Crossroads vs @.
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-06-04 at 11:41 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Expired battle win - close

@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 11:13 PM.

accept kid............................................

Crossroads has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 11:14 PM.

This bitch doesnt no which way to go.that's why he's crossroad's...
He pack's more fake processed beef than a wendy's boss load's.
im only one person....but i still lyrically surrond you.
im not sure what your ma said when she found you..
.............................but she shoulda just left you
or instead a calling you her son..shoulda said you the nefue..
you relise instead a battling me you shoulda just left ha??
this fag coulda fuck a hoe...if his name was hue hefna..
im Attacking audiciously..like whip-lash i leave ya with neck abrasion..
you cant pronounce my words ..when you try it cause's annihalition......

(nefue-brother or sister's son-I have bad spelling.)
.....
quick key....

takes 2 keys to make @...but this kid doesn't know
if brains a bomb...you couldn't even blow your nose
@'s a gay homo...his lines are all already all written
You looked intelligent.........until you started spittin'
kid couldn't spit.....even if The Council lies his claim
kid's living proof....that man can live without a brain
The cat's fucked....even snail mails delivers on joint
Accepting a battle..............is @'s only strong point
Fact is...this bitch probably barely had drop on time
The kid would lose to the system........who's on 0-1!

aight, upping for some vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Crossroads

croos roads got this one no doubt his verse was ill
good wordplay tight rhyming and flow
structre was tight
best line(even though it didnt rhyme)Fact is...this bitch probably barely had drop on time The kid would lose to the system........who's on 0-1!
@ first what the fucks up with ure name no hate just wonderin aight structre lacked metas and bad flow not very good rhyming
best line-im only one person....but i still lyrically surrond you.
im not sure what your ma said when she found you..

This was feedback posted for @.
 

just wanna see the feedback on this battle

uppin for more votes................................

Voted For: @.

aight fi-del got my vote on this battle....

cross-your structure woulda been screwed if ya didnt put all those periods in it.....and okay you had decent punches..verse was kinda basic but to the point which was good....no real vocab.....lines were short.....and your last 2 lines didnt rhyme at the end....your opener bar had some humer whuch was nice to see.but i think u coulda came a lil harder than u did.....
6/10

fi-aight u won cuz you came with harder punches..structure was off tho....but you had some humer in ur punches as well....good vocab i liked the audiciously word very creative.....came with more punches and multis than cross.....basically you came harder and better vocab and punches keep it real fam.....
8/10

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damn i forgot about this.Is any1 willing to vote?.

uppin............................................. .........sorry I haven't been upping this, I wasn't on for the last couple of weeks

Voted For: Crossroads

mmmm...... say that cross roads wins this!
punches goes straight to crossroads..........
if brains a bomb...you couldn't even blow your nose
^^^LOL
You looked intelligent.........until you started spittin'
^^^^LOL...but a little bit played
kid's living proof....that man can live without a brain
^^^^NICE!
The kid would lose to the system........who's on 0-1!
^^^^YEAH I LIKE THAT!

no personals..... but stilll kicks fi-del
fi-del..... mmm personals were ok but this shit here.....
im not sure what your ma said when she found you..
.............................but she shoulda just left you
or instead a calling you her son..shoulda said you the nefue..
^^^^thats just sad man....... dont like this type off shit you just said..... but i must admit it is kindof good but dont like it...

nuff said... vote crossroads.... return the favour k

Voted For: Crossroads

<<< BREAKDOWN >>>


Crossroads:

takes 2 keys to make @...but this kid doesn't know
if brains a bomb...you couldn't even blow your nose
Nope Not GOod
@'s a gay homo...his lines are all already all written
You looked intelligent.........until you started spittin'
LOl ok..
kid couldn't spit.....even if The Council lies his claim
kid's living proof....that man can live without a brain
LOL ok..
The cat's fucked....even snail mails delivers on joint
Accepting a battle..............is @'s only strong point
LOl ok
Fact is...this bitch probably barely had drop on time
The kid would lose to the system........who's on 0-1!
Alright good closer..


Your Verse Was Jam Packed Full of Disses to your oppenent, it was a really good battle verse.. It was lacking in punches and wordplay though.. if you get those 2 things along with your hard hitting disses, your text will be off the chain..


"fi-del" aka @:


This bitch doesnt no which way to go.that's why he's crossroad's...
He pack's more fake processed beef than a wendy's boss load's.
ok that was alright
im only one person....but i still lyrically surrond you.
im not sure what your ma said when she found you..
.............................but she shoulda just left you
or instead a calling you her son..shoulda said you the nefue..
wow, that was really terrible, multies were good, but the whole theme, and the way you put it down was terrible.. wow.. just bad..
you relise instead a battling me you shoulda just left ha??
this fag coulda fuck a hoe...if his name was hue hefna..
yea ok.. not good..
im Attacking audiciously..like whip-lash i leave ya with neck abrasion..
you cant pronounce my words ..when you try it cause's annihalition......
first line was good, second line was blah....

ok this just was not a good verse from you, no good punches or disses or anything.. just not a good verse.. sorry to say.. you really need to elevate.. up.. not down.. up...


<<< Kontent >>>

Punches: n/a
Personals: n/a
Flow: Crossroads
wordplay: n/a
disses: Crossroads
vokab: n/a
multies: n/a
internals: n/a
fav line: Crossroads.. kids living proof... that a man can live"
without a brain..
Enjoyment: Crossroads

if you were not in one of those catagories, work on it in your next battle..

You took this battle, lopsided as you can see.. good job..


please return the favor with a vote in my battle against 4fil.. link is in the sig.. THANKS !!!

Voted For: @.

nice drop man i voted for u cuz u had more orignal rhymes and ur punches hit harder crossroads didnt come hard with his punches and lacked some flow and vocabulary but made up for it and cam strong in thos areas but nice drop man keep em comin

vote in one of my open battles

uppin for more votes...........................................