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Lightweight Championship: Sdizzle .vs. Kontroverzey
^4 votes...and maybe youll be as ill as him^
Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Tuesday By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern |
chizeckin in.....good luck sdizzle
link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159517 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159515 |
yup
lets here sum punches about how im fat.... or how i was screwed out of my title... or how i still rep being the heavyweight champion... cuz we all know those type of punches wouldn't be predictable |
a loss is in your future, but dont get upset man
creative? fuck no... i predicted every one of his punches in my fucking check in now sadly i must beat you & badly i must add a winner?.. he's got the knicks in his avy & thats just bad kids on my dick, so its easy to see im bound that of course i cause trouble... cuz kontroversy always seems to follow me around kid gets pissed on more than the floors at a mcdonalds bathroom ewwww and then he..... tried to earn his stripes & ended up looking like a racoon ur punches, if you want to call them that are so old and behind bu ill get u the vet book on.... "how to quit putting quotes to emphsize a punch because i cant construct a decent one so people wont notice how wack i am" .... followed up by "how not to bold and use funny signs" |
First Line, I thought i'd Spit some personals Against him,
......But he did it himself... Like Short Wrestlers Competing in Ladder Matches, .....Your missin' the belt... This Kid has Low Confidence, So if Sdizzle Wins, ....i'ts because people feel sorry... Your Just a minor attraction in the past, that turned into ass, .......Like Atari... "S-dizzle"? You and Snoop Dogg have reverse complications, ....Your diagnosed with a "Diet" Disorder... The Only attractin Line you ever been through, ......Was crossing the American Boarder.. If you refuse to believe Im hot, then, .....stop using My lines as a Furnace.... Bottom Lines, Swing for your ankles, like freeposts in battles, .......I'm "de-feeting" "the Purpose".... I stay in a Godly Position, So making it to heaven, ......you gotta get through me first... (impossible) You couldn't "bone shit" even if you jumped off your roof, .....and Landed Knee first... uh huh..... and if you dont undestand the american board line........shame on you |
I think that ..kontroverzey.. got this battle because i feel that ..kontroverzey.. came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt ..kontroverzey.. got it they were used effectifely and were on point Sdizzle u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to ..kontroverzey.. good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to ..kontroverzey.. and flow and structure i'll give to ..kontroverzey...
V/..kontroverzey.. There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly |
alright this is how I see it ...
kont wins sdizzle show me a decent or witty punch in this bunch of lines, your dumb if you think their are any... now sadly i must beat you & badly i must add a winner?.. he's got the knicks in his avy & thats just bad kids on my dick, so its easy to see im bound that of course i cause trouble... cuz kontroversy always seems to follow me around kid gets pissed on more than the floors at a mcdonalds bathroom ewwww and then he..... tried to earn his stripes & ended up looking like a racoon ur punches, if you want to call them that are so old and behind I mean the flow was a bit better then kont's but nothing else was even good at all, in comparison to your ussual verses especially. especially that racoon shit, that was played by herbs... I mean you obviously didn't take enough time on this Konts first bar made me laugh, and his verse was especially good becaues he didn't talk about how fat and all those played jokes... vote KONT fuck you gangstar, linking is like cheating in my mind, I guess we know how you got your 12 wins!...vote you two I guarantee two educated peopel like yourselves will how crappy and prewritten his verse is |
a loss is in your future, but dont get upset man
creative? fuck no... i predicted every one of his punches in my fucking check in true now sadly i must beat you & badly i must add a winner?.. he's got the knicks in his avy & thats just bad nah kids on my dick, so its easy to see im bound that of course i cause trouble... cuz kontroversy always seems to follow me around lol kid gets pissed on more than the floors at a mcdonalds bathroom ewwww and then he..... tried to earn his stripes & ended up looking like a racoon dizzle? ur punches, if you want to call them that are so old and behind bu ill get u the vet book on.... "how to quit putting quotes to emphsize a punch because i cant construct a decent one so people wont notice how wack i am" .... followed up by "how not to bold and use funny signs" wtf? First Line, I thought i'd Spit some personals Against him, ......But he did it himself... Like Short Wrestlers Competing in Ladder Matches, .....Your missin' the belt... nah This Kid has Low Confidence, So if Sdizzle Wins, ....i'ts because people feel sorry... Your Just a minor attraction in the past, that turned into ass, .......Like Atari... decent "S-dizzle"? You and Snoop Dogg have reverse complications, ....Your diagnosed with a "Diet" Disorder... The Only attractin Line you ever been through, ......Was crossing the American Boarder.. nope If you refuse to believe Im hot, then, .....stop using My lines as a Furnace.... Bottom Lines, Swing for your ankles, like freeposts in battles, .......I'm "de-feeting" "the Purpose".... OMG I stay in a Godly Position, So making it to heaven, ......you gotta get through me first... (impossible) You couldn't "bone shit" even if you jumped off your roof, .....and Landed Knee first... no way uh huh..... and if you dont undestand the american board line........shame on you shame on you for writing it Vote Sdizzle |
this one goes to kontroversy no doubt, he came stronger in punches, flow, and wordplay. sdizzle i think you came into this on some eightmile shit trying to say all his personals before he kicked them, it backfired.
vote- kontroversy |
I'm sorry, but I have no fucking idea of what you people are looking at. As sad as it is to say, dizzle raped him in every catagory. I hated both styles of writing, but dizzles was the least iratating. Dizzle had the wittier punches, plus Kontroversey used a de-feet line......WAAAAYYYY Played! Anyway, this vote probably won't count, but next week I'll be in the league, so all of you riding ass bitches better beware....
Vote - Dizzle for shizzle :thumbup: |
Kontro straight got this, not sure whether I'm eligible to vote, but i was in this contest.
His punhes were better in my opinion definetly, and his wordplay was dopeness, He got this one easy. |
alright that is enough beef if i see more of this in this thread i will dq you from your battle and you will be gone for a week
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this was a pretty good battle and i would say sdizzles opener was the hottest bar in this battle and i have to agree with enygma about the defeat lines those are the most played in the history of internet rap... and you should know that kontro... anyways i think sdizzles was more consistent kontro kinda skipped around his flow wasnt solid it wasnt horrible either though... id have to say punches were pretty equal and kontro got the personals but sdizzle predicted what his personals would be so that made sdizzles verse that much doper hes got my respect now
vote/ sdizzle |
nah man its coo it wasnt really directed towards you it was just ingeneral yours wasnt really beef becuase you had the links and shit... but do what you gotta do
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a loss is in your future, but dont get upset man
creative? fuck no... i predicted every one of his punches in my fucking check in ^^^^^ Clever... he's got the knicks in his avy & thats just bad kids on my dick, so its easy to see im bound that of course i cause trouble... cuz kontroversy always seems to follow me around ^^^ No...elementary booooooooooooooooooooooo "how to quit putting quotes to emphsize a punch because i cant construct a decent one so people wont notice how wack i am" .... followed up by "how not to bold and use funny signs" ^^ This does not flow well...it just sound, or "reads" like you're talking...I got quite uninterested in your verse by this point. That's a shame because it started off nicely. 14/20 First Line, I thought i'd Spit some personals Against him, ......But he did it himself... Like Short Wrestlers Competing in Ladder Matches, .....Your missin' the belt... ^^FLow is nice...creative punch, though not hard hitting "S-dizzle"? You and Snoop Dogg have reverse complications, ....Your diagnosed with a "Diet" Disorder... The Only attractin Line you ever been through, ......Was crossing the American Boarder.. ^^Not sure the diet connection was made...but ur flow is killin S dizzle I stay in a Godly Position, So making it to heaven, ......you gotta get through me first... (impossible) You couldn't "bone shit" even if you jumped off your roof, .....and Landed Knee first... ^^^^^Decent closer Vote: Kontro: Way better flow (which I'm a fan of), more complex set ups to pinches, and more dynamice rhyming Vote: KON PERIOD. |
V/ Dizzle
Kon came to weak in my opinion...dizzle came weak as well but harder punch wise and complexity as well...kon had played punches for example the de feat one... i mean common now that shit it played to bits therefore dizzle wins for a better more wittier verse =\... |
Shut up you herb.
Dont Sway. :-Arch |
punches-kontro edged it
multies-kontro (they were forced though) wordplay-kontro personals-none creativity-kontro(other kat had none watsoever) flow-dizzle metaz-none vote-kontro..... he took this one easily.......harder hitting punches....more creativity .....more multies......good wordplay and less forced lines over all.......... |
you cant force a multi lol.............
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yea u can^.....
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i dont have anything against you...i think you lost thats all...plus dizzle hates me and yet i still voted for him..why? cause he won and had a better verse...i could care less if you dont like me or dizzle dont like me, i voted fairly and just want my 4 links... pz |
no but you alwayz say i lost..even though i win every battle you voted against..
but its all good |
but ur lines sucked....
lol @ a defeated line lol @ feeding off my verse & this battle not being closed yet |
lol @ this kid crying
lol @ your structr LOL @ you for not forfitting yet |
lol @ u cheating...
2 weeks in a row i swear these newbs enjoy cheating |
ok sdizzle got this loved his had good wordplay and metas and all that outher stuff son and konterorsy you got served with the sun
V/sdizzle |
im gonna vote but not sure if i can but oo-well....
a loss is in your future, but dont get upset man creative? fuck no... i predicted every one of his punches in my fucking check in ok start... now sadly i must beat you & badly i must add a winner?.. he's got the knicks in his avy & thats just bad weak.. kids on my dick, so its easy to see im bound that of course i cause trouble... cuz kontroversy always seems to follow me around decent diss... kid gets pissed on more than the floors at a mcdonalds bathroom ewwww and then he..... tried to earn his stripes & ended up looking like a racoon ok... ur punches, if you want to call them that are so old and behind bu ill get u the vet book on.... "how to quit putting quotes to emphsize a punch because i cant construct a decent one so people wont notice how wack i am" .... followed up by "how not to bold and use funny signs" this shit was the weakest ending i ever saw and streched like a mother fucker... all around decent verse 7.0 First Line, I thought i'd Spit some personals Against him, ......But he did it himself... Like Short Wrestlers Competing in Ladder Matches, .....Your missin' the belt... ok opener... This Kid has Low Confidence, So if Sdizzle Wins, ....i'ts because people feel sorry... Your Just a minor attraction in the past, that turned into ass, .......Like Atari... decent.. "S-dizzle"? You and Snoop Dogg have reverse complications, ....Your diagnosed with a "Diet" Disorder... The Only attractin Line you ever been through, ......Was crossing the American Boarder.. decent... If you refuse to believe Im hot, then, .....stop using My lines as a Furnace.... Bottom Lines, Swing for your ankles, like freeposts in battles, .......I'm "de-feeting" "the Purpose".... nice... I stay in a Godly Position, So making it to heaven, ......you gotta get through me first... (impossible) You couldn't "bone shit" even if you jumped off your roof, .....and Landed Knee first... ending could of been better but i thought u had the better verse either way hard punches N diss... 8.0 outta 10 vote well read up-top N u should guess who i voted for... |
Sdizzle Wins By DQ.
Kontroverzey You were warned By a Moderator to stop the beef. But you wouldn't So after you swayed 4 times you have been DQ'd. Bitch if you want but you lost. Congratulations Sdizzle. Pz. |
NO arch i said for everyone to stop beefing so there for if you dq kon you would have to dq everyone that has been beefing in this thread and one would be efusive and im not going to dq him considering he is my oponent.... KON is un-dq'd
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uppin this.............
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wtf @ newpost cheating me every fucking week
u cant change something cuz it affects ur match |
Read my post he is also DQ'd for Swaying 4 times.
Re-Closed Newport do not re-open this. Pz. |
arch i do no see the swaying 4 times... if you really want to battle me on this i will have no problem with battling you on it
i only saw 2 of his things... so there for this is staying open kid... stop fucking wit me and dizzle you won this battle you had the better punches and everything so i give this vote to you v/dizzle Re-opened kids need they links so this stays open idiot |
but i automatically get the win right?.... yea, ill drop my links in
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Good way to mod challenging another mod. Seiously you want to sort this go to the Mod thread or pm me. you can only see 2 sways? i edited 1 out and 3 are still there. Pz. |
LMFAO...
kontroversy was horrible. Where the fuck was your rhymescheme? How do you have a winning record like that? dizzle came wack too, but one purely becuz he had a good rhyme scheme. Weak. Vote: sdizzle |
umm no you dont automatically win...lets do this..UPPIN
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sdizzle:
iight k both of you had a weird stucture but good punches from sdizzle... could of been better but thats how it goes they just werent as good as kontros... not realy anyway good vocabulary... some pretty good multis not to many but a few... meh...pretty much came just weaker then kontroverzey i think.... 8.6/10 Kontroverzey: good verse tight punchlines came hot... stucuture is a lil weird like sdizzles to... vocabulary pretty good nothing to great but not bad... multis came pretty tight and all in this you had more then sdizzle to pretty good verse i give yours a...: 9.1/10 no hate both yall my fam... vote: Kontroverzey.. |
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yes it was alreay said i won so shut the fuck up kid... u cheat u lose the story of life |
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