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intensify effect vs ...Xclusive...
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8-12 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Crew battle Between Da Rip vs. Violent Type Text Battle: Due Thursday no matter who dotn check in Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-12-04 at 12:50 AM Must drop verse in 5000 minutes after check in. |
k im gonna check in then write tonight maybe peace...HOE
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...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-08-04 01:41 PM.
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you fuckin whore accept...........................
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IE you fuckin hoe.................................
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 11:41 AM.
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You make me “laugh” the way you freepost and just get ignored…
Its “funny” how u think your tough like the trucks made by Henry Ford… Shit you crack me up with ur wack ability’s, damn u try to “hard”… Even when ur “forcing” a fatty to come out ur still a piece of lard… 21 years old still on a “rap-site” u sicken me and still in violent type… I couldn’t “vision” u “spin” on a table cuz ur shit aint fresh and ripe… Why don’t u leave a little to “old” and u still cant pack a punch… Violent type the “youngest” crew and still an annoying bunch… |
FUCK THAT...
just add the win for V.T... here is ya Tomb-Stone.... xclusive, Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy... blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me... SON-Me?.. Never when u'r fake-style easy to spot like dots on lepord... X Desperit to show off... so he add hes Street battles to hes N.E.T Record... *haha* and it's aint "timberland designe"... when i send "Lead-throu-He's-Red-Shirt"... so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher".... so better off battleing me during my first audio interludes.... cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls.... *menstrual=period* now X just go R.I.P... cuz im a Violent Type that just plated this crew like a flouris... cuz Competition for me doesnt Exist like a Weed-a-soares.... U JUST BEEN OWNED.... I TOLD U, THAT U WASNT FUCKING WITH ME... BANG-BANG-EARLY.... V.T to the TOP... *explation of the last bar... a make believe dinosaur pronounciation..* |
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just fixing a few erra's... |
Voted For: intensify effect
pick got this one to me wit harder punches...his shit was more creative, and his opener to his closer stayed on point. he was more consistent. his rhyming patterns was better than clusive's was... xclusive had a nice verse, but it wasnt a harder drop than picks...he had some hard punches in there, but didnt land harder than picks...ur rhyming was just behind pick's...in this battle, u was in tha shadow of pick's... overall-close battle, but only one winner could take the vote...pick got it to me... return honest votes... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160132 |
^who is pick?...................but w/e nothing to me...
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upp'in for more votes........
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This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
lol....keep tryin buddy...VT here and we runnin this bitch
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Voted For: intensify effect
vote IE.. best verse i have ever seen from you.. nice punches.. good personals.. overall good verse.. Xclusive ur overrated.. ur record is way better than you are.. you need to drop more impressive than that... but IE takes this.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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thankyou...bout time someone told that lil bitch...prolly made up that record....you h appy now X...you aint that good....2-0 baby....lets go |
Voted For: intensify effect
You make me “laugh” the way you freepost and just get ignored… Its “funny” how u think your tough like the trucks made by Henry Ford… ^^^^weak opener... Shit you crack me up with ur wack ability’s, damn u try to “hard”… Even when ur “forcing” a fatty to come out ur still a piece of lard… ^^^DRY! 21 years old still on a “rap-site” u sicken me and still in violent type… I couldn’t “vision” u “spin” on a table cuz ur shit aint fresh and ripe… ^^^mmm, pretty average... Why don’t u leave a little to “old” and u still cant pack a punch… Violent type the “youngest” crew and still an annoying bunch… weak closer xclusive!! “laugh” “funny" “old” “youngest” is that what you call wordplay??? cause thats just fucked up ok! bars were really strectched so pretty wack flow and structure wasnt that great... punches pretty soft, no real good ideas newhere... you need to be more creative Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy... blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me... ^^^lol... a bit violent but that last line was nice SON-Me?.. Never when u'r fake-style easy to spot like dots on lepord... X Desperit to show off... so he add hes Street battles to hes N.E.T Record... ^^^ mmm dont really like it but not bad and it's aint "timberland designe"... when i send "Lead-throu-He's-Red-Shirt"... so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher".... ^^^lol, good idea but needed better xecution so better off battleing me during my first audio interludes.... cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls.... ^^^^ dont like it now X just go R.I.P... cuz im a Violent Type that just plated this crew like a flouris... cuz Competition for me doesnt Exist like a Weed-a-soares.... ^^^^ dry..... wack.... wtf so funny i forgot to laugh! ie. lines also a bit strectched... i like your opener though... just that line could have merked xclusive return the favour ok... laters! |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
.................................................. ........MERKED.......word.........da truth has spoken
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^and thats word...IE you dick ryder...............
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^^ why u hate'in N already deleting votes??
haha now whos bitching about what?? u got SONNED TAKE IT LIKE A MAN... upp'in this battle to end this fool already.... |
^man unexplained you think your good d/ring your nothing but a coward...
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^^ shut up N stop talking while u'r currently getting WHORED V.T STYLE......
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Voted For: intensify effect
Won by mile...punches, word play was otrocious on intesity... "blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me..." "so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher"...." "cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls.... *menstrual=period*" These rymes aren't for a guy whos 28 an 27...i see people who have way better records an dont rymes half as good...there must be some serious dick riding going on or you just elevated.... All lines hit hard No Mercy:::i didnt understand ya lines...you had some personals but they were too basic... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
I.E got fucking licked big style!
How does that feel?? shit il never have to sweat about battling you, that'll be fun! |
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STOP FREE-POSTIN in here... WHAT A HOMO THING TO SAY... I GOT LICKED!!!!!!!!! WTF IS THAT???? stop free-post'in in here or i will have u BANND.... |
stop d/ring IE you dick head............................
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Hahahahahaha.....this bitch cryin already
tryna beat VT but a chance you'll never have, Cuz IE's driving you crazy like the man in ur av, Biatch..... Gettin murked VT style |
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hahaha tell him MEN-IZ...... fuck'in herb.... tech its 4-0 but its 3-0 upp'in this joint to end already.... N i just wanna say something real quick about this battle: U about to get KNOCK'ED DA FUCK OUT..... :shoot: :help: :laugh2: |
Voted For: intensify effect
v/IE he gets my vote cause he had harder punchs an multi's he came harder to me .....two by four u were good but didn't come as hard... (Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy... blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me...) i liked this line..it was prettty tight..... |
Voted For: intensify effect
Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy... blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me... oo shit that was ill and raw just what i like and it's aint "timberland designe"... when i send "Lead-throu-He's-Red-Shirt"... so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher".... oo that shit was nasty as fuck hot bar so better off battleing me during my first audio interludes.... cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls that was aight and the last bar was dumb and weak weed-a-soares?? talk about trying to hard to get original You make me “laugh” the way you freepost and just get ignored… Its “funny” how u think your tough like the trucks made by Henry Ford… henery ford WTF weak as fuck 21 years old still on a “rap-site” u sicken me and still in violent type… I couldn’t “vision” u “spin” on a table cuz ur shit aint fresh and ripe… last line was dumb and weak and the rest of ya verse got even weaker so i wont go on with this vote |
Voted For: intensify effect
intensify just came harder....even though we in rival crews my vote goes to him...i give em his props...ive seen xclusive do better..wut happened...x just didnt have good punches..ie had better punches wordplay and personals...x had better flow but thats about all...this goes to intensify effect(no love OR hate)........ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: intensify effect
riiiight punches- Effect overall harder hitttin and more personals- Effect decent personals multis- Effect u had em metas- Effect ok metas humor- Effect lol u had me laughin at ya shit (good laughin) flow- Effect just went together structure- Block of Wood easier to look at word play- Effect definately wittier Effect decent drop. good punches and personals. just keep on elevatin bro. Block of wood um ya u need to work on punches, and try better personals. No Hate Just An Honest Voter. v/intensify effect pz |
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