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Heroic Verse vs Tainted
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6 -10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-06-04 at 07:57 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Tainted has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 06:58 PM.
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Heroic Verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 06:59 PM.
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Yawn, now I'm up against another dirty bum,
Look like Rickey Smiley, only you got sum work done I'm nocturnal but I stay on da prowl, Only way you can beat me is if your choke me wit ya unibrow, And ya rhymes are stank and they smell like feces, Go back to your room, and play with Jim McGreavy, I'll leave this Slim Shady with a bullet to the leg and limp The flow leave him shook and voiceless like Ashlee Simpson On Saturday Night Live So queer probably think being straight is a crime |
Yawn, now I'm up against another dirty bum,
Look like Rickey Smiley, only you got sum work done I'm nocturnal but I stay on da prowl, Only way you can beat me is if your choke me wit ya unibrow, And ya rhymes are stank and they smell like feces, Go back to your room, and play with Jim McGreavy, I'll leave this Slim Shady painstaked and limpin' The flow leave him shook and voiceless like Ashlee Simpson And your rhymes are trash, litterally talk is cheap So drop da mic, go home and keep beatin' ya meat |
Sorry, accidently posted twice. Made a mistake wit da first one so just look at da second.
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Surely I Can Destroy Your Tainted Piece
Ill Affect You Like I Was A Uncurable Dieasies Leave You Deacise After I Release My Lyrics Leave You Amazed Like You Was Tupacs Critics Infections Threw Ya Brain With Ill Intentions Sure Enough To Teach You Couple Lessons Nobody Pays Attention So You Not An Impression Leave You With A Anamasity Expression Cause You Lost This Rap Battle Session But This Shit Is Now Done No More Questions |
Voted For: Heroic Verse
Aii Here What I Think Punchez~ HV WOrd Play ~ HV Ryme Sceme~ Tainted Vocab~ Hv Overall Everthing Was HV's Except The Ryme Sceme Tainted Its Not that Ya Verse Was Weak Its Jus That HV's Was Thanx One. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Tainted
tainted Yawn, now I'm up against another dirty bum, Look like Rickey Smiley, only you got sum work done ok i supose not good 4 a opener I'm nocturnal but I stay on da prowl, Only way you can beat me is if your choke me wit ya unibrow, try of a punches didnt work And ya rhymes are stank and they smell like feces, Go back to your room, and play with Jim McGreavy, that was ok I'll leave this Slim Shady painstaked and limpin' The flow leave him shook and voiceless like Ashlee Simpson hummmmm ok i supose :-S And your rhymes are trash, litterally talk is cheap So drop da mic, go home and keep beatin' ya meat much better best line 6/10 herpoc verse Surely I Can Destroy Your Tainted Piece Ill Affect You Like I Was A Uncurable Dieasies bit of a personals there good Leave You Deacise After I Release My Lyrics Leave You Amazed Like You Was Tupacs Critics good all good Infections Threw Ya Brain With Ill Intentions Sure Enough To Teach You Couple Lessons thats was not the best but ok Nobody Pays Attention So You Not An Impression Leave You With A Anamasity Expression all good Cause You Lost This Rap Battle Session But This Shit Is Now Done No More Questions good 8/10 HV wins Vote switched |
Voted For: Tainted
Good Battle.... Tainted had better punches directed straight toward opponent. A nice flow to keep it going and some decent vocabulary. Nice use of celebs name; fit in nicely "I'll leave this Slim Shady painstaked and limpin' The flow leave him shook and voiceless like Ashlee Simpson" Heroic your rhyme was nice and your vocabulary was hot; but it did not seem directed toward tainted. Seemed more like a rhyme about what you are capable of. But nice vocab and use of the words. Vote goes to Tainted-nice punches |
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Uppin' for votes. Keep da feedback comin' people. Peace.
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Voted For: Tainted
hero basic punches and disses, although the structure and flow was there, but nothing complex or clever, just amateur stuff, keep practicin.. taint you had a lot of punches related to celebrities and shit, I guess that's ok.. this battle was close but I felt you took it by havin harder disses, even though they werent too complex or original. Please return the favor, check sig. |
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Upping FOr Votes Please Lol Lets Get This Battle DOne Real Quick
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Voted For: Tainted
YO THAT AIIGTH FIRST I THOUGHT IT WAS CLOSE BATTLE BUT NOW I DONT THINK SO |
Voted For: Heroic Verse
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a ok touch to TAINED's flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay(and cut off lines), Nice sructure to both verses, HEROIC had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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