JPoll vs Eastcoast
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-04-04 at 06:16 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

EastCoast has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 12:55 PM.

Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/

my bad i accidentally messed up on typibng my first two lines....................

JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 01:19 PM.

fucking people...

Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling

Voted For: JPoll

just stoping by viewing the polls.................

Removed

oo-fuck i aint mean to hit vote i ment feed-back oo-well it will get DQ ANYWAYS...

come on dawg im upping 4 votes......................dont b sleeping

uppin..........................4 .............................votez................ .

Voted For: EastCoast

EastCoast...Easy...Killed it...ill punches, flow was there, and I was feelin the scheme at the beginnin of each rhyme...nice work man keep it up...1

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Voted For: EastCoast

IP:


Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/


pretty tight overall, i aint got time 2 break it down so...

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haha, stop asking people to vote, or i'll ban you.....................

Voted For: EastCoast

EASTCOAST I LIKED THE WAY THIS FLOWED, REAL TIGHT,PRETTY DEEP
STRAIGHT OVERALL GOOD VERSE,
JPOLL ALRIGHT VERSE NEEDED A LITTLE BETTER OF PUNCHES

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This was feedback posted for EastCoast
 

i dont think my vote was finished when i sent it by mistake.

vocab: i would have to say eastcoast's vocab is damn good, for a minor. Regardless of age tho, good use of words

Originality: JPoll was more original, i loved the marilyn monroe line

Sorry tho JPoll, i think you are good but was out-done this time

shit, vote didnt go thru, i will post it below, wat i originally sent as my vote

Voted For: EastCoast

Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/- eastcoast
-nice punchline
i think eastcoast came a little harder than you with personals
so my vote goes to him

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Voted For: EastCoast

yo east coast dat was nice had some wordplay in
dat man i like dat

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stop fucking getting herbs to vote on this shit, we need real emcees not these wack ass pretenders!!!!


These two votes are going to be cancelled again, fuck your an idiot...you know you lost but instead you have to get people with 24 fucking posts to vote...retard!

i didnt get nobody to vote...i just looked and that dude is on a fucking voting and postin spree....i aint getting nobody to vote on shit...so u need to stop trying to acuuse people of shit....fucking fag just mad cuz u losing....o by the way i aint stupid i no that shit is finna be cancelled...i looked at all the stuff he's voted on and it's all finna be cancelled

'finna'? what the fuck, go get yourself an education, then you'll actually understand some wordplay and some of my punches...

it doesn't matter if these are going to get cancelled, because you're getting banned voting for yourself!

This was feedback posted for JPoll
 

checkin dem polls........................................

Voted For: JPoll

this was kinda lopsided but decent... imma break it down for ya here, good battle both of you....

Eastcoast... structure was aweful.. hate the / after every line and it wasnt set up correctly... flow was good, i liked the way you started off with the multis, that got you some points... punches were there, personals not so much... you had some wordplay and creativity, overall not a bad verse but could have been better....5/10

JPoll- shit was tight... structure was iffy, liked the opener about him claiming the whol east coast, shit was funny and thats a pluss... punches were good and the personals hit hard... multis...eh.... had wordplay and creativity... overall a good verse and the punches and personals won it for you... 7/10

overall this was a pretty decent battle... no hate to east coast but this one goes to Jpoll.....

VOTE-JPoll............

Voted For: JPoll


Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
2/10
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
2/10
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
1/10
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
3/10
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/
1/10

punches were lame and played
wordplay was non existent
ya similies werent there
no metas
and no personals
kinda like a regular freestyle


Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
3/10
And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
2/10
You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
5/10
You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
4/10
No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling
3/10

punches were kinda simple and plain
ya wordplay was slightly better
i didnt like ya structure
ya metas were ok i guess
ya personals were better than ya opponents

Poll gets this 4 overall better wordplay and punches

Voted For: JPoll

jpoll took this easy.
eastcoast had no punches whatsoever,struc needs workin on too.wordplay woz ok, and some of the concepts were decent enough but the punches were pretty lame...u need ta elevate a lot b4 tryin to beat sumone of jpolls skill.

jpoll came average really, nothin hit too hard, but in every area his verse was better so he gets my vote.

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uppin this people....yup.....................................

uppin dis shit.....................................

This was feedback posted for JPoll
 

Obviously you beat him...................................

LOL at the votes.. i wouldve voted for you but ..... i dunno why...

uppin again for some real votes.....................................

uppin this.....

I wanna see Eastcoast ended on this battle. Little dodgy fucker!

Voted For: JPoll

Eastcoast

Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/
Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
/\ Blah self-glory

The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
/\ weak self-g and played

Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
/\ punch meh...again self-g

Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
/\ aight line but not special

That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/
/\ ??? blah at the closer

JPoll

Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
/\ 2nd line self-g but aight opener

And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
/\ blah at 3 line rhymes but good punch

You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
/\ good punch liked it

You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
/\ aight punch again

No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling
/\ aight closer coulda been better though

V/JPoll...1st off explaining isn't nesseccary...but i will Eastcoast how much more self-g could ya get???...ur supposed to be dissin ya opponent strucutre was stretched and flow off in places also lose the / thing it's newb...punches non-existent and personals none...no real wordplay basic vocab...elevate

JPoll...much better verse 1 sided to be honest u took this with ease and you shoulda took the time to battle someone with more skill to be honest...this to me looks like a newb bashing but blah flowed aight but try and lose the 3 line rhymes because it to me jus hides a stretched structure...

RTF on ma sig or on my latest song...

This was feedback posted for EastCoast
 

This nigga took this . .
I Felt his punches more...
He was Consistant.

^haha, posting up comments for yourself again? uppin for the ko

y didnt u vote than...k9...instead of just posting feedback.....WTF??!!......

upping............................................

Voted For: JPoll

*yawn* i wanted a close battle

punches- Jpoll overall just harder hittin
personals- neither had em
multis- neither had em
metas- Jpoll overall just better
structure- Jpoll wuz better lookin, and didnt fall off
wordplay- neither had it
humor- Jpoll i chuckled
flow-Jpoll overall just kept goin

Jpoll solid drop. try some personals too.

EC bro u gotta elevate. harder punches, try personals, and incorporate multis, wordplay, etc too

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/Jpoll

pz

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you a hypocrit muthafucker...how you gon say dat when on the first and second page you voted for me.......dick riding..hating...BITCH........................uppi n dis battle.

^wutever....................uppin dis.............