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JPoll 11-09-04 10:40 AM

JPoll vs GangsStarShit
 
Battle Rules:

5bars
no rap arounds
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 11-12-04 at 10:40 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

System 11-09-04 10:45 AM

GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 10:45 AM.

GangsStarShit 11-09-04 10:52 AM

*So called vets need teaching occasionally*

JPoll...ur skills an illusion that cause mass confusion,
It's a fusion of wack and the words u lack so quittins 1 solution,

Raps need skill...you stink...somethin u'll never grasp,
So u say more than 1 wack word it still don't mean u multi-task,

May i ask why ur multies are ass and ya wordplay looks like crap?,
Jus face it u couldn't spit 2 hours of freshness if ya name was tic-tac,

Ya shit slacks like lax* ya audios at best disgraceful so why bother,
So it's gettin warmer in Canada...don't mean u gonn get hotter,

Ya overrated wit a style thats outdated face it u faded go to ya wife,
Coz right where this ends is where you start...to suck at life,

*JPoll grabs the mic but gets 1st degree burns*


*lax as in laxative

System 11-09-04 11:04 AM

JPoll has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 11:04 AM.

JPoll 11-09-04 11:12 AM

heres a quick ten for you trick
You're a gangstar fan? well learn how to fucking spell...
You like dickriding the wackness of interscope...
...................................trust me its real hard to tell...
Even with your signature you can tell of your herbocity...
Am I the best, yes, and your rv's benzino?
..............................likely hood is more then possibly...
Your wack face it before you answer to any more posts...
You should go the www.playedverses.com instead of rv...
...........because I hear they have your fave icp as hosts...
All i have to say is he free'd his verse in 6 minutes...
Thats laughable because this whole site knew I won..
.....................................before he even finished...
Shouldn't have answered my call out with stupidity...
But I guess thats what 'Bush 4 life voters'...
...........................will think for the rest of infinity....

JPoll 11-09-04 11:14 AM

don't ever fucking take my sayings you wack prewritting herb!...too bad you just lost horribly

Know-Gimix 11-09-04 11:19 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

This was decent here... Jpolls verse was harder to get into cuz of the way everything is structured... but It was pretty decent, I really was only feelin 1 bar that I felt was real clever... GangStarShit, ur verse was alot easier to get into with the normal structure... you had alot more flow to ur verse, and I really liked a couple bars in there, so Im givin this to You... Vote GangstarShit.

JPoll 11-09-04 11:21 AM

I'm surpirsed at you seven...haha...anyways....what you guess talking on aim right now?

GangsStarShit 11-09-04 11:28 AM

Don't you hate sore losers?.......................

JPoll 11-09-04 11:31 AM

haha, don't you hate biters?

i do

that vote will be cancelled anyways

GangsStarShit 11-09-04 11:35 AM

What i bite...oh a phrase that every man woman and child has said at least once in their lives...once you get "You Suck At Life" Copyrighted, then u can call me a biter...until then...shut up and let the votes decide...!

Know-Gimix 11-09-04 11:35 AM

what I do? lol... damn this is why I dont vote on shit no more, cuz when i do kids get upset... it was an honest vote if it matters to you-- it aint like I hate you son and just came in to vote against you.

JPoll 11-09-04 11:39 AM

yeah well his was obviously prewritten punchless garbage, its like you don't get anything, you don't vote against someone because of structure when you said I came harder...wtf is that....anyways...I'm not talking about that line gangsstar...Do you want to be banned?
I have this little thing called verse search, you type in a bar and it looks up matches, found two...

GangsStarShit 11-09-04 11:44 AM

One Thing...i don't bite...if ur lil "Verse Search" found 2 matches please show me i'm curious....and also while we're at it...i also don't pre-write...that was done in the space of hmm bout 10 minutes...because when i replyed to ur 1st callout i started...didn't do no lil peep in my rhyme book...and if this is the way u obtain wins...then damn...u really do suck...

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Now shut up and lets get on wit the votes

Know-Gimix 11-09-04 11:48 AM

I never said you came harder... if you were reffering to me...


Raps need skill...you stink...somethin u'll never grasp,
So u say more than 1 wack word it still don't mean u multi-task,
funny ass bar... tell me theres no punch there-- second line hits hard.

Ya shit slacks like lax* ya audios at best disgraceful so why bother,
So it's gettin warmer in Canada...don't mean u gonn get hotter,
the slacks like lax was dookie-- but rest of bar was nice... personal diss on first line, funny little punch second line...
Ya overrated wit a style thats outdated face it u faded go to ya wife,
Coz right where this ends is where you start...to suck at life,
I found that shit funny as hell- very well researched personal, good humor... my fav 3 bars from GangStarShit....

I said ur structure fucked up readin it for me, cuz it did- by usin that structure I think your lines went on forever so I couldn't get super comfortable--- my favorite bar from you...

All i have to say is he free'd his verse in 6 minutes...
Thats laughable because this whole site knew I won..
.....................................before he even finished...

It was funny-- decent punch, in this bar I think your structure aided in the delivery, but in other bars From the same verse ur shit seems stretched out and that matters alot to me... need an example???....

Your wack face it before you answer to any more posts...
You should go the www.playedverses.com instead of rv...
...........because I hear they have your fave icp as hosts...
say that shit to a beat and actually match it--- it aint happenin... www.playedverses.com is like 15 syllables on its own.... sorry if My shit wasn't explained enough but shit I thought you knew me.

JPoll 11-09-04 03:36 PM

alright alright, sorry I was at school and in a hella bad mood, I still know I won, thanks for your opinion though

Red Stroke 11-09-04 10:08 PM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

Gangstar:
Explanation:
Vocabulary Was Better Both Yall Had Good Vocabulary But Gangstar's Was NicerStruture Was On Gangstar I Wasnt Feeling JPoll's Structure With All Tha "........." And Them Flow Was Both Yall Good Lines Punches Was Both Cool

JPoll:
Good Verse Fam Ya Lines Was Good Along With Your Vocabualry And Ya Pun> Was Cool Too Ahhhh.................. Wasnt Quite Feeling Ya Structure And All But Other Then That It Was All Cool Both Had Good Flows

Vote-GangstarShit

GangsStarShit 11-10-04 03:50 AM

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Terumoto 11-10-04 05:12 AM

This was feedback posted for JPoll
 
This was a good battle... no time to vote...

just checkin polls n shit

GangsStarShit 11-10-04 07:40 AM

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K.ontroverz.Y 11-10-04 07:42 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

i give this Gss...because he had punches...jpoll u had alot of fillers mayn..i know u my boia nd all but i gotta be honest..that wasnt that hot...gss atleast had sum decent punches.....both structures was garbage although i fellt jpolls more.....but gss had better peersonals punches and..it was just worded better

vote:GSS

GangsStarShit 11-10-04 11:10 AM

More votes gimmie gimmie gimmie...................

3rd-Shift 11-10-04 12:07 PM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

poll ur structure was terrible...im not a fan of periods but i have an open mind but damn that was horrible...poll ur flow was nice no hat but GSS gets this....ya linez was ok structure was decent it was jus an overall better verse....and poll.....the link didnt even work.....lol

vote/GSS

distilled 11-10-04 07:53 PM

Voted For: JPoll

Checkin deez polls .

distilled 11-10-04 07:55 PM

Shit!

I didnt vote, no crew votes, sorry bout that, just checkin how shit was doin

4fil 11-10-04 10:49 PM

This was feedback posted for JPoll
 
You're a gangstar fan? well learn how to fucking spell...
You like dickriding the wackness of interscope...
...................................trust me its real hard to tell
^^^mmm, average intro, nothing specail
Even with your signature you can tell of your herbocity...
Am I the best, yes, and your rv's benzino?
..............................likely hood is more then possibly...
^^^ha! nice
Your wack face it before you answer to any more posts...
You should go the www.playedverses.com instead of rv...
...........because I hear they have your fave icp as hosts...
^^yeah.... nice!
All i have to say is he free'd his verse in 6 minutes...
Thats laughable because this whole site knew I won..
.....................................before he even finished...
^^^lol haha, its funny as but its self glorifying, o well its good
Shouldn't have answered my call out with stupidity...
But I guess thats what 'Bush 4 life voters'...
...........................will think for the rest of infinity....
^^^^haaaa lol nice closer, i have to give this to jpoll cause his verse was alot better with some good humur in it but got to say jpoll.. flow!!!! you are using the...eg
lalallalalalalaalalalallalalalalalalalallalalaalla la wack..
............................................. ill kill this cat
your lines are obiosly stretched so you put in the
...............................................
to even them out, doesnt really make much differnece cause you were going to win this battle anyway but just to let you no you should get rid of that habit.
peace.....

GangsStarShit 11-11-04 03:52 AM

Konvex...you know when posting feedback...it's important to COMMENT on the other guys verse...anyway /\.

GangsStarShit 11-11-04 07:38 AM

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OrEo da cookie 11-11-04 09:23 AM

Voted For: GangsStarShit

gss got this battle,
whoa his punches hit way harder,
had i think one multi,
gots some creativity,
my favorite line
Ya shit slacks like lax* ya audios at best disgraceful so why bother,
So it's gettin warmer in Canada...don't mean u gonn get hotter,

battles are better when they funny and gss you had this one no doubt
return the favor


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