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Dabatos vs Critic
Battle Rules:
No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic: Decisions of a President... 20 lines!! 1 hour to spit! 3-0 = KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-05-04 at 03:53 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
CriTiC has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 02:53 PM.
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Dabatos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 02:54 PM.
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Decisions of a president [Decision for the War in Iraq] For this moment i have the power to End or Save more lives... Its either loose to this war, or send death notices to men's wives... Over a thousand are dead, some comin home wit no arms or legs... If i continue this war, some will even come home with no heads... Secutary of defense, says the only way to win is a nuclear bomb... Thinking why use a weapon that we tried to take away from sadam... We've already lost a thousand soldiers, n almost no more to use... The only way to continue is to bring back the draft so we don't loose... We've already used over 2 hundred billion dollars, N I need two hundred more... And i need to keep lying that oil isn't the reason that we in war for... [Decisions to change America] Too many decisions to make, everyday tryin to make our livin way great.. deciding how much moneys givin to states, while people are givin me hate.. I even have decision's to take, from homes to where ppl's lives are placed.. Jst yesturday i had to choose if bumbs should have homes or no place to stay... My decisions involve medical patients, to stoppin all illegal imigration... And one wrong decisoin could ruin this whole country's reputation.. Because of my decision's, I live a life full of enemies and all regrets... A life full of future feared images which sadely i may never forget... I now have the power to make this great country from safe to insecure... And even ruin an adult or childs life all in just one of my own signatures... |
X-project is ahead of schedule we need to start testing
Investing in technology this is not the time for resting I suggest we expose a few subjects to test the effects The complex matter will courses human cells to defect We started testing the germ on primates in a natural state So we could sample the trail by analysing pulps that dilate The symptoms start with dilation then a rocking sensation Then the subject’s brain implodes from mind manifestations The blood is contagious,,. And could affect you in seconds The infected will scuffle for meat, as the blood starts to beckon Mr president we are losing the war, we need to act now The X-project is ready, now we just need you to Allow “How can we do this its against all aspects of humanity” Fuck popularity if we do this now we will save our sanity Vanity’s already out the window, we our on our last leg Next thing you know,.. We will be on the floor as we beg “Don’t undermined me, the X-project could effect us as well The epidemic will come in force and unleash an all mighty hell” “My decision is final we need to act now press the button to kill so all human life if will come to an end and let the brains spill” |
oh shyt man!! very nyce..you hella killed me, i went too much like a newb.. :)... if u want to know who i am...
These illusions in my dreams are really full of confusion... Un-Provin delusions of un-amusin images now un-loosened... No time to re-joice, and sleep doesn’t seem to be a choice... Too afraid to hear that voice that seems to never be destroyed... Boredemness I avoid, but no matter what i’d loose and fall asleep... In my dreams I’d fall too deep, I cant escape cuz im all too weak... A never ending whisper, screams with children slowly crawling close.... Blood exposed, sliding out her eyes and nose with no surviving hope... My legs restricted, not even my small fingers are able to be lifted.. My eyes not allowed to be shut, My life, not allowed to just live it.... I’d think at times the only way for it to disapear is to do suicide... But every night its crystal clear that there’s no use to undo my life.. So i’ll just have to live with the sufferin and the horrible dreams... N have people think I lived a happy life, wen that ain’t wut it seems... who wrote dat verse ^ |
Voted For: Dabatos
yea, this was a nice battle. I don't like topicals much, but i like to read them. They nice. And this was nice topic, and nice verses. Debatos, nice shit, man. your verse was hot. I loved the flow, really didn't flow off. You had nice imagery and meta's. Made me think nicely, and kept on topic and nice shit. Critic, your verse was nice too. It had good flow, but I thought it fell off in a few spots. other stuff were pretty nice. I liked yo metas and imagery. Keep up man. Flow is what separated thses. props to both pc |
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Voted For: Dabatos
Okay Dabatos... yours was good and i could see imagery in my mind and it made sence.... i likes how you organized your structure into 2 paragraphs.....you stayed on topic with the whole thing CriTiC- yours was alright but i couldnt see any imagination in my mind and it was a decent drop.... |
This was feedback posted for CriTiC
nice battle. i liked critic's better though because it was easier to read and had a better flow to me. keep elevating.
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Sup thanks for the votes,,.. UPING
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This was feedback posted for Dabatos
yo dis was aiight but ya structa wasnt dat good but
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Voted For: CriTiC
WHOA!!!! dope as shyt kidd... so sikk... smashed him... everythin flowed rite on point... perfect structure... vocab to make peepl break out they dictionaries... shyt was so tite yo... dope... closer killed it... v/critic vote honestly on my battle.. linkz in sig... ~1~ |
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Thank for the votes people Up~ing this.
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Voted For: CriTiC
gotta go wit critic...he got more into depth with the topic...i liked his use of vocab....this was really close though return tha honest favor in this crew battle...only if u have more than 500 posts.....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160336 |
Thanks for the votes uping please,........
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Voted For: CriTiC
I think that CriTiC got this battle because i feel that CriTiC came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt CriTiC got it was effective and was on point Dabatos u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to CriTiC good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to CriTiC and flow and structure i'll give to both as they were both good. Basically i went for CriTiC becuase to story of Iraq is a predictable type of story to chose in this sort of topic, i felt yuo should've tried to be a bit more creative...which CriTiC was... V/CriTiC There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly |
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Voted For: CriTiC
ok pretty good topical......... there were no multis in either verse so i cant consider that in the vote........ingenious....to me your verse seemed like it is something that 90% of rv would have done in a topical like this.......i like the fact that critic was a lot more creative instead of using the first thing that pops in everyones head when they think of the presidents decisions.....structure was decent from both....they were both pretty complex verses but when it comes down to it i felt like i had to vote for critic because of his creativity.....nothing against you ingenious....your verse was good......but that is why i voted for critic......his is more creative than ingeniouses.....please retur an honest vote on my topical with king dipset....link in my sig..no hate in this vote at all....good verses |
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Voted For: CriTiC
im goin wit critic on this one.ing mind came wit sum real depth....whilst critics was more original.....struc was tite by bot,flow pretty nice, no real vocab in either piece. tite battle to call,i. mind i like ur shit a lot,another gud drop.but i just enjoyed critics more with beta imagination. props to both verses. |
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