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jmsbnd07655 vs jwillp
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-10-04 at 07:34 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 04:35 PM.
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JwillP has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 04:49 PM.
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here it is 6 quick
you better have only done six, thats what we agreed on! Bond, thats laughable like naming yourself mr. ill... I see now, its because your writtens have 0.07% skill... I'm a vet, this alias was just created for laughs... Cause your writtens are like obease nudist colonies takin group baths... You won't get what you want, that love and affection.. Because from this site all you'll find is a back door, called REJECTION! |
yo, you couldnt sign in, cuz your wack rhymin failed your connection,
i bring rhymes to the table, completely stable, that are close to perfection, listen up closely man, you jus messin, im teachin you lyrical lessons, you obviously need help, you can tell, cuz im takin you out in this lyrical session, without any questions yo man, im gettin you lyrically vexed, peeps cant wait for whats next, cuz i thrill them like the movie "Triple X" once i've finished writin this, your flows just gonna be historical, your diabolical yo, you think you beat me? dont answer, look up the meaning of rhetorical! |
damn, i did slightly more, cuz i thought that u wud do more, becuz i forgot to change it!
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u wanna do 2 more lines and post it???????????????
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uppin uppinxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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uppin for the easy win,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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yo, havent had 1 vote yet. UPPIN..................
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Voted For: JwillP
Yo bond this was good but, sturcture was shit homie tho, like one sentence scrambled jus over one line and then the other one was half a line work on that, yo JwillP, haha at the 0.07 line, and the rejection, structure hot......yo bond u asked 4 an honest vote.....i gave it to u...no hate |
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Voted For: jmsbnd07655
LMAO nice homie..... goodpunches...rhymes an flow overall.. |
Voted For: JwillP
yo, you couldnt sign in, cuz your wack rhymin failed your connection, i bring rhymes to the table, completely stable, that are close to perfection, nice for a song not for a battle listen up closely man, you jus messin, im teachin you lyrical lessons, you obviously need help, you can tell, cuz im takin you out in this lyrical session, without any questions vocab is a yes! yo man, im gettin you lyrically vexed, peeps cant wait for whats next, cuz i thrill them like the movie "Triple X" hell naw once i've finished writin this, your flows just gonna be historical, your diabolical yo, you think you beat me? dont answer, look up the meaning of rhetorical! ok Breadwon-nice vocab throughout the whole verse...no punches personals or anything like that...this verse look like it need to be in a song somewhere not in a battle Bond, thats laughable like naming yourself mr. ill... I see now, its because your writtens have 0.07% skill... haha...nice I'm a vet, this alias was just created for laughs... Cause your writtens are like obease nudist colonies takin group baths... haha LMAO...........can't...........breath........... You won't get what you want, that love and affection.. Because from this site all you'll find is a back door, called REJECTION! ok breakdown-pretty short which i hate cuz it keeps me wanting more...but nice verse...real funni....fell off wit the rejection line...overal real nice The Choosen one has spoken |
thanx for votin. uppin this.......................
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uppin this, c'mon people..........................
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Voted For: JwillP
Bond, thats laughable like naming yourself mr. ill... I see now, its because your writtens have 0.07% skill... ^^okish I'm a vet, this alias was just created for laughs... Cause your writtens are like obease nudist colonies takin group baths... ^^gay You won't get what you want, that love and affection.. Because from this site all you'll find is a back door, called REJECTION! ^^okish vs. yo, you couldnt sign in, cuz your wack rhymin failed your connection, i bring rhymes to the table, completely stable, that are close to perfection, ^^no, self glory listen up closely man, you jus messin, im teachin you lyrical lessons, you obviously need help, you can tell, cuz im takin you out in this lyrical session, without any questions ^^no diss yo man, im gettin you lyrically vexed, peeps cant wait for whats next, cuz i thrill them like the movie "Triple X" once i've finished writin this, your flows just gonna be historical, your diabolica ^^no, self glory and plain statements yo, you think you beat me? dont answer, look up the meaning of rhetorical! ^^filler no hate, you just both need to come with actual disses and wit lol VOTE ON ONE OF THE BATTLES IN MY SIG, THANKS |
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Voted For: jmsbnd07655
this vote goes to one mic, both had great verses but overall one mic had him in punches and personals good battle though v/mone mic |
thanx man, uppin this shit........................
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Voted For: JwillP
yo, you couldnt sign in, cuz your wack rhymin failed your connection, i bring rhymes to the table, completely stable, that are close to perfection, 4...good flow n all...but you ain't dissin well..self glorifing here too listen up closely man, you jus messin, im teachin you lyrical lessons, you obviously need help, you can tell, cuz im takin you out in this lyrical session, without any questions 3....no punch....seems u focusin on flow to much yo man, im gettin you lyrically vexed, peeps cant wait for whats next, cuz i thrill them like the movie "Triple X" 3...u talkin bout urself too much as opposed to dissing the oppenent once i've finished writin this, your flows just gonna be historical, your diabolical yo, you think you beat me? dont answer, look up the meaning of rhetorical! 2...u called him diabolical?..wtf...and weak Bond, thats laughable like naming yourself mr. ill... I see now, its because your writtens have 0.07% skill... 4....weak punch I'm a vet, this alias was just created for laughs... Cause your writtens are like obease nudist colonies takin group baths... 5....decent You won't get what you want, that love and affection.. Because from this site all you'll find is a back door, called REJECTION 5...basic..but at least u trew punches OK...Jwillp got this One mic..you didn't diss in that verse.Ur flow was good...and I mean..real good.But the content was shit.I ain't see one good this here.Maybe the interals were forced?..I dunno...but you didn't have a punch.Just simple self glorifing. Vote-Jwillp RTF BELOW....OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207213 |
Voted For: JwillP
One Mic-too much self glorification in ya drop...ya need to elevate fam, no hard punches or personals...a really weak drop Jwill-not all that great of a drop either but you at least had some punches in ya battle, tahts what gave it to ya Vote-Jwill |
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