...Xclusive... vs Epic
 

Battle Rules:

10-19 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Crew Battle
No Beef

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 11-14-04 at 11:26 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-04 11:27 PM.

is this for the pink battle?..................cuz if not then tell me why i should accept this

o and i aint writing 10-19 bars thats to much for a text battle...so its 8-12 reset the battle...or i will...

>l. Yea This Is For Tha Pink Battle Naw 8-12 Is Small Talk Cuzzin How About 10-14 Then????

...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 07:11 PM.

10-14 bars is still way to many 20 lines hell no...how about like i do 10 lines thats good enough fuck

10 Lines Lol That's Like Newbie Shit Lmao Naw 10-14 Fam

Epic gets “emotional” when oreo signs on to rapverse…
Thats why they joined forces so they’d be a “happy” curse…
Then catches a disease from oreo named the mad cow disease…
Now can no longer squeeze a shit out then ur eyes turn Chinese…
Pink is for “goofs” and then you try to wear it every damn day…
Who do you think ur pulling a steveO from “jackass”, im right eh…
Da R.I.P we da undead you “cant” fuck with us you useless maggot…
Nothing “can” hurt the undead and that’s why your such a faggot…
The reason why you go with a “ridiculous” colour is becuz ur poor…
Your rhymes are “pathetic” that’s the reason and soon many more…

uppin............................................. .......

Voted For: Epic

vote=epic
epic got my vote because the oreo lines in there it's played you and oreo's beef dont got a part of this more like you dissin oreo more then you dissin epic,epic's vocab was decent i like his multis structure was decent i felt how the flow was arising

Kids A Joke Recycle More Lines Then Fucking Collage Rule Paper
Imma Sit Back And Wait Cuzz I'll Elivate To Tha Top Like A Sky Scraper
^^
good line kind of stretched tho but it was a decent line i liked it

Kid's Not A "Head" How Is It When He's Straight "Pussy"
Had To Dq Votes Cuzz He Couldnt Beat Oreo Tha Cookie
^^
pretty good line one of the best you spit but not the best you spit

this next line was a killer

Kid's Empire's Long Lost Son Now How Wack-Is-That?
White With A Hat? Sorry Kid But Uh..........Black-Is-Back
^^^
i think that line is what hurt his feeling lol empire line was dope
yo keep it up

"...Xclusive..." Your Nothing Get "X'ed" Out No Excuses
Lyriclly Your Fuckes Cuzz My Rhymes Is Abusive
And'll Put Your RV Career To A Thing Called Conclusive
It's An Elusive But You Winning This Battle Is An Illusive
^^
multis came good vocabulary was nice that "x" line was hard
yo thats another line that killed it

...xclusive...

Epic gets emotional when oreo signs on to rapverse
Thats why they joined forces so theyd be a happy curse
^^
yo the oreo lines is played son take it some where else

Then catches a disease from oreo named the mad cow disease
Now can no longer squeeze a shit out then ur eyes turn Chinese¦
^^
decent line best line of it all good shit son best line of whole verse

Da R.I.P we da undead you "cant" fuck with us you useless maggot
Nothing "can" hurt the undead and that's why your such a faggot
^^
never made sence son maggots eat the dead so there for you
gave him an advatage that line was an advantage for him

Pink is for goofs and then you try to wear it every damn day…
Who do you think ur pulling a steveO from jackass, im right eh...
^^
another good line but i dont think ther wear pink everday yo

over all epics vocab and his structure was murderous lines hit harder
punches wasnt really on for both of yall or word play but X had some metas
nice shit but his vocabulary was recycled faggot he alwasy uses fag or faggot in his lines
epic came with something fresh and multis was on target some good shit yo
but i see none of you followed the rules bad yo strobe should shut it down
but yall both agreed so yea back to vote........good battle both came good
in some ways...both had good flow

punches=none
vocabulary=epic
multis=epic
metas=...xclusive...
wordplay=not really
flow-both

vote=epic

p.s. if you dq this then we all know your a hater and always dq ppls vote........oh yeah by the way pink is a blood color just to let u know....

^haha i had punches i should of had the mark for them o well nothing to worry about someone who dosent understand complex rapping so w.e uppin..

Hold Up Lemme Guess Cuzz You Gone DQ That Vote Lmao Well It Was Surely Explained Mayn You Forever DQ'Ing Peoples Votes Ahaa........

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 

yo exclusive that is a good verse man, nice punchez, nice structure, good vocabulary and a pretty nice flow, keep that up its a good verse and u a good textee...
epic man ur verse is aiight, but it seems like ur verse has been forced man, some ur lines dont even make sence anyways good battle you to..

What Tha Vocabulary??? Go Look Up THa WOrds Fam Lol

yeah u did have punchez....about oreo....an lemme guess why i don't understand complez rapping....cuz i voted 4 epic rite...an i'm pretty sure i understand a lot more about rap then u do....cuz u said my alias wuz dope....ahh u even wunted my alias in ur crew

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

The Reason I came to this decision:

Epic:you started off short..but it just got better
as Iread on..I liked the collage ruled line..but that
head and pussy line..is one dumbass line..for real..
I mean you sayin he's NOT a dick?////anyway it fucked
up the rest of your verse..for a good building..
you need all good bricks..that bricked tore it down..

Xclusive:you had a score of 7.5/10 in all your lines
so it left me with comfort..so it was consistant
and Epic had some real good and some rea bad,,
and thats just sad..you win hoe

and who was that?....................................uppin

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 

knock pink out the box.............................

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iight yall uppiiiinnnn.......................

iiight uupin for votes!!!!!!

uppin this battle!!!!...........

uppin for votes comon yall vote up holla!!!!!

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Voted For: ...Xclusive...

Parallel - good spit man, you ripped that kat apart, good flow and hard punches.

Best Line - The reason why you go with a “ridiculous” colour is becuz ur poor…
Your rhymes are “pathetic” that’s the reason and soon many more…

Worst Line - Da R.I.P we da undead you “cant” fuck with us you useless maggot…
Nothing “can” hurt the undead and that’s why your such a faggot…

Epic - iight verse you had a good vocab, and good multi's but not many good punches.

Best Line - "...Xclusive..." Your Nothing Get "X'ed" Out No Excuses
Lyriclly Your Fuckes Cuzz My Rhymes Is Abusive

Worst Line - Kid's Not A "Head" How Is It When He's Straight "Pussy"
Had To Dq Votes Cuzz He Couldnt Beat Oreo Tha Cookie

OVERALL - good battle here, my vote goes to Parallel cuz he just punched the shit outta Epic. Epic you had a good flow and verse but you just didnt have any punches that were good in there.

Vote - Parallel

uppin............................................. .

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

epic:

"...Xclusive..." Your Nothing Get "X'ed" Out No Excuses
Lyriclly Your Fuckes Cuzz My Rhymes Is Abusive
^^played 3/10
And'll Put Your RV Career To A Thing Called Conclusive
It's An Elusive But You Winning This Battle Is An Illusive
^^decent multies wack punch 4/10
Kid's Empire's Long Lost Son Now How Wack-Is-That?
White With A Hat? Sorry Kid But Uh..........Black-Is-Back
Lyrics Intact You Back Thaat Will Crack Ya Brain Threw Ya Hat
^^ehh decent for the first 2 lines 3rd one made it wack 5/10
Infact My Lines Will Interact With Your Punny Little Brain
That Will Change Ya Game Make You Pre-fix You Gay Name
^^ehh 5/10
Kid's Not A "Head" How Is It When He's Straight "Pussy"
Had To Dq Votes Cuzz He Couldnt Beat Oreo Tha Cookie
^^good set up wack punch 4/10
Kids A Joke Recycle More Lines Then Fucking Collage Rule Paper
Imma Sit Back And Wait Cuzz I'll Elivate To Tha Top Like A Sky Scraper
^^first line good second one self glorified and wack 6/10

overall : 27/60 (45%)

parallel:



Epic gets “emotional” when oreo signs on to rapverse…
Thats why they joined forces so they’d be a “happy” curse…
^^wack 4/10
Then catches a disease from oreo named the mad cow disease…
Now can no longer squeeze a shit out then ur eyes turn Chinese…
^^lmao 2nd line was so stupid it was hilarious 7/10
Pink is for “goofs” and then you try to wear it every damn day…
Who do you think ur pulling a steveO from “jackass”, im right eh…
^^good wordplay 5/10
Da R.I.P we da undead you “cant” fuck with us you useless maggot…
Nothing “can” hurt the undead and that’s why your such a faggot…
^^wack 4/10
The reason why you go with a “ridiculous” colour is becuz ur poor…
Your rhymes are “pathetic” that’s the reason and soon many more…
^^wack closer 5/10

overall : 25/50 (50%)

vote: parallel

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Voted For: ...Xclusive...

aight this the first time i gotta use the break down meth....lol
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opener:.Par
punches:.Par
structure:Par
personals:both
voacb:epic
wordplay:None
humor:epic
closer:Pat
overall:Parallel

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 

jus checkin da polls up on this bitch..

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Voted For: ...Xclusive...

easy win for Parallel because Epic's verse sounded like a freestyle...Epic was braggin more that raggin on his opponent...he should have known it...damn, I rhyme so easy...j/k...neway...Para...i think ur force ur wordplay too much...u don't seem to know what wordplay means...ur punches are complex...but work on wordplay


Vote: Para, by default..>Epic didn't drop a real battle verse to me