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sabotage vs young_one
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no crew votes me n sabotage are doin this n sabotage spit first... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-09-04 at 01:01 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
young_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 01:02 AM.
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sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 01:08 AM.
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basically ur rappin is wrong it sounds not reall its actually a miradge//i deny u a victory im history n im the future that is meant to be//
see im great i bet my grandchildren will be born before my birhdate// see that.. yes its ice dont mess wit my flow.yes its nice// when i rap ppl yell out YES HES CRISSE!// n if ryme was a crime thell probally give me lyfe// im that good n ledgendary but the glow is hidious they should crown me king cuz im only 13 like i have imortaltiy// see im spreading my knoallage shit im just being honest// listen man i might leave u scared of the dark cuz yall think to much// this rap shit is walk in the park// |
this is kinda weak......did it in 5 mins......tried to do everything in personals
30 something posts and 1 loss, aint no way u can beat me u could use those glasses in ya sig and u still couldn’t see me I’ll take it to ya ‘field’ jus cause life aint ‘fair’ Don’t mean u gotta stress over my verse, like ya avy, lose ya hair U beating me? Ha ha nigga the bets are on U bout to get knocked out, similar to how u lost to Lexikon Look at ya sig..i cant compare to u? No doubt cause im #1, like ya IP, ur number 2 I don’t know why im battlin you, this loser is crappy I’ll stomp ya head in and leave it flattened like stuart in his avy |
Voted For: sabotage
well imma give this 1 to S he won dis 1 easy he had pucnhes persnals they hit the othere guy had fuck stuture had nuttin hardly there it was mainly 1 sided to S there was no chance that guy was gonna beat S from read his verse i new hed won without reading YO verse he wins easy 1 sided nearly alll the way no dout bout it there man he won so it dont get d/qed punches-S pers-S stuture-S best-S spelling-S(YO cant spell) |
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Voted For: sabotage
sabo yeah mostly all personals... but the thing is I can't even see young_one's avy or sig.. but at least you actually dissed him, unlike his filled verse. Young homie almost your whole verse was filler.. try to attempt some creative punches man.. build a structure/flow and then set up some disses.. so yeah the outcome is obvious. |
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Voted For: sabotage
BOth were pretty weak but i gotta vote on sabotage.....sabotage came harder and actually had a good structure.......young 1's structure was kinda hard to follow...also he had hardly no punches......young 1 came really weak...both could improve on their punches and wordplay....since both verses weren't that good, it was close, but sabotage won it |
Voted For: sabotage
aight this battle was way lopsided... someone got SONED and imma break it down for yall right quick Sabatoge- good verse. punches and personals hit fairly hard and the wordplay was tight, wasnt a fan of the structure but other than that it was pretty tight, good on the creativity side as well homie 7/10 young one- overall bad verse, wanna know what ruined it? wack structure, very very wack structure... ya had some ok punches and a personal or 2. wordplay was...iffy and creativity was...aight... overall ya gotta elevate altleast on the structure.... 4/10 no hate to the young one but homie ya need elevation on that structure and on ya wordplay... not a hate vote at all this is just how i see it homie... sabatoge you had a pretty tight verse, would have been better if ya structure was on lock but the rest of it was tight, i was feelin it, especialy ya opener....overall good verse homie! VOTE- SABATOGE........................................ |
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Voted For: sabotage
v/ sabotage wasn't tha best battle seen but sab he had betta punches multi's an structure young was way to choppy an didnt have any punchs no hate but sabotage won returnnn tha favvvoorrrr....... |
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