hang-man vs young_one
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-09-04 at 01:47 PM

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hang-man has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 01:47 PM.

young_one has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 01:48 PM.

danm i told u there was no-reason for this battle to take that long freestyle battle now or forget it

u nigga u will not see 2 day i get rid of niggas like b2k u faggot isnt leavin in this town u better be luckly im givin u a shot to see me write as u cant spare to see day light
my gun will shoot u axactly like the way in marther luthr king day
u rippin me its immpossible prob in probable i will cop things form u look ur not gone to stop me see ill put birds on u,most hard words on u might aswell out u on sale in the swap meet

i dout this young one spit out da net,
cuz he been on da web longer then spidas on house arrest /
why a bout in text,
when i rather spit bullets at ya mouth-N-chest /
im out for checks, see what trying to look cute does
so i'll stomp on ya stomach til ya poop-blood /
my style brutal like a gang of angry thug's
thats waiting to put more arms around ya THEN A GROUP HUG /
this lame trash, dont get ya brains bash when i rock-a-fella like danm-dash
blame ya fame thats ass, cuz in this lesson ya SHINE run out quicker then a AK blast /
u dont want to taste my wrath
cuz u'll look like a hungry bumb with ya face in the trash /

that should be good enuff 6 bars

upp'in this battle people
lets get a few votes in here

Voted For: hang-man

Vote goes to hang-man.....Better word play

"cuz he been on da web longer then spidas on house arrest /
why a bout in text,
when i rather spit bullets at ya mouth-N-chest /"

This was feedback posted for hang-man
 

prety good home boi. shit nice punches and every thingwas good. if you wanna check out my crew.

ok.... any other votes?............uppin for more votes..

^^ u should of voted but whats good with the crew?

This was feedback posted for hang-man
 

checking polls............................................. ......

People come in here but they never vote .........sleep

Voted For: hang-man

weak battle ya both came played and the punches didnt hit but hangman had a flow and structure and his punches were better young one did pretty bad sorry but u gotta be way more creative than that,to the both of u,instead of talken about the same ol "shoot ya ass" concept u should start to use different ways of dissing him,likesumthin that u feel will make him angry if u say like a personal punch well so my vote basically goes to.......

upp'in for more votes and dont sleep

Voted For: hang-man

i dout this young one spit out da net,
cuz he been on da web longer then spidas on house arrest /
that was good.. N best line in this battle...

my style brutal like a gang of angry thug's
thats waiting to put more arms around ya THEN A GROUP HUG /
good one again...

not a bad verse and probley could elevate in the future flow good creativeness was ok all around not bad... 7.2 outta 10

the other guy had no qouteables had no punches diss was ok flow was ok creativeness was weak and everything else i just wasnt feeling it at all... 4.0 outta 10..

vote HANG-MAN

Voted For: hang-man

ok nuff said.....hang man came away with this one...the reasons

His Vocab was more complex...it was as SIMPLE as ur verse was Young One...it was nice yea...but it needz some work....Also the structure was bad on both of ya'lls you need to start lookin at the way people write ther stuff...the flow if anything went to hang man it didn't drag on as much in the lines...and the mulites weren't really there for either and this battle overall was "DECENT

SO my vote hang man

Voted For: hang-man

too easy...

youngone... how da heck are we supposed to know what's supposed to rhyme? that shyt looks like a wild ass run-on sentence... ya need to fix that... seperate ya lines... read a book every now and then... ya grammar's all jacked... half the shyt made no sense...

hang-man (even though ya came in my crew forum beefin)
this shyt was waaaay too easy for ya... ya opener was on point... i liked that shyt about the spider on house arrest....
the group hug bar was on point, too... ain't really feelin' all the thugged out lyrics but those two lines stood out the most... dame dash/rocafella lines are kinda played... other than the omma thug attitude this shyt was pretty decent and was more than enough to win this