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..kontroverzey.. vs verbal abuse
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Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 04:35 PM.
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..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 04:41 PM.
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Kontroversey:
took me a couple days to sit down and do this. didnt prewrite, i had to think of 10 ways to explain useless. ya couldnt get ppl to hate ya topic if you were a long commerical. since ya words target the verb, i guess ya recs the only thing controvercial. i spit ya like sunflower seeds, n chew your internal. ma discharge will hit ya fist hard. like knuckles to urnal. your as african american as regis filman is mangerin. listen duke, my punches will give ya more attention than a manikin. matched ya mug & ya current expression to form an identical corpse. get ya perscription quicker than auction, or youll end up with more precautions... ...than genital warts. |
i dont feel like spittin but i guess i will......
[font size=1]Comin at "K", you couldn't "clean-up shop" if you put "2 K's" at the end and wore a "napkin on ya head".... My Pencil's missin the ink, That's what she meant by "Fire'in the Lead"... Get off the keyboard, Your mouth smells like cum, cause Gurl "you suck"... Armed attacking on horses, get a horse shoe up the ass, but it aint for good luck.... She dropped before me, but reality wise, thats the only time you spittin ahead-a-me... 'cause me losing to an Anerexic, paraplegic, Foreigner, is something you'll ne-va see.... It's wednesday. and by tomorrow if your still alive, you need an award... First crippled Bitch, to survive Kontro's Intellectual, "wards" (words).... Mayn fuck it, imma end it wack, Something like VA always does.... Shes facin the fact, Im hot, tried bitin my lines but she forgot her oven gloves...[/size] |
Comin at "K", you couldn't "clean-up shop" if you put "2 K's" at the end and wore a "napkin on ya head".... My Pencil's missin the ink, That's what she meant by "Fire'in the Lead"... Get off the keyboard, Your mouth smells like cum, cause Gurl "you suck"... Armed attacking on horses, get a horse shoe up the ass, but it aint for good luck.... She dropped before me, but reality wise, thats the only time you spittin ahead-a-me... 'cause me losing to an Anerexic, paraplegic, Foreigner, is something you'll ne-va see.... It's wednesday. and by tomorrow if your still alive, you need an award... First crippled Bitch, to survive Kontro's Intellectual, "wards" (words).... Mayn fuck it, imma end it wack, Something like VA always does.... Shes facin the fact, Im hot, tried bitin my lines but she forgot her oven gloves |
Comin at "K", you couldn't "clean-up shop" if you put "2 K's" at the end and wore a "napkin on ya head"....
My Pencil's missin the ink, That's what she meant by "Fire'in the Lead"... Get off the keyboard, Your mouth smells like cum, cause Gurl "you suck"... Armed attacking on horses, get a horse shoe up the ass, but it aint for good luck.... She dropped before me, but reality wise, thats the only time you spittin ahead-a-me... 'cause me losing to an Anerexic, paraplegic, Foreigner, is something you'll ne-va see.... It's wednesday. and by tomorrow if your still alive, you need an award... First crippled Bitch, to survive Kontro's Intellectual, "wards" (words).... Mayn fuck it, imma end it wack, Something like VA always does.... Shes facin the fact, Im hot, tried bitin my lines but she forgot her oven gloves.. |
Voted For: ..kontroverzey..
took me a couple days to sit down and do this. didnt prewrite, i had to think of 10 ways to explain useless. kinda weak opener... good idea but the wording fucked it up... definitely shoulda been more potent ya couldnt get ppl to hate ya topic if you were a long commerical. since ya words target the verb, i guess ya recs the only thing controvercial. no connection here.... setup never led to the punch... seemed stretched and a little forced also i spit ya like sunflower seeds, n chew your internal. ma discharge will hit ya fist hard. like knuckles to urnal. the set up was hard as hell.... and then ya finished off kinda weak... like knuckles to urnal?... what's an urnal? your as african american as regis filman is mangerin. listen duke, my punches will give ya more attention than a manikin. weak... self explanitory matched ya mug & ya current expression to form an identical corpse. get ya perscription quicker than auction, or youll end up with more precautions... ...than genital warts. woulda been a lot better if the last line wasn't stretched all to hell... this time the set up was weak and the finishing line was the good one too much inconsistancy in ya verse... you're much better at the poetry stuff than at text battles... just my opinion 6/10 Comin at "K", you couldn't "clean-up shop" if you put "2 K's" at the end and wore a "napkin on ya head".... My Pencil's missin the ink, That's what she meant by "Fire'in the Lead"... funny... but the first line was pretty stretched... firing the lead...lol...good shyt...original Get off the keyboard, Your mouth smells like cum, cause Gurl "you suck"... Armed attacking on horses, get a horse shoe up the ass, but it aint for good luck.... didn't like the set-up too much but the punch was on point... points lost on a soft set-up She dropped before me, but reality wise, thats the only time you spittin ahead-a-me... 'cause me losing to an Anerexic, paraplegic, Foreigner, is something you'll ne-va see.... nicest line overall thus far... good set-up ... decent punch.. not the best but definitely the best so far in this battle It's wednesday. and by tomorrow if your still alive, you need an award... First crippled Bitch, to survive Kontro's Intellectual, "wards" (words).... ehhh... not really feeling this bar at all... no real punch and plus ya basically used the same word to rhyme... all ya did was drop the "A" Mayn fuck it, imma end it wack, Something like VA always does.... Shes facin the fact, Im hot, tried bitin my lines but she forgot her oven gloves lol...closer was kinda funny... set up was just like ya said it would be but the finishing line kinda made up for it.... 7.9/10 I've seen both of you with better drops than this... shyt... verbal had a better spit than this going against me in the diss the person thread! (that's cuz i was a motivational force as well as her target...lol)but yeah... i gotta give it up to Kon for a better overall verse. punches were set up better and hit harder... do what y'all do, though...one |
god, that was a hate vote. i have facts.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Vote:Verbal Abuse... this was a bad battle... both came weak.. i know kontro can spit better than that.. but his structure was all fucked.. neither flowed at all.. neither had decent punches.. but if i had to pick a winner its gonna be verbal her punches hit a little harder.. and hers was much easier to read.. so no hate to either just an honest vote... |
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This was feedback posted for ..kontroverzey..
This was horribly wack. You seem to have gotten worse.
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i obvi aint tryin...didnt i tell you i retired..........
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..
kontroversy took this battle because he had the better punches that hit harder and were more creative. VA's flow as aight but it could have been better. Both had good structure n a mediocre attempt at personals. good on both sides tho holla at ya boy |
Voted For: ..kontroverzey..
took me a couple days to sit down and do this. didnt prewrite, i had to think of 10 ways to explain useless. 2/10 ya couldnt get ppl to hate ya topic if you were a long commerical. since ya words target the verb, i guess ya recs the only thing controvercial. 4/10 i spit ya like sunflower seeds, n chew your internal. ma discharge will hit ya fist hard. like knuckles to urnal. 6/10...nice punch your as african american as regis filman is mangerin. listen duke, my punches will give ya more attention than a manikin. 4/10 matched ya mug & ya current expression to form an identical corpse. get ya perscription quicker than auction, or youll end up with more precautions... ...than genital warts. 4/10 i exspected alot more from u Va u had some nice punches ok wordplay ya structure was bout the best thing here Comin at "K", you couldn't "clean-up shop" if you put "2 K's" at the end and wore a "napkin on ya head".... My Pencil's missin the ink, That's what she meant by "Fire'in the Lead"... 6/10 Get off the keyboard, Your mouth smells like cum, cause Gurl "you suck"... Armed attacking on horses, get a horse shoe up the ass, but it aint for good luck.... 5/10 She dropped before me, but reality wise, thats the only time you spittin ahead-a-me... 'cause me losing to an Anerexic, paraplegic, Foreigner, is something you'll ne-va see.... 5/10 It's wednesday. and by tomorrow if your still alive, you need an award... First crippled Bitch, to survive Kontro's Intellectual, "wards" (words).... 5/10 Mayn fuck it, imma end it wack, Something like VA always does.... Shes facin the fact, Im hot, tried bitin my lines but she forgot her oven gloves 6/10 ok punches nuthin extrodinary exspected alot more similies were good personals were ok good wordplay good punches overall vote Kontro |
This was feedback posted for ..kontroverzey..
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prove it... besides, i've checked some of your other battles and voted for you... i have facts... if you come weak i'm gonna say ya came weak... if ya come with heat i'm gonna say ya came with heat... fact is.. this verse wasn't good... you've done better... again, i have facts... stop making excuses... mods should set the example... not act like noobs (no dis toward noobs cuz even some of them can accept the fact that the other person could've dropped a better verse)... just cuz you don't like me and shyt, which i could care less about, doesn't make me biased against a skilled verse... face it, you're better at topicals than you are at text battling... ask anyone... that should be enough proof for you since nothing i say is ever good enough for you |
Voted For: ..kontroverzey..
Aiight look. Both came not bad actually. Damn, when I read that first bar of VA's verse I was like naaah this is all over.. But as I kept reading I sort of felt the disses fell off a bit.. Killah.Bwoy.. Your shit was not bad bro.. Some punches I liked and others were jus good. Know what I mean? The reason I think you took this battle was largly due to consistancy, VA's best bar was her first and it proceedingly got less hard hitting from there IMO.. Where as yours kept at a constant level.. Flow was there on both, both kinda lacked in personals, vocab was about the same.. Pretty good battle but being honest I think kontro has to get this win. Peace. |
This was feedback posted for ..kontroverzey..
checkiun this shit out........................
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..
I think that Killah.Bwoy got this battle because i feel that Killah.Bwoy came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Killah.Bwoy got it they were used effectifely and were on point Verbal Abuse u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Killah.Bwoy good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Killah.Bwoy and flow and structure i'll give to Killah.Bwoy. V/Killah.Bwoy |
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