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MeN-Iz vs WeeDex
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 ko otherwise first to 4 votes drop your verse...den i'll come with mine Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-13-04 at 09:36 PM Must drop verse in 5000 minutes after check in. |
MeN-Iz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 10:16 AM.
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WeeDex has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 10:28 AM.
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waiting on the arrival of weedex verse................
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Sorry i made you wait.
Against me your destined to fail, when will you learn? Cant test me, your wak. As frail as montgomerie burns Begin sptittin your written shit, take a turn for the worst I got no respect, itl be me with the match burning your hearse Unless you break the curse of this verse and kill me first, - Lets face it, you couldn’t even kill time if you was a nurse and we all feel fine. With these rhymes, your mine. Theres no denying or hiding from facts Just face it your disgraceful and that’s that. You nothing great, just a prize winning plonka Only elevating you’ll ever do is with willy wonka! So just lay down while I get on ya and stomp ya! Wont stomp with my foot, in fact I wont even look By hook or by crook, Il type blind with closed eyes and still make you look shite! A joint effort to liberate the place with copious dope Only you in lockdown will deliberately drop the soap Bent over naked for ages, waiting in hope Feel a little tingle from a touch. Fantasy of the pope! That’s fucking sick man, you must be on crack! Little rat, on your bike and hit the road jack and don’t you come back no more, you whore, your words are a bore. You see Michael Jackson as a figure how some see mum I see men-iz a silly gay mess with a hungry bum Sick stories, of dicks glory and licking your Lovely cum! –(eerrghh) |
styles unkown-disrespectin me?ya betta check ya tone-before ya get left alone,
hes probaly comfortable with that,cuz nobody let him in his crew and tried to start his own, tryna mess with the best?dude must be possessed-cuz this battles a no contest, leave em physically stressed, you'll think weedex is bein "sent-to-his-grave"-the way i put em to "rest", So whos next? cuz im more than happy to take this win against weedex, cuz im "sweepin-up-this-board", like cleaning my "computer-desk", |
damn dude....your shit is too long.....notice that i put 6 lines...that means 3 bars....cut some of our shit off so it reaches the limit
vote up peepz |
oh shit......i just read the rules....im comin wit four more lines in :)
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[B][COLOR=BLACK][SIZE=1]dunt worry about your verse....i just needed to change mine....heres my full verse
styles unkown-disrespectin me?ya betta check ya tone-before ya get left alone, hes probaly comfortable with that,cuz nobody let him in his crew and he tried to start his own,(1) tryna mess with the best?dude must be possessed-cuz this battles a no contest, leave em physically stressed, you'll think weedex is bein "sent-to-his-grave"-the way i put em to "rest",(2) killin this prosc,he unable to withstand my words,the punches it to sick, cause it must be "masturbation-in-my-bed" the way im "beatin-this-dick",(3) So whos next? cuz im more than happy to take this win against weedex, cuz im "sweepin-up-this-board", like cleaning my "computer-desk",(4) verse to weak,wit punches like that you dug urself in a big hole, cause i could already predict this victory like the "2001 superbowl",(ravens vs giants, u know ravens already had that) |
Woah bruv, you havin problems there mate>?
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Voted For: WeeDex
weedex haad more punches aand they came hard. good verse weedex. men you need some more punches and you need to make your drop longer. peace and return a favor in my sig. vote=WeeDex Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
his vote does not count
"men you need some more punches and you need to make your drop longer"-Legend its obvious he didnt read the full version of my verse....so 0-0 .......and peoples.......PLEASE READ THE FULL VERSION OF MY VERSE....DO NOT READ THE FIRST ONE AND THINK THATS IT........THANK YOU uppin............................................. ......... |
Voted For: MeN-Iz
MeN-Iz - iight verse.. you had some multi's and an alright flow wit some good punches. Best Line - tryna mess with the best?dude must be possessed-cuz this battles a no contest, leave em physically stressed, you'll think weedex is bein "sent-to-his-grave"-the way i put em to "rest", Worst Line - NONE WeeDex - iight spit man, I have seen better from ya.. but good flow. Best Line - Against me your destined to fail, when will you learn? Cant test me, your wak. As frail as montgomerie burns Worst Line - You see Michael Jackson as a figure how some see mum I see men-iz a silly gay mess with a hungry bum Sick stories, of dicks glory and licking your Lovely cum! OVERALL - close battle, but I think MeN-Iz won this battle. He just had a more creative verse and had stronger punches. WeeDex I know you can do better then that.. next time throw some personals and multis in there. Vote - MeN-Iz RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159745 |
Voted For: MeN-Iz
i think men-iz took this one with harder punches and better structure. his stuff made more since, and i think that he was more prepared for this battle...i liked some of ur multies too... weedex had a nice verse also, but alot of lines on here, i wasnt feeling. some of ur punches didnt hit that hard,but u had nice structure...men-iz was just tha better one in this... and yall need to return the vote...HONEST Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Thanks for the votes people....uppin
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Voted For: MeN-Iz
men-iz won this because of his multies...his flow...his personals...and his betta stucture and wordplay... men-iz: i felt wut u were sayin...i could understand it and it was easy to read...you had betta multies...your punches hit harder...you had way more personals...your flow was consistent... weedex: liked the verse...but your flow was a little off...i saw a lot of good punchlines...but none of them were personals...personals will always win battles...ur structure was good...and it was pretty easy to read...but i did get lost in a couple places...u got hella potential though... v/ men-iz ~1~ |
Some peeps aint getting me in this verse, need to up fro more votes.
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It would be nice to get some votes
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This was feedback posted for WeeDex
WTF???
hell nah DQ this battle without a winner cuz men-iz thought u wanted 6 lines and aint notice the unlimited.... WHY DA FUCK YA DO UNLIMITED BATTLES THAT SHIT SUCKS.... no-one wants to read u'r storys keep it short N sweet.... DQ this battle plez... that aint fair at all.. 24 lines agenist 6 WTF??? |
oooo i notice he add it extra bars.....
but when u vote u wont notice those extra bars but whatever.... he is still up 3-1 muahahahahaha....... V.T |
Voted For: WeeDex
yo i gotta give it to u..u had good flow,nice vocab, its tight man men-z aint have shit on u dawg...so thurr u go Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^^ offical dick ryder........
also a offical alis.... tell us who u are.... |
whos the stalker now IE, stay the fuck out my thread.
And read the whole thing befor you run your mouth. Plus it aint my fault if meniz cant remember the rules he posted himself, we all do it time to time |
wtf? it said 6 lines.....and ur ass wrote 60...imma get this battled DQ'ed....and u have a bunch of dickryders goin for u......JJflowsum
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uppin this. fuck wat is going on????????????????????????????? how can he be ahead??????
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once again meniz dipshit,
you wrote the rules as 6 - unlimited lines. Maybe you have a problem understanding what that means. Stop listening to IE, your a dumb ass. You are wasted with Violent Type anyway, maybe you should join PINK |
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