Reloaded vs Tstorm
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-08-04 at 06:21 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 06:23 PM.

your not a storm your just a breeze/
im bout to win this battle with ease/

your nothing but a gay hater/
your fake but im a real freak of nature/

come on cant you see/
not even florida done felt something like me/

you go around acting like your tha shit/
but we all know you go home scared and beat your dick/

you should not even spit on me/
its a blind spit so i dont know what my next line will be/

with my gun im going to cock and squeeze and put a bullet in you/
you suck so bad I.G.U. wont even put you in their crew/

spiting these rhymes i wont stop/
cause i know your scared ass aint never held a glock/

bitch you cant hack it/
the only hood you every been to was the one on your jacket/

looks like i done grabed myself another win/
go cry to your mother and give up rapping/

i aint even trying to win im just having fun/
you can stop crying cause im done/

crazy shit here. upping on this shit...............

upping. he's choking.................

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 07:29 AM.

wtf?..dumb herb setting this battle up before i even agreed?
well...with a 3-8 record,thats the only time uve taken a lead!
why they call you re-loaded?...coz it takes you a year to fire?
with your skills...we`ll be waiting so long, rapverse will expire!
need ta change your avy,coz your weights overrated at light
u a woman?,coz u throwin punches like this was a pillow fight!
fuck it,im not wasting any more lines on this guy who cnt spit
ya lines cudnt make me "choke"...if they came from ausvitz!..


exp...
ausvitz(the war camp where they "choked" the jews by gasin em)
spellings prob fucked up.lol

uppin.
jus oner point...a fake personal on the crew tryout i belive?...lol..who the fucks i.g.u?
lol......
not that it matters.
upp

Voted For: Reloaded

my vote goes to RELOADED..
for 3 reasons

-punch lines are good
-grabbed my attention early
-T-STORM ur punch lines are good but u loose my concertration quikc

last time i accept a battle wit 20 posts to vote.
wow. explained.herb.

suppose ill hve to get that removed.

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Voted For: Tstorm

Sup this is how I see it,,...

T doped some fire on this kid,.. opener was nice and
right on point and the close smashed it.

Used good vocab nice wordplay and drop a solid decent
verse.

Best bar,,...

why they call you re-loaded?...coz it takes you a year to fire?
with your skills...we`ll be waiting so long, rapverse will expire!
^LMAO Personal nice flow hard hitting punch.


Reload,,... You verse was really basic and very predictable
flowed we but that was about it. Vocab didn't really have
any. No wordplay and the punches played like a bitch.

Best Bar...
i aint even trying to win im just having fun/
you can stop crying cause im done/
^Coz the verse was over^

Elevate man..

Vote ~ T total miss match reload got raped...

upping for5 some votes..............

Reload if you wanna battle holla @ me,...

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Voted For: Tstorm

vote: tstorm....

REloaded this is how it is....
1) do not type ya verse like this...

im gonna kill ya blood spill-ya
if i tossed ya finger at ya buddy, still no-one feel's-ya /

^^ that look NOOBISH N weak N stupid dont skip a line just cuz u made a bar keep it going like tstome did peep hes verse he droped N u'rs the way it looks tstorm looks better so-far befor i even looked at what ya actully wrote....

2) get more creative N more detail punches...

your not a storm your just a breeze/
im bout to win this battle with ease/ (-- thats ya first bar N there was no personal no punch just slef-glorifying ya-self which is weak in a battle.....

wtf?..dumb herb setting this battle up before i even agreed?
well...with a 3-8 record,thats the only time uve taken a lead!
there was a nice personal there N punch thats how u start off a battle N continue to do so thru out the verse...

if u add multis ya verse would be a better read or if u got creative punches that would help also...
basicly think out the box N think of some out-rages shit u feel me...

all around tstome verse was a better read better punches better flow N all... 8.0

reloaded u need to elevate still try some open mic first N drop something RAW as if u was coming at someone sometime that can help u think outside the box........

im just trying to help u out reloaded insted of just say stomr won thats it...

keep them coming u will get better....

can u drop a honest vote fellas on these battles...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159406
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156157

uppin this thread.
drop ya links.
will return all votes.

Voted For: Tstorm

haha nice first line homie ill give u this vote u had better punches and structure better vocab and rhymes overall man u got this shyt kidd

vote on this one

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162845

This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

just checking polls..................

Voted For: Tstorm

TStorm:
You Came Firing With Insane Personals And punches.. Your Verse Was Off The Chain..
highlights: Personals, punches and Your Wordplay.


Relloaded:
Your Verse Was Very Very Simple. No Good Punches Or Personals. And your Wordplay wasnt there.
highlights: your structure was your best part of your verse.


this vote was easy from start to finish as Tstorm took it from beginer to closer.. good job..


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Voted For: Tstorm

ok bad battle i think i could have fallin a sleepbut here it is

flow t
style both
punches hard to decide but t
personal hard to decide and i gave the last one to t so reload you get it
vocab t
mults t
winner t