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Macca 11-07-04 02:31 AM

Torch vs ~*Legend*~
 
Battle Rules:

8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-10-04 at 02:31 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 11-07-04 02:32 AM

~*Legend*~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 02:32 AM.

Macca 11-07-04 02:37 AM

You aint got the fortitude to get doesn't matter what it is torched
In battles you suck that’s why you your documentation scorched
You are supple as old grans ass and all your rhymes are forged
Fuck with me nigga you’ll get blistered and become even worst than ever
The only fixation that can set out the flame is your pants getting Wetter
As I fry you people see your black ass running and crying about
You suck so ghastly that your rhymes are starting to injure your snout
You never had em never will but a little ember of flame I just put out

System 11-07-04 03:47 AM

Torch has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 03:47 AM.

Torch 11-07-04 03:59 AM


Things needed for my verse:
all his shit talking took place in an open mic thread
Oreo/Epic - Jesus Walks (remix)
legend said he could merk me and said that this
site was his home


vs. ~*Legend*~
every verse that this kid drops always seems to resemble flights of stair cases
skills is less then those of paralysis victims paticipating in wheelchair races
ya must be involved with more crack then production companies of gay porn stars
who u fooling, prewrites that's why every battle ya in consist of around 4 bars
kid now what if an internet virus attacked rapverse, means it forcloses ya home
u defeat me, better odds of one of the seven dwarves dunking over moses malone
ya said that ya could merk me but i'm still waiting for someone to convince me
u suck boy, like bill clinton's term kids verse blows more then monica leuwinsky

Torch 11-07-04 04:01 AM

uppin for honest explained non d/r votes

Mc_BaD_bOy 11-07-04 04:15 AM

Voted For: Torch

torch-
had pucnhes came alright had stture like always:thumbup: copule of personals there nice verse man it was good had no speeling mistakes anufther good thins had pucnehs that hit n landed well nuttin hardly wrong with that verse i gotta say

~*Legend*~ -
had some pucnhes came ok had a try at a personal there but didnt quite make it still was good tho a few spelling mistakes there
Quote:
Originally Posted by ~*Legend*~
forged
dont no wot it was supose to say but the rest was good

overall-
overall i gotta say it was a ok battle both came good but torch came harder i gotta say with pucnhes n personals and stuckture he won dis wasnt 1 sided but torch won dis this is gonna be a close battle i gotta say but torch got my vote

v/torch

Macca 11-07-04 05:08 AM

What Ever Nigga Upping This Battle.

Implicit 11-07-04 05:10 AM

This was feedback posted for Torch
 
nice battle from both of u.......jus checkin the polls.......

Macca 11-07-04 05:20 AM

hey you got a crew. ^^^^

Implicit 11-07-04 05:26 AM

naw man..............................................

Macca 11-07-04 05:29 AM

cool. uhm tryout for thugz. uhm PM.

Torch 11-07-04 11:04 AM

uppin for honest explained non d/r votes

Torch 11-07-04 11:59 PM

uppin for honest explained non dr/ votes

Torch 11-08-04 02:26 PM

uppin for honest explained non d/r votes

Torch 11-08-04 06:48 PM

uppin for honest explained non d/r votes

streetryda 11-10-04 09:54 PM

This was feedback posted for ~*Legend*~
 
checkin polls....... you got this in my eyes legend

hipnoticz 11-24-04 06:44 AM

Voted For: ~*Legend*~

vote-Legend

he had better punchs flow was tight wordplay was good i think he had a better verse overall Torch i dont like tha way you pressent your shit its set out as a poem but its all good good battle

Macca 11-24-04 01:06 PM

upping this battle................................

blackwell 11-24-04 02:32 PM

Voted For: Torch

ite heres the breakdown
punches = torch
mettas= torch
personals= both
wordplay= legend even though both was wack
structure= torch..u got a nice structure there son

ok torches simply shines brighter^^, with better structure flow, n vocab. You had good structure, but thing is man ya punches were pretty wack, almost as desollute as his. Improve ya punches n wordplay all ya gotta do man.

ok well legend, there aint really much to say on your verse, except you gotta improve on everything overall. You are both at the same level wit ya game, but only reason i gave it to torch is because he came harder with his verse...ok peace hit me back

Zeke 11-24-04 08:35 PM

Voted For: Torch

Torch:His Flow Was Better Kid Came Harder.....Punches Was Targeting And Was Good....Vocab Was Decent And So Was Structure......Personals Was Hott......9/10

Legend:Good Vocabulary....Punches Was Alright....Personals Was Cool And Flow Altogether Was Decent.....8/10

This Was A Real Close Battle Both Came Hard Both Did They Thing

Vote-Torch

Macca 11-24-04 08:41 PM

now people a great example of an honest vote is that right there. upping.

Zeke 11-24-04 08:43 PM

P.S. Return The Favor And Drop An Honest Vote Me[4]VsKwell[2] Peace Cozz

E_Zilla ™ 11-24-04 08:49 PM

Voted For: Torch

Vote - Torch ..

Cause it was it had better punches .. and it had more effort in to it


return the favor and HONEST votes

Also Known. 11-27-04 06:29 PM

Voted For: Torch

easy win better punches better overall i like the dunking midget line, legend two words "you suck" that sums up your verse


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