUT YOU NEED STRUCTURE...THERE ARE UNEVEN LINES...AND YOUR FLOW IS KINDA NOT THERE...LOL...GET SOME STRUCTURE, FLOW, AND ELEVATE YOUR SKILLS...)



Vest not needed, chest not bleeding/
I’ll leave you like a five-dollar ho just pleading/
(NICE FLOW, MULTIE USE, AND PUNCHES...7/10)

And begging/ regretting/ not forgetting the sweating/
Does it make you dumb, when you come from inbreeding?/
(MULTIES ALL OVER...NICE WORDPLAY, AND DISS OF INBREEDING...8/10)

Im WeeDex, straight from the depths of hell!/
About colobus is a weird story to tell/
(TO PLAIN FOR A BATTLE...IT FLOWED, LOL...ITS A SELF GLORIFACATION BAR REALLLY...COULD HAVE LEFT IT OUT...6/10)

Of how his parents were bro & sis and how in love they fell/
And his name should be Columbus but he’s too dumb to spell!
(DECENT ENDER, COULD HAVE RE WORDED IT AND MADE IT MORE RAW AND MEAN...HAD GOOD FLOW AND THE LAST LINE WAS A GOOD PUNCH...)

AIGHT MAYN...YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD...YOU HAD DECENT PUNCHES, GOOD USE OF MULTIES, PUNCHES, DISSES, AND WHAT NOT...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS OKAY, BUT IT COULD USE A LITTLE BIT OF WORK...OVERALL YOUR VERSE WAS GOOD, JUST ELEVATE ON THE LEVEL OF KEEPING SELF GLORIFACATION BARS OUT OF YOUR VERSES...SO YOU GET MY VOTE...

VOTE/WEEDEXX

AND RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY BATTLE AGAINTS LIL CHUBBS, THE LINK IS POSTED IN MY SIG...THANKS FAM...~1~