~Da R.I.P. Ressurrection Tryouts~
 

Yes, I am still holding tryouts for hardcore mcs....but I'm looking for tight....so if you think your horrible, please dont waste my time or yours......
Let the recruiting Begin.....

ayo... GDUCE and Bizzey told me to come here... here is a link to a battle... let me know ASAP... peace 1

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=158119

^i say in........

fa sho, welcome Wicked Clown.....to Da R.I.P.

uppin for some hard core rappers boys and girls

fa sho, uppin for more recruites.........

I'm ill and real and I feel

How was my tryout deuce?

You want in forreal VP?

aiite fuck this sum quick shit......

call me a librarian cause bitches i book wit ease//
its insane how my lyrics leave u tounge tied like da hook from breath//
please...i been knwn to murder those jockin my thesis//
fuck wit me and end up in my closet R.ottin I.n P.eices//

.....sum quick shit.....get at me...1

Whats crackin, Nap-Town Crisis here ta spit Im ready ta join.....


Whats crack-a-lackin//
Get back and hit the flo cuz my Mac is packin//
Someone spit me a QB verse

My fault ta waste space I pressed tha wrong button, this is my last post....

I had ta let you know that my Mac was packin//
Throw me a QB verse so my frequent lyrics can SAC it//
My lyrics push winds hard enough flip seas, so MCs//
throw benadrill down my barrell fo I make my clip sneeze//
I'd hate ta leave challengers starin down frownin wit a big jaw buckled//
so I wet ya face soaked lookin like a unstarted jig-saw puzzle//
Ay, send somebody ta battle who yo think can start better//
Cuz Ima have'm swallow a dictionary so they can fart letters//

Yeah man, you got potiential, welcome to da rip homie...

G: deuce is this good enough to join?

dont start shit with me u might get terrified/
getting me pissed will only get u dignified/
u sure u want this u might get depletion/
all u do is fabrication/
so callin me on is oppress/
rappin vs me puts u in depress/
cant beat me only puttin u under stress/
so lets end this shit and make it polite/
this shits goin in my career its goin to be my main highlite/

thuglife i say no...youve been here for what and you dont get anything yet and i caught on and im the stupidest person you will ever know..well i guess not..NOW..but no hate just a comin joke

sorry kid, but you need to elevate more ight...........

x u know Im coo with u now right I was fuckin with u I do it to everyone!!! and d u think its better than all those corny ass rhymes i uesd against u in our battle? :thumbup:

naw your stucture is messed up still...try and werk off my verse for are battle i had soem punches that were iight but my lines were forced a lil but i still merked you...and my stucture is perfect and flows perfect..

yo this crew anygoodz.... i jsut wanted to see if idd make it in cause i dunno what crew i wanna be in yet... heres a quick verse...

im complex..more wordplay than confusion in ur text/
i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest/
severly i'll slay ya sentences cause a homicide investigation/
be mindful of who you're facin..i'll leave eyes and anus adjacent/
but lets stick to tha facts..i stay twistin ya back/
treat ya spine like cocaine habbits..and stay addicted to crack/
double up this thug wit uppercuts thats rockin ya neck/
knockin the left side of ya jaw up to the top of ya head/
as far as disses go...they're gay please make them end/
cause u stay under the weather..especially when its rainin men/

i say in ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

does anyone else think i made it in??? :huh:

uppin for recruites..................

yeah he's raw, just sended him a pm.............

hey G:duece like this? if so lemme join but if no ill go away!



didnt ppl in school teach u not to fuck with me/
aint no one in any of my raps gonna get credibility/
to take me out your gonna need an organization/
so im takin your ass out by persuasion/
when u lose your gonna get kicked out ya crew and have a exclamation/
ill have u act different like a fluctuation/
man im gigantic/
ill be playin your ass as a gimmic/
man your shits old like a played out lyric/

lyric and gimmic dont rhyme right...and Gigantic didnt rhyme with anything in that verse..

For what it's worth in RIP..I vote No..

Keep improvin'...You need to up your game..

lyric and gigantic rhyme!!! :thumbup:

nah...they dont...the only similarity is the "ic" at the end..

Thats one of your problems...not JUST the last portion or peice of a word should rhyme with another, but the other word should rhyme with the WORD..not the ending...

For SHizzle Niggas Imma Keep It Long Beach

One(One)

ay yo im here.. whoeva pmed me you guys wanted to ask me sumfink?

kooboo=in

epic you want in wigga?

KoObOo u in dawg if u want in

aiiight, so tell me some stuff bout this crew.. best emcess, how often we crew battle and shit ????

were crew battling right away get in the forum fonzy

hey
 

ay can i try out?... here ill spit a verse

tryen to fight young one just to make a name for ur self//
my heat is drastic ill rap u in plastic like the easter rabbit//
and ur lines wack ur just wastin pen im likea beast im just like the racimen//
lil faget at the mall try to make a mence//
just by facing him u cant even win//
u say u got talents ill just put feather on ur hair like u play for the falcons//
cant see y im dissing him if r.o.t.c dont work ill teach yall some disipline//
i am deaf i cannot be stop im like the best in the west just brace me like pac//every one is getting chase on ur block they say im hot//
my glock will blaze u no snitchen this time the cops wont save u//
im runnin the bay ill even send chops on ur way too//
u betta know who u talken too i have killers every hood where u walken threw//u made it personal this ant even rap u say nigga when u ant even black//

^i say no...nuff said dont ask why

uppin for recruites......................

uppin for recruites..........................

..Xplicit.. told me to come tryout for this crew.. so I will drop a link to a battle.. tell me what you think.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156859

Welcome to da fam kid..................

Uppin for recruites.............

-G-